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Chapter 607: An Expert Is Here to Help You Improve the Script

Taoist Priest Tianyazi felt that he could give a little boost to the young man who wrote the script.

"Ahem." Then the Taoist Master coughed and said, "Little friend, don't you realize that the settings of bronze, silver, and gold are a bit too childish?"

Gao Moumou was shocked. He had been standing in the shade of the villa for a long time, and he didn't even notice that there was someone standing next to him!

As soon as he turned around, he saw the white-haired Taoist with a childish face. Except for some slight wrinkles at the corners of his eyes, there were no traces of time on his face.

This veteran takes really good care of himself!

Moreover, this white-haired Taoist has a good-natured face and makes a particularly good first impression. One glance at him will make people subconsciously feel that he is reliable and approachable.

This is Taoist Priest Tianyazi’s natural aura of kindness, his ability to make strangers have a favorable impression of him by +50!

It is precisely because of this strange affinity that Taoist Priest Tianyazi has continuously found young monks in the past three hundred years, and when he comes into contact with them, he gets their favorability doubled, and finally succeeds Sell ​​your skills to the public!

Now, because of this friendly aura, Gao Moumou felt that this Taoist priest was very popular at a glance.

If that's the case, it doesn't hurt to listen to the Taoist priest's opinion!

"Hello, Taoist Master." Gao Moumou, in front of other Taoist priests, set cultivators into three levels: bronze, silver, and gold. Is it a bit strange? However, he is making a movie, and he is not trying to popularize science with others. As long as the setting is interesting, the rest doesn't matter.

"Although I know, little friend, you are going to write a script for a movie... I'm sorry, little friend, I have been listening to you talking to yourself just now, so I have a general idea." The white-haired Taoist said to Gao Moumou He arched his hands and said.

"It's okay, Taoist Priest. Besides, what I just wrote is just a setting." Gao Moumou smiled softly and said: "Then Taoist Priest, how should I set the monk's level?"

Taoist Priest Tianyazi continued: "At least it can't be too casual. I feel that level one, level two, level three, level four and so on are pretty good!"

Gao Moumou: "..."

It's not as good as my bronze, silver, gold, and at most platinum, diamond, master, and king.

"No way?" Taoist priest Tianyazi could tell from Gao Moumou's face that his proposal was scumbag.

Totally unacceptable.

Gao Moumou nodded sincerely: "The first and second grades will remind me of the primary school student system, first grade, second grade and third grade, and so on."

Taoist priest Tianyazi: "..."

After a while, the Taoist priest gritted his teeth and said, "Then change to the first grade. First grade, second grade, third grade. Is that okay?"

Gao Moumou silently glanced at the Taoist Priest. In addition to numerical grades, couldn't this Taoist priest think of a more distinctive concept of hierarchy?

That's all, first-grade, second-grade, third-grade, etc., just write them down.

When the time comes, let Shuhang and Miss Yu Jiaojiao discuss whether they need metal series levels or digital series levels.

Therefore, Gao Moumou recorded the ‘level’ setting in his notebook.

Taoist Priest Tianyazi was immediately satisfied. As long as the young man changed the setting of the cultivation level, his goal would be achieved.

Logically speaking, Taoist Priest Tianyazi, who has achieved his goal, should retire with success.

But I don’t know why... Unknowingly, Taoist Priest Tianyazi started talking to Gao Moumou about the plot of the story.

Looking back, Tianyazi himself feels incredible!

Obviously, he just wanted to mention the concept of 'cultivation level' set by this young man at the beginning.

But for some reason, he felt that the young man in front of him was very talkative. While the two were chatting, they started talking about how to write the plot.

Tianyazi has never written any novels, but he has rich life experiences!

As long as a little bit of his rich life experience is revealed, Gao will be greatly inspired.

for example……

Tianyazi said: "I just saw my little friend writing the setting. He said that he wanted to write a touching story? And the protagonist must be very tragic, the kind that makes people sympathize with him?"

"Exactly, does the Taoist priest have any suggestions for making the protagonist more miserable?" Gao Moumou asked. As he chatted with the Taoist priest longer and longer, he had great admiration for the white-haired Taoist priest. With rich experience and unique vision, he can get more inspiration every time he gives guidance.

"Actually, when I just heard what you said about the main character's first love sister marrying someone else, I thought of a Taoist friend from the sect next door to me a long time ago. His experience was impressive." Tianyazi sighed deeply and recalled what happened back then.

Once people get older, they especially like to 'think about the past'.

"Back then, a fellow Taoist from the sect next door to me was very similar to the protagonist in your story, little friend. He had a junior sister who was in love with each other. The two had been in love for more than ten years. But suddenly something happened One day, my junior sister was going to marry another man under the arrangement of her elders. Moreover, the wedding will be held in a few days."

"At that time, my junior sister said to that Taoist friend: Come to me on my wedding day. As long as you come, I will give up everything and worship with you."

