Chapter 680 Interrupting the Trophy

"What?" Du Ziyuan looked innocent, as if he didn't understand what Cai Zishi was talking about.

This is the most annoying. It looks like someone wants to beat him.

However, Cai Zishi had nothing to do with him, so he started to comment: "I can only say that I am worthy of being the direct disciple of Master Shanfeng. Whether it is the creativity of the story, the exquisiteness of the picture, or the development of the plot, it is impeccable. A little bit, many details are not fully described. I think you can draw 200 pages of content in your 30 pages, so that the development of feelings will be more natural. However, considering that this is a 24-hour limited-time creation after all, if you really want to detail If it is transformed, the integrity of the story cannot be guaranteed, so this shortcoming is understandable.”

"Thank you, Director Cai, for your comment," Du Ziyuan answered immediately, and he said to Xia An, "Director Cai has made it very clear just now, your painting skills are undoubtedly your biggest advantage, which is a good job, and Among all the disciples, your sense of camera is also the best, so Director Cai did not criticize this aspect, but the problem is still there, this competition does not restrict you to choose materials, it mainly depends on how you integrate yourself, you obviously It’s just that the mind is too big, and you only want to take out good things, but you find that the time is too tight, so you force it. You can actually draw better with this subject.”

"Thank you teacher for your comment." Xia An bowed again.

In the final score, Xia An received 887 points from the audience and 100 points from the instructor. Du Ziyuan still didn't agree.

Yan Lingtian, who was on the side, said in amazement: "No way, can't works of this level get 100 points from Mr. Shanfeng? It's really strict."

Du Ziyuan shook his head: "I don't look at their works, but what they have done in the past 24 hours. I know how much resources Xia An has. It's really not enough for her to do this."

Xia An was too impatient. The setting, foreshadowing and climax of "Sword Art Online" obviously couldn't be covered in just 30 pages. If she insisted on showing it, it would only affect the rhythm of the story, so Du Ziyuan didn't give it any points.

Not getting Du Ziyuan's 100 points made Xia An feel a little disappointed and returned to her seat. Seeing her like this, she seemed to be about to cry. Seeing this, Yan Lingtian immediately ran down to comfort his students, but was pushed away by Xia An in disgust.

This scene was naturally noticed by Du Ziyuan: [Damn, this Yan Lingtian is trying to kidnap my apprentice, right? How old is he? 】

He suddenly had a feeling of "I worked so hard to raise my daughter until she was 15 years old, but suddenly a 40-year-old uncle came and tried to steal vegetables".

The key point is that this uncle is so handsome, super rich and famous, this is what little girls can't resist the most.

【No, I have to discuss it with Xiaomei when I go back. Did I break Yan Lingtian's leg? Or interrupt his trophy? 】

Yan Lingtian, who was smiling awkwardly at Xia An, suddenly felt a chill hit his back, and couldn't help shivering. "Strange? Why do you suddenly have an ominous premonition?"

After Si Xingwei and Xia An, this time it was the turn of the Yanlingtian team to come out first.

Their team sent an old man in his 60s named Fang Ling. This uncle is also a strange thing in this competition. The other contestants are young and young, and few are over 30 years old, but he looks old, and he is so amazing that he was selected.

Du Ziyuan didn't know him, but according to Yan Lingtian and Cai Zishi, this man had made some achievements in the field of painting, but he didn't expect him to want to change careers at his age.

Fang Ling has painted ink painting for most of his life, and his skills are naturally not bad, but it is really difficult to switch from ink painting to ordinary pen comics, so he simply did not switch, and directly drew comics with ink.

Naturally, ink painting can also be drawn with fine brushwork, and the painting style is also suitable for manga. It is this uniqueness that made him shortlisted for 16 people.

The work Fang Ling brought this time is a story of fairy tales, but he gave full play to the concept of the word "man". In this comic of his, Immortal Cultivation is no longer serious, but more of a daily routine. It's like an elder who exploded in alchemy, made an afro head and changed his job to become a hairdresser in a whimsical way, or like a swordsman who worked hard to practice swordsmanship just to improve his carving skills.

"It's a very interesting story." This time, Du Ziyuan was the first to comment. "The structure is complete and the picture is exquisite. It is very rare to be able to draw this level of painting with a brush. The only pity is probably doing this work." The quantity is too big, and the value for money is not enough.”

In 24 hours, Fang Ling only produced 13 pages of comics. He may be trying to keep improving, but too few pages can be regarded as a flaw in the comics.

Cai Zishi also commented: "It is indeed very creative. I couldn't help laughing out at such a cartoon just now. There may be room for further improvement in the segmentation of the camera, but I think it is already very good."

In the end, Fang Ling got 612 points from the audience and 200 points from the instructor.

Du Ziyuan finally gave his first approval. It happened to be the one with the lowest rating from the audience, which made everyone puzzled.

Sure enough, what Mr. Shanfeng sees is different from ordinary people?

Fang Ling originally got a low rating from the audience, but relying on the ratings from his instructors, he insisted on pulling it back, which put some pressure on the Songzi team.

After thinking about it for a while, Songzi decided to play their ace too.

Yunting is here!

When the youngest little princess appeared on stage, many gentlemen shouted from the audience. After all, Xiao Yunting is so cute, and her paintings are beautiful, so her popularity is naturally rising.

It is conceivable that when the show is broadcast, she will definitely become an internet-famous cartoonist, even if she doesn't draw and only shows cuteness, she can earn enough popularity.

Of course, her professional ability is not low. After all, Du Ziyuan often prescribes small things for her, otherwise, Song Zi would not have regarded her as a trump card.

"What will Yun Ting's work look like? Let's watch the big screen together!"

There is only one character on the entire cover, and that is a teenager with skin as black as a lump of carbon, a nostril so big that an onion can be inserted, and a crescent scar between his eyebrows.

"Young Bao Zheng Incident Book"!

This is Yunting's work.

"Damn it! You guys have an appointment, right?" Du Ziyuan couldn't help complaining. He was thinking, these guys should all take out what he gave this round, right?

However, compared to "Sword Art Online", "Shaobao" is obviously more suitable for the 24-hour creation mechanism.

And Yun Ting is also smarter. What she drew is not the beginning, but a very classic plot cut from the middle.