Chapter 603 Assessment

"Old thief! I won't call you an old thief in the future, okay? Please continue to ship battleships!"

"I have never discovered that I have such a great interest in this kind of war props. Am I destined to become a military god who conquers the world?"

"Ahhhhhh, I'm going to die without a battleship! Please follow up!"

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"Hehe, naive." Du Ziyuan looked at these comments and smiled slightly. I knew that these dead nerds changed their wives faster than changing their clothes. A second ago they were asking him to return his wife's head, and now they are begging him to draw a new wife. I really want to draw a "I always like XXX" emoticon package to ridicule.

But Jian Niang doesn't plan to continue painting, at least in the short term. After all, there are actually only 5 of the more advanced warships in the Trick City, and the others are all mass-produced or not so high in combat effectiveness, that is, they cannot become SSRs. According to Du Ziyuan's plan, he will only do it himself for SSR-class ship girls, and leave the rest to the students.

"Xiao Cui, go help me and call those students over." Du Ziyuan said to Wen Cuilong who was practicing.

"yes."

After a while, Wen Cuilong brought all 30 students to his door. Except for the 5 personal biographies, the other 25 people were full of curiosity about Du Ziyuan's home. After all, this is a "sacred place" that countless people want to get close to but can't reach. Usually only the five most favored people can come to have dinner with the teacher. They are very excited to be able to enter here today.

Du Ziyuan said to them: "It's almost a month, have you finished all the things you painted?"

"Report to Teacher, it's all done." The five direct disciples replied neatly.

"Well, let me review it, Jiang Yi, you come first."

"Yes, teacher." Jiang Yi took the lead in handing over his cartoon.

The theme he drew was "Food and Beverage", and the restriction was "cannot focus on food".

This is quite harsh. Du Ziyuan looked at it and found that what they drew was actually a story of a young chef's struggle, which was a bit of a workplace style. Food is only secondary, and the focus is still on how the protagonist adapts and survives in the "battlefield" of the kitchen.

The creativity is not bad, but the writing of this story is a bit bad. There are many logic bugs, which forcefully create conflicts.

This is something that can't be helped. After all, Du Ziyuan picked people who were good at drawing, and he didn't think about writing stories at all. Isn't it easy to find a good novelist in this world?

However, scoring is still required, just listen to Du Ziyuan said: "Painting: 7 points, 6 points for painting style, 5 points for storyboard, 8 points for creativity, 1 point for plot, out of 50 points, your group's score is 27 points. "

"27 points!" Jiang Yi's face was a little stiff, and it was only halfway through. Is the teacher's grading standard too strict, or their level is too poor?

"Thank you, teacher." He retreated with the sketch, and the students who were in his group were also a little frustrated. Especially the few people in charge of writing the story, the plot of this 1 point is too eye-catching, it is clear that the stories they wrote are rubbish.

There is a saying that a person who writes a story seriously will never realize how bad his story is. In their opinion, the story is already very good. Even if it doesn’t get full marks, it should have 6 points. But in fact, Du Ziyuan's evaluation shattered their illusions.

"Don't pay too much attention to it," Du Ziyuan said, "Drawing and writing stories are two different things. Some people can do it with both hands, but it doesn't mean that they can't become a cartoonist if they are partial. In fact, as long as you If you can do well in any aspect, then you are a qualified cartoonist.”

"Thank you, teacher." With Du Ziyuan's encouragement, the tension of the students eased a lot.

Think about it too, isn't it because the story is not well written? Wouldn't it be enough to find a partner who writes novels? Just like their elder sister Ning Hanlu, didn't she become a super-selling cartoonist just by cooperating with Mr. Zuiyu (Nie Xue)? Now I even went to Penglai Jianzong to discuss the opening of an exclusive magazine. I am simply a winner in life.

"Xiao Ting'er, it's up to you next." Du Ziyuan said to Yun Ting.

"Okay, teacher." Yun Ting would not call him Uncle Huang in this kind of situation, and obediently handed in her manuscript.

The theme she drew was "Detective" and there were no restrictions. This is a new topic, and it is a bit too difficult to add restrictions.

Du Ziyuan looked at the works of this group. The artistry is comparable to that of Jiang Yi's group, but the storyboard is much better. It seems that their group has a talent with a good sense of picture. Looking at the story again, it really still can't escape the framework of "The Great Detective". It's nothing more than that several suspects have motives, and then gradually find evidence and use the method of elimination to find the real culprit.

Du Ziyuan hoped that the students would work hard on their techniques, but apparently they failed to do so: "Painting: 7 points, 6 points for painting style, 7 points for storyboarding, 5 points for creativity, and 3 points for plot. The score was 28."

"Thank you, teacher." Although the score was a bit low, Yun Ting was not too disappointed with Jiang Yi's group leading with 27 points.

After the second group is over, everyone can basically see that Du Ziyuan's scoring standard is roughly in this range. The third Gu Xiaowei who stepped forward was not so nervous anymore.

Her theme is "music", and the restriction is that "singing, writing, and performance cannot be the focus". This is a bit embarrassing, after all, what else can you do if you don't draw these? Ordinary people really can't think of it.

But Gu Xiaowei's group is more spiritual. They actually drew a music academy, and then directly began to tell the stories of the students in the academy. Because these students all have musical dreams and are very talented in certain fields, the theme of music is satisfied, but the focus is still on the friendship and love between the students.

"Very good." Finally seeing a group that he was quite satisfied with, Du Ziyuan was not stingy, and directly praised it. This made the six people in Gu Xiaowei's group very happy.

"Painting: 6 points, 5 points for painting style, 5 points for storyboarding, 8 points for creativity, and 7 points for plot. Your group scored 31 points."

However, the actual score was not as high as expected. Although they got a good score in the plot, there was something wrong with the painting style and storyboard. There are a few places where there are obvious incoherence, which makes people look confused.

"Thank you, teacher." Although the score is not high, it is tentatively number one after all, and Gu Xiaowei is not too disappointed.

Next it was her brother Gu Jiansha's turn.

His theme is "killer" and the condition is "no one can die".

The themes given by Du Ziyuan were all weird and strange, with a feeling of deliberately making things difficult. But in fact, it is not blind, because each theme actually corresponds to a work he has prepared.