Chapter 679 "Sword Art Online"

Compared to Cai Zishi, Du Ziyuan was obviously stricter.

"The modus operandi is a bit simple, but considering the 24-hour creative time, it's not bad to be able to come up with such a modus operandi, but..." Du Ziyuan turned a pen in his hand, and said, "We didn't do it this time. Set a theme for everyone, you can draw whatever you want, that is to say, even the ideas you have a long time ago can be used, it depends on how you integrate them within 24 hours, this comic exposes a point It’s just that your past accumulation seems to be lacking.”

"The rhythm is just as Director Cai said, very good, the plot points are quite tight, it is an excellent comic, but the last reversal is a bit reluctant to be honest, and the foreshadowing in front is a bit lacking. If you can continue I think it would be better to add some foreshadowing in front of it. In the end, the aspect of drawing... To be honest, as a manga artist who has become a half-way monk, this is already considered good, but compared with other contestants, this point of yours will become the biggest disadvantage. , I hope you can understand."

After hearing this, Si Xingwei's expression was a little heavy. After all, what Du Ziyuan said was on point, and his shortcomings were not covered up in front of Du Ziyuan, and he could see them all at a glance. Normally, he would be very happy to be instructed like this, but now it's a competition, and Du Ziyuan's comments still have a great impact on his score.

In the final scoring session, Si Xingwei scored 615 points from the audience, 100 points from the instructor, and a total score of 715.

Among the tutors, Cai Zishi gave 100 points, but Du Ziyuan didn't.

Cai Zishi looked at Du Ziyuan: "I think it's okay."

Du Ziyuan shook his head: "I don't think so."

Hearing his answer, Cai Zishi could only helplessly shrug his shoulders towards the camera: "Teacher Shanfeng is really strict."

Next, it was the Yanlingtian team's turn to play. And their debut character is actually the trump card - Xia An!

No one thought that she would be the first to come out, no matter how you look at it, she is also the last big axis! ?

Song Zi looked at Yan Lingtian suspiciously: "What tricks are you playing?"

Yan Lingtian smiled and said: "That's what she asked for. She said that anyway, the scores have to be added up. It doesn't matter whether her works are written in sequence, and the scores won't change much."

"So confident?" Song Zi opened his mouth, but didn't say much. Du Ziyuan's apprentice is indeed qualified to say this.

"Then, let's take a look at Xia An's work."

Following Tang Junhao's announcement, a beautiful cover appeared on the big screen. The overall picture is brighter, and there is a hundred-story pagoda floating in the painting. In front of the pagoda, a man and a woman are standing back to back in one black and one white battle robes, and the swords in their hands are interlaced to form an "X".

Sword Art Online!

This was the name of the work Xia An produced.

"Oh?" Du Ziyuan was slightly surprised. Although I mentioned to the students that they should show those five works in this competition, I didn't expect Xia An to move so fast.

Xia An drew the new version of "Sword Art Online" written by Sikong Lingling. Although the basic setting is the same, many plots have changed.

Du Ziyuan picked up his Lingguang Jade and flipped through it, only to find that what she took out was only 1 chapter. After all, there is only one day. Even if she and her 4 students rush to work, it is quite good to be able to draw 1 chapter and 30 pages with guaranteed quality. Si Xingwei, who appeared earlier, was worse than her in drawing and only took out 18 pages.

Both the audience and the instructors began to read this work quietly.

The story takes place in an overhead parallel world, which is not much different from Huntianxing, except that the first holographic online game has changed from "Glory" to "Sword Art Online".

Unlike "Glory" produced by Immortal World, "Sword Art Online" is completely made by mortals, so the scale is much smaller.

On the first day of the public beta, there were about 300,000 registered players.

However, no one thought that the genius who developed this game was also a lunatic. He locked everyone's consciousness in the game and asked the players to clear the game, otherwise they would never be able to go offline. And if you die in the game, the real player will also die. Even forcibly taking off the game helmet in reality is not enough.

300,000 people were imprisoned in "Sword Art Online".

The original slogan "If you are a man, go to the 100th floor" has become "If you want to survive, go to the 100th floor".

And it is against this background that Kirito, the male protagonist who participated in the closed beta, resolutely embarked on the road to conquer the 100th floor.

With his rich experience, he quickly upgraded and was ahead of all players.

He has better equipment, stronger skills, and more easter eggs, but the more powerful he becomes, the more empty he feels inside.

A person cannot live alone completely away from society, so he hides his edge, puts on an inconspicuous fashion, and tries to join the team of other players.

Kirito chose the "Blood Alliance" in the first echelon of players. And to join the blood alliance, you must take the entrance examination.

He was assigned to a team of five, and a flaxen-haired girl in the same team caught his attention because the two had met once before.

At that time, she was still a novice, and she was met by Kirito by chance, and he kindly taught her some tricks. Unexpectedly, she was already strong enough to be qualified to join the strongest player team by the time of the goodbye.

The team's target is an elite monster, and the joint strategy of 5 masters should be more than enough. However, Kirito found something was wrong, and he quietly removed some hidden dangers in the dark, avoiding the situation where the elite monsters summoned their parents. Otherwise, what they will face is not just an elite monster, but two big bosses.

In the team, only the flaxen-haired girl was vaguely aware of this, and the other teammates thought he was lazy in other places because he didn't work hard.

This also makes Kirito enter the blood alliance smoothly, but his interpersonal relationship is not very good, and the only person who is willing to make friends with him is only a girl.

He also finally got to know her name, Asuna, a very weird name, but because it's an online name, there's nothing wrong with it.

Being able to make a friend, Kirito is already very satisfied, and his feelings for Asuna are gradually changing.

Until that time, the blood alliance was ready to attack the gatekeeper lord.

The manga ends here. The space is limited, and it is already too much to fit so much content in 30 pages, so the boss who guards the level is naturally out of play.

"It's really passed down in one line." Cai Zishi looked at Du Ziyuan with a look of desire and dissatisfaction that was self-evident.

It's all your fault, what is wrong with teaching, and you actually teach your own disciples to break chapters! Wait to collect the knife!