I Read Everyone's Feedback and Asked for Their Opinions.

Actually, some readers have already noticed that I adapted this version of "Explosion" from "Three Billboards Outside Ebbing, Missouri". To be honest, I think the logic of the script of "Explosion" is very ordinary, especially the part about the lawyer.

I think this line is very inconsistent.

And before I started writing the book, I had this idea after reading "Three Billboards Outside Ebbing, Missouri".

I think the two scripts are actually similar in a sense.

So the idea of ​​magic modification came into being.

First of all, "Explosion" is a drama with a strong female lead. Like Frances McDormand and Cohen in the original work, the character of "Zhao Di" is mixed into a contradictory mixture. Then the village chief replaces the sheriff, and the idler replaces Officer Dixon.

I think this is quite reasonable, and actually today I was going to talk about the difference between storytelling and film.

Didn't I say in the last chapter that movies are audio-visual language, and stories are literary language... Although I also know that when I said this, I was writing a novel. But I can still convey the picture through words.

Moreover, the reason for this change is actually for the following plot.

Director Martin saw this story, bought the copyright, remade it into "Three Billboards Outside Ebbing, Missouri", and won an Oscar.

This is a line that connects them together.

But today I read the comments, everyone thinks that this change is not as good as the original... I actually have this concern. And I have already made the right countermeasure, that is, to use the line of censorship to block it. If it is to be changed, in fact, it will be explained in a small chapter that this script has not been reviewed, and everyone should remember that I wrote about the plot of the outstanding youth before.

The outstanding youth will be in May of 2013.

At that time, I made two preparations... or I think my magic change is good, but if everyone really doesn't accept it, then when selecting contact with youth, the script will also be blocked at the same time, and then someone will find Xu Xin and say that they heard about Director Xu's script being rejected. After reading the story, they conveyed some... I hope that when he promotes Shaanxi, especially northern Shaanxi, it will be more "positive". In this way, the story can be changed to the original version in a logical way, and the overall big intention will be reduced.

Of course, this is the preparation for the back hand made before.

I can write both lines. When I decided to change the plot, I had already laid out the clues and left the lines.

The plot can be adjusted, and although I felt good about myself when I changed it at the beginning. I thought this idea was invincible. But as my mind calmed down and the character lines in the book accumulated little by little, I was actually always worried about gains and losses, which is the main reason why I only told the complete plot of "Explosion" today.

I am actually not sure which plot is better.

I have watched "Explosion" and "Three Blocks" repeatedly. I always feel that the lawyer line of "Explosion" is too unsuccessful, and after the detailed magic change of "Three Blocks", I also feel that it is a bit wrong.

That's why I said in the previous chapter that I think the most failed part of my book is that "Explosion" has been dragged for so long.

I originally thought that a movie would completely establish its position, and then turn around and start doing business. As a result, I am now stuck here.

But fortunately, I made two preparations, and after telling the plot today, everyone thinks that this plot is not very good.

I want to ask everyone.

Is it pulled back?

Or continue to make changes?

I rarely ask readers for their opinions when writing entertainment stories, because after so many years of writing, there are very few plots that I can't handle unless the real characters kill themselves. But this is one of them.

What do you think?

After reading this, I will write the plot of this movie in a straightforward and uncomplicated manner.