Summary at the End of Volume 1

Let me briefly summarize the end of the volume. I will chat casually. If you have any opinions, you can also express them here. I will read them.

First, let's talk about the word count of the first volume of this book, which is the chapter of the martial arts master.

Originally, the word count of this volume was about 250,000 words. I didn't expect that I couldn't control it a little bit. I wrote a little too much and forced it to about 330,000 words.

Of course, it all comes down to my own ability. There are still many areas that need to be strengthened in the rhythm and narration of the story. I can't compare with those big authors at all. I have to apologize for this and I will pay attention to it in the future.

This volume is mainly about martial arts in the mortal stage, and finally leads to the protagonist's road to immortal cultivation.

But everyone can rest assured that the martial arts practiced by the protagonist cannot be said to be useless in the future. I think some people have guessed that the polar night world is now in the last days of the law. It is definitely right to train the body to be stronger. Developing the resources of the entire world can also be regarded as a great support in the future of immortal cultivation.

Then let's evaluate the first volume as a whole. Actually, if I have to rate it out of 10, I am only satisfied with the first volume at 7 points.

There is chivalry and the Jianghu flavor is enough.

But the climax at the end is not exciting enough, and the writing is not exciting enough.

In fact, when writing this volume, I considered two bosses for the protagonist. The first one is Tuwahar, the leader of the horse thieves who appeared first, and the second one is Jiulianmen.

But in the end, I still chose Tuwahar, because I spent some time at the beginning to describe him as an arrogant hero.

Later, Jiulianmen actually spent a lot of time to try to add a sense of oppression to this Jianghu sect, but unfortunately it didn't appear as a boss in the end.

Then I thought about it many times. If I chose Jiulianmen as the final boss, would it be better?

Regarding this question, I can't give an accurate answer here.

Some people may ask why not write about both bosses together. I did consider it, but I still rejected it firmly.

Because the length and number of words are really not enough, after all, this is a fairy channel, not a martial arts channel! ! !

Alas, in the final analysis, it is still a bit difficult to let go, because of my own ability, I was unable to give a satisfactory ending to this volume of martial arts, I apologize again here! Sorry everyone!

Whenever I think of this, I will admire Mr. Jin Yong more and more, and he can write such an excellent martial arts novel, which is heart-wrenching and exciting.

Sure enough, like the protagonist Li Qing, I still have a lot of room for growth. This feeling of having ambitions but not being able to realize them is really uncomfortable.

Anyway, the next part is about to enter the immortal cultivation section, and I hope everyone can continue to support it.

The name of the next volume is "First Entering the Immortal Path". I have also conceived a lot of ideas for this volume, and I have also buried a lot of foreshadowing. I will fill in the holes one by one soon, which is still very exciting. There is a foreshadowing that has been particularly long, and I feel that you are almost forgetting it, but don't worry, I can remember the holes I dug!

Well, that's it, let's encourage each other!