Chapter 276 0276, Business Comes to You (1)

"I personally think that since the name 'Feng Yun' is used, Bu Jingyun and Nie Feng should be the protagonists, and the other characters should be supporting roles. The proportion of the main and supporting roles is currently out of balance, and adjustments should be made."

"I object. 'Fengyun' is just a symbol, and it does not necessarily revolve around Bu Jingyun and Nie Feng. Moreover, since the boss wrote it like this, he naturally has his own considerations. Don't forget, this is a symbol. For a long comic, random changes to the script will affect the creation of subsequent plots.”

"My intention is not to rewrite the main plot, but to appropriately increase the roles of Bu Jingyun and Nie Feng without destroying the overall structure."

"You have to understand that we are different from "Detective Conan". They started the creation based on a main line set by the boss. For us, we used the plot and comic title given by the boss to complete the picture."

"Brother Ling, Brother Yu, didn't the boss say that as long as you have any questions, you can raise them? How about you tell the boss in the WeChat group and see what the boss thinks?"

…

Seeing Ling Tao and Yu Jinsheng arguing with each other, Wei Xingmeng hurriedly spoke up and played the role of peacemaker.

However.

None of the three of them knew that Yunfeng had been standing behind for a long time and heard all the content of the argument just now.

"Ahem."

"Old...boss."

…

Seeing the sudden appearance of Yun Feng, Ling Tao, Yu Jinsheng, and Wei Xingmeng all paused with shocked expressions on their faces.

The atmosphere became quiet for a moment.

A few seconds later.

Ling Tao and Yu Jinsheng were blushing and extremely embarrassed.

Yunfeng smiled lightly and said, "I heard everything you discussed about "Wind and Cloud III" just now."

Ling Tao said with a bitter face: "Boss, actually I am..."

Yunfeng raised his hand to interrupt him and said: "I understand that you all want "Wind and Cloud III" to be better. I also said that if you have any questions, you can raise them, right?"

The three nodded yes.

Yunfeng continued: "You must have drawn more than thirty chapters of "Wind and Cloud III", right?"

Yu Jinsheng said hurriedly: "Boss, last week you gave the names of the comics with forty to sixty chapters, and we have now drawn the forty-fourth chapter."

"Oh, I've been too busy recently, so I remembered it wrong." Yunfeng touched his nose and said, "Then, tell me your thoughts on the current plot."

The three of them looked at each other.

Starting from Ling Tao, they started talking one by one.

Yunfeng listened very carefully.

The story of "Feng Yun III" takes place more than ten years after Feng Yun killed and cut off the waves. All sects, big and small, have been recuperating, some have broken down and established new ones, and some have revived. The order of the martial arts has also been re-adjusted. With Wuming, Feng Yun, etc. Wulin myths have disappeared one after another, and a new generation of leading figures has gradually emerged. Bu Jingyun's son Bu Tian, ​​Nie Feng's son Yifeng, Duan Lang's sons Shen Feng and Lan Wu. The grievances and hatreds in the world are all caused by this martial arts world. The second generation unfolds scene by scene.

And this is exactly the problem with "Wind and Cloud III".

The original author wanted to continue writing a new martial arts story, but because Feng Yun was gone, the popularity and sales of the comic were not as good as the previous two. In the end, due to pressure, Feng Yun returned.

Because there are too many characters and their priorities are unclear, the plot is confusing, combat power collapses, and books are eaten.

Some people even commented that "Feng Yun I" has three protagonists, but the supporting bosses are relatively balanced, and the three protagonists are no more or less; "Feng Yun II" has four protagonists, but all except Huai Kong can play their own role, and the four protagonists seem a bit There are many; there are waves of supporting bosses in "Wind and Cloud III", but there are only seven or eight protagonists, which is too few!

Some people also complain that the task of the author of "Feng Yun I" as the editor-in-chief is to check whether the plot of each episode is exciting enough; the task of the author of "Feng Yun II" as the editor-in-chief is to check whether there is suspense at the end of each episode; "Feng Yun III" The author's task as the editor-in-chief is to check whether any keywords such as "yes and indeed" are omitted in each chapter!

Others concluded that "Feng Yun I" has less than 150 chapters, covering all the classics of "Feng Yun"; "Feng Yun II" has less than 150 chapters, covering a lot of wonderful content; "Feng Yun III" can also be completed with 150 chapters, but it has been drawn More than 600 chapters and still drawing!

Yunfeng actually made optimizations, but this optimization only focused on the collapse of combat power and the chaos of the plot. As for the scenes, no changes were made.

Now after listening to the opinions of Ling Tao, Yu Jinsheng and Wei Xingmeng.

I think it is possible to adjust the roles of all characters to make the priorities clear, and to strengthen the shaping of the characters from multiple dimensions such as their positioning, relationship, appearance, and abilities to make them more full.

Of course, the premise is to ensure that the overall structure remains unchanged, because Yunfeng feels that the story of "Wind and Cloud III" is still good, and there is no need to overturn and rewrite it.

An afternoon passed with this chat.

Ling Tao, Yu Jinsheng, and Wei Xingmeng, with Yunfeng's coordination, have become more like a team.

However, the release time of "Wind and Cloud III" will be postponed again.

As the saying goes, good things come in many years, and you won’t be too late for a good meal.

In the evening, after a small dinner party with several assistants, Yunfeng took a taxi to the Magic City Conservatory of Music.

Why go to a hotel when there is such a good place as a dormitory?

Yunfeng took a shower and looked at the time, nine o'clock