Chapter 604: Sword Art Online

Gu Jiansha's group drew a funny cartoon, the protagonist is a killer who can never kill people. Each of his missions will fail for one reason or another, which makes a lot of jokes.

As far as the story is concerned, this is the best that Du Ziyuan has seen among the four groups. After all, it is a funny comic, and it does not need to be polished logically. Sometimes it is unreasonable but adds a funny factor.

However, like his younger sister, Gu Jiansha is still lacking in painting and storyboarding. Is it because of separating their siblings? Du Ziyuan always felt that they should not only have this strength.

"Painting: 6 points, 4 points for painting style, 6 points for storyboarding, 7 points for creativity, and 8 points for plot. Your group scored 31 points."

The brothers and sisters had the same score, which made Gu Jiansha heave a sigh of relief.

It was Xia An's last turn. Hers is a "virtual game", and the restriction is that "Glory cannot be used".

To be honest, this group is the hardest. After all, virtual games only appeared in the fairy world, and Du Ziyuan didn't allow them to draw "Glory", so they had to create a new game by themselves, which was quite difficult. But also consider the plot, which is even more difficult.

Xia An trotted and handed the drawing to Du Ziyuan. Du Ziyuan's expression changed after he read the first page.

The game designed by Xia An and the others is based on the theme of military warfare, that is, the two sides act as soldiers and generals in the virtual game, and then fight, annex, and conquer cities. Overall, there is a lack of creativity, because this is equivalent to directly adding a game background to a real war story.

The difference between game wars and real wars is not well expressed. For example, there may be resource points that regularly produce minerals in war games, but their comics do not have this setting.

But what surprised Du Ziyuan was not the stories of their group, but the paintings. To be honest, Du Ziyuan really didn't expect Xia An to be the strongest painting skill among the five personal biographies, and it was a bit too strong.

"Painting: 8 points, 7 points for painting style, 9 points for storyboarding, 4 points for creativity, and 5 points for plot. Your group scored 33 points. Congratulations, you won the first place."

When Du Ziyuan announced the final result, the six members of Xia An's team couldn't help cheering.

"Oh! Win!"

"Did I hear you right? We're number one?"

"Haha! This month is worth it!"

...

In contrast, the other groups were somewhat lost. Especially Jiang Yi and the others, this time they were at the bottom. This made Jiang Yi, who always regarded himself as a big brother and was absolutely confident in his own strength, a little unacceptable.

He came over to Du Ziyuan and said, "Teacher, can I have a look at their paintings?"

"Take it." Du Ziyuan handed him the drawing of Xia An's group.

Yun Ting and the others also came up together, wanting to see what the first-place painting looked like.

A stack of drawings was sorted out page by page, and almost each of the 24 people got one or two. Du Ziyuan's score is very clear. The story of Xia An's group is actually relatively poor. What is really good is the storyboard with a score of 9 and the artist with a score of 8. These are the places where talent is tested the most.

After seeing Xia An's and the others' works, the dissatisfaction on Jiang Yi's face gradually subsided, and the brothers and sisters of the Gu family also showed serious expressions. This gap is too obvious, so obvious that you can clearly feel it just by looking at one page. Yun Ting is probably the most optimistic. She is really just enjoying the comics. When she saw the works of Xia An's group, she praised without hesitation: "Wow! The drawing is so beautiful! It is better than me much stronger."

Xia An said modestly: "This is the result of everyone's hard work."

Du Ziyuan just smiled at this, noncommittal. Although it is a group of 6 people this time, the 5 personal transfers are obviously the core of each group. The painting style of the work is basically determined by them, and the other 5 people are more in the position of assistants.

Du Ziyuan knocked on the table and signaled everyone to pay attention: "Okay, the evaluation is over. I'm not satisfied with your performance this time, but at least I'm not too disappointed. I believe you have seen it. Among the 30, there are only a few who can really write stories, and they are not particularly outstanding. Of course, this problem can be solved by finding a partner in the future, but at least you must have a certain ability to distinguish good stories from bad stories, otherwise you will be caught by a bad story. It’s no fun if the writers are cheated.”

"Painting skills, what you need to hone now is still painting skills. It is best to be able to form your own unique style of painting. Don't just imitate me. My style of painting is always changing. You can't finish learning it. Use it It will not be easy, it is best to find that style in painting again and again. As for the storyboard, I suggest that you watch more excellent spirit shadows and spirit vision dramas, pay attention to avoid bad movies, and see what others think of them. There is quite a lot of knowledge in the use of the lens, when and from what angle is the best."

"Okay, I won't talk nonsense, let's announce the reward for the first place now."

The members of Xia An's team immediately became excited, and the others also looked at Du Ziyuan curiously. Didn't it mean that the reward for the first place is the chance to be serialized on "Xinyue Comics"? Is there anything else.

Du Ziyuan said, "Because your storytelling ability is really bad, so I decided to provide you with an original story. The manga will be released under the name of our cooperation. I am the original work and you are the painters."

"What!" Everyone thought they heard it wrong. Teacher Shanfeng is willing to sign with them! ? This reward is too big!

You know, even if Du Ziyuan does nothing, just hang his pen name on a comic, it can bring unimaginable attention, and the statistics of these attentions converted into sales are quite terrifying.

What's more, Du Ziyuan had to provide them with the original story to make up for their biggest weakness. It's cheap and they are making a lot of money! Even if the merits are divided because of the joint signature, they can still distinguish between 100% of 1 merit and 50% of 100 merit.

The remaining 24 students, including Jiang Yi, all cast envious glances at Xia An's group.

Seeing this, Du Ziyuan smiled and said, "Don't be envious. Now I will give you a task. If you complete it well, I will give you the same reward. It's better to say that I have given you these 5 rewards a long time ago. When you are ready, it depends on when you have the ability to come and get it."

"Really!?" The students immediately became agitated. Being a student of Shanfeng's welfare is really too great!

Du Ziyuan then looked at Xia An's team: "Then, since the theme you drew is 'game', then the original case I'm going to give you is..."

"Sword Art Online."