"However, two days before Junior Sister's wedding, my Taoist friend rushed to the wedding venue, ready to do everything he could to stop Junior Sister's wedding! However, on the way, he encountered a rioting... Then he was seriously injured by the beast and was in a coma for several days. When he finally recovered and went to find his junior sister, she was already married to another man. "

Speaking of this, Tian Yazi lamented that it would be fine if the 'monster' back then was a conspiracy. But later he went to check for the fellow Taoist and found that the appearance of the violent monster was really just a coincidence.

All I can say is that God’s will plays tricks on people.

After sighing, Taoist Priest Tianyazi said: "I'm thinking that you can modify this paragraph and substitute it for the senior sister in your script."

"Great, great. In this way, when the male protagonist loses his senior sister due to an accident, the heart-wrenching regret and the sadness of the Lushan Waterfall will definitely move many people to tears. ." Gao wrote vigorously and quickly recorded in his notebook.

Taoist priest Tianyazi nodded with a smile, and then added: "In addition, I feel that if the protagonist's sadness is to be turned into a force of revenge, the degree of sadness is far from enough if the senior sister and his wife die. Moreover, the love between children leads to The pattern of grief and anger is too small. You can be more generous and directly let the protagonist's entire sect be wiped out by the 'evil mysterious force'. Only in this way can the protagonist's inner grief and anger be stimulated to the greatest extent! In this way, the plot can also be not limited to The love, hatred and resentment of the children of a small family are suddenly promoted to the grand scene of a family, country and sect! The pattern has improved a lot."

"What the Taoist said was great." Gao Moumou felt that he had met a good teacher and friend. How could a dead lover compare to a dead family?

Taoist priest Tianyazi continued with a slight smile: "Actually, we can also give the protagonist a disease of 'coughing up blood'. When he is extremely sad, a slight cough will turn out red blood. This will arouse the sympathy of the audience."

"Excellent, excellent, excellent!" Gao Moumou quickly recorded it.

In this way, Gao Moumou and Taoist Priest Tianyazi went further and further away on the topic of 'abuse of the master', and there was no turning back.

When Song Shuhang and Yu Jiaojiao returned to the villa, they saw the white-haired Taoist Priest and Gao Moumou chatting happily under the scorching sun.

This scene is simply hellish.

Yu Jiaojiao said in shock: "No, I thought the cultivator had let you go, but I didn't expect him to be so persistent that he came all the way to my house. You have to wait and see."

As expected of the legendary ‘Kung Fu Madman’, he is not so easy to deal with. It is said that all young monks who are favored by the Chuan Gong Maniac will accept the ‘Kung Fu’ from the Chuan Gong Maniac.

Could it be that Song Shuhang couldn't escape this disaster in the end?

"Should we escape back to the villa?" Song Shuhang asked.

But it was too late. The white-haired Taoist Priest Tianyazi in front had already sensed Song Shuhang and Yu Jiaojiao. He turned his head and smiled at them.

That smile, to Shuhang and Yu Jiaojiao, was absolutely 'alluring to the city and the country', because everyone in the city and country would be scared to death by this smile...

Tian Yazi stopped laughing and saluted Song Shuhang with his hands raised: "Little brother, we meet again."

Song Shuhang smiled bitterly and returned the gift: "Taoist Priest, you are so persistent."

"Ahem, actually the old Taoist is not that persistent." Tian Yazi blushed and explained: "Actually, the old Taoist was entrusted by someone to find my little friend... Huh?"

Halfway through his words, Tian Yazi saw the big bag in Song Shuhang's hand. There are a lot of meat buns inside.

This smell is undoubtedly the Roujiamo made by 'Bie Xue Fairy'.

This little fellow Taoist actually went to the fish head shop to buy meat buns?

Then did he meet Fairy Bie Xue?

Gao Moumou on the side asked in confusion: "Shuhang, do you know this Taoist priest?"

Song Shuhang nodded and sighed: "In the morning, I went out to pick up a courier, and wanted to buy you some food on the way. Then on the way, I met this Taoist priest."

Then, Shuhang asked Tian Yazi again: "The Taoist priest just said that he was entrusted by someone? Who is looking for me?"

Tian Yazi looked at the big bag in Shuhang's hand and smiled mysteriously.

The person who asked me to find you has already met you.

Just as Taoist Priest Tianyazi was about to say this, suddenly, he seemed to have been hit by something. His whole body suddenly flew out, and he was knocked back nearly ten meters!

Along the way, a sapling was also broken.

The Taoist priest heard painful groans.

what happened?

Song Shuhang blinked, why was the Taoist priest suddenly knocked away? Who is attacking in the dark?

Gao Moumou was confused. Did he fly out in such an exaggerated manner? Was he hit by a ten-ton truck? However, he didn't see anything hitting the white-haired Taoist. (To be continued.)

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