Chapter 228

This is true whether it is an email, Line, or mobile phone number.

Then...how did she send it to Isha Kitahara.

"Add it yourself?"

Kitahara Isha naturally saw Kasumigaoka Shiyu's embarrassment.

After scoffing.

He opened the line adding page and asked Kasumigaoka Shiyu to add his line.

"good!"

Kasumigaoka Shiyu's eyes lit up.

The next moment, she quickly added Isha Kitahara's Line.

Looking at the extra Line friends on her phone, Kasumigaoka Shiyu raised the corners of her mouth slightly.

She always felt that her biggest gain this time might not be to let Isha Kitahara read the manuscript for her.

Instead...Isha Kitahara's Line was added.

"I'll send it to you right now!"

After adding Isha Kitahara and modifying the remarks.

Shiu Kasumigaoka gave the final curl of her "Metronome of Love" to Isha Kitahara.

After successfully receiving the final volume of "Love Metronome" from Kasumigaoka Shiu.

Kithara Isha looked at it at a glance.

As for writing style, there is no need to worry about Kasumigaoka Shiu's writing style.

Moreover, since Kasumigaoka Shiyu dared to show it to him, it was not far behind.

What he saw more was the plot.

And, whether there is room for improvement in the description of some scenes.

"How about it?"

What I saw in Kitahara Isha was no worse than later.

Kasumigaoka Shiyu put her head over to Kithara Isha and whispered in her ear.

"not bad!"

Kithara Isha nodded slightly.

"But it can be better here."

"Although the characters and scenes are well created, there is a lack of narration or words that make people remember it and keep thinking about it."

"You could try adding some more."

Kitahara Isha pointed to a certain paragraph and made some improvements.

The way he spoke was just like Kasumigaoka Shiu's, he whispered in the other person's ear.

This scene, to the unaware Furuhashi Fumino and Kotobuki Tsumugi, seemed a bit intimate.

Even in Kato Megumi's opinion, it was a bit too close.

"good!"

"I see!"

Kasumigaoka Shiyu didn't notice the weird looks around her.

At the beginning, when Isha Kitahara spoke in her ear, the heat coming from her ears made her ears slightly red.

There was also a slight blush on his face, looking a little shy and unnatural.

However, under the guidance of Kitahara Isha, she was so happy that she didn't care about this.

"Thank you, Junior Kitahara, for your guidance!"

"After I change it, I will send it to you for review."

Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu smiled and said. according to

"Just show it to Machida after you've made the changes. Why don't you show it to me?" 2

Kithara Isha was speechless. O

He originally wanted to say editor, but in order not to expose anything, he simply changed it to Machida Enko's last name. scattered

"Let me, junior fellow student Beihara, see if it's suitable for you!"⒉

"If it's not good enough, then change it again." Zero

"As for that old woman, she may not have as good a vision as Junior Beiyuan." Qi

Xia Zhiqiu Shi Yudao. (

There was a hint of 'coquettish' tone in her words that she couldn't even detect. Four

Faced with Kasumigaoka Shiu's "coquettishness", Kitahara Isha rolled her eyes. )

He didn't think Kasumigaoka Shiyu looked cute like this. dad

Because, Kasumigaoka Shiyu is not really acting coquettishly.

But... you get the advantage and still behave well.

Seeing that Beihara Isha rolled her eyes and didn't agree.

Kasumigaoka Shiyu's smiling face immediately turned into a look of 'gloomy resentment'.

"Junior Kitahara won't refuse, right?"

"Last time, you took advantage of me and showed me everything."

Kasumigaoka Shiyu's tone is faint.

What she was referring to was of course the last time she changed clothes when she was in a trance and forgot that Isha Kitahara was there.

Thinking of what happened last time, she was still blushing.

That should be the most shameful and embarrassing time in my life.

I, who have always been conservative, was unexpectedly given up by Isha Kitahara...

Chapter 208 The difference between swimwear and underwear

"Bang--"

Kasumigaoka Shiu's astonishing statement immediately caused an uproar in the entire Light Music Department classroom.

The next moment, I saw the table in front of Kato Megumi became unstable and shook violently.

The table in front of Akiyama Mio was knocked forward and hit the ground because of her overreaction.

Such a reaction is not due to indignation caused by some kind of emotion.

Simply because Akiyama Mio is a shy person.

After hearing such a hot topic, she was very ashamed and angry at Kasumigaoka Shiyu's "shamelessness".

However, she may have more opinions than Kasumigaoka Shiu, but Isha Kitahara.

Because Kitahara Isha actually did such a thing to Kasumigaoka Shiu.

This is too much!

So, were they deceived by the appearance of Isha Kitahara?

Akiyama Mio couldn't help but think of this.

"No, shameless!"

"Senior Kitahara, how could you, could you..."

Akiyama Mio blushed, pointed at Kitahara Isha, and shouted.

She directly 'reprimanded' Isha Kitahara for her bad behavior.

“Hey, hey, hey—”

"Why are you shouting so loudly?"

Faced with Akiyama Mio's loud scolding.

Kitahara Ixia glared at Akiyama Mio.

"Sorry!"

Being glared at by Kitahara Ixia.

Akiyama Mio immediately shrank her neck in fear.

Then, she hurriedly picked up the fallen table in front of her.

After straightening the fallen table.

She sat up straight with the look of a good baby.

And she didn't dare to look at Kitahara Ixia, for fear of being glared at by Kitahara Ixia again.

Seeing this scene, everyone was speechless.

You were the one who shouted the loudest just now, and you are also the most cowardly now.

After scaring Akiyama Mio into submission.

Then, Kitahara Ixia glared at the instigator Kasumigaoka Shiyu next to her.

This glare was obviously because of Kasumigaoka Shiyu's nonsense.

Although it was the case, how could it be different when it came out of Kasumigaoka Shiyu's mouth?

It was as if he had really done something to Kasumigaoka Utaha.

This was a huge injustice.

"Don't get me wrong, okay~"

"It's just because..."

"Last time, the button on her clothes broke, and I helped her sew it."

"She was distracted after taking the clothes, and changed them in front of me."

Seeing Kato Megumi and Furuhashi Fumino looking at him suspiciously.

Kitahara Ixia shook his head helplessly and explained the situation last time.

"Although I did see her body, I didn't see what I shouldn't have seen."

"It's just the feeling of looking at other girls' swimsuits."

Kitahara Ixia said.

"I see."

Kato Megumi nodded.

After hearing Kitahara Ixia's explanation, she understood what happened.

She didn't have any doubts about this.

On the contrary, Furuhashi Fumino on the side still had doubts in her eyes.

After all, what Kasumigaoka Utaha said just now was really ambiguous, which made people wonder what happened.

Akiyama Mio and others had similar thoughts.

"Even if that's the case, there is a difference between underwear and swimwear."

Akiyama Mio muttered.

She didn't dare to express her doubts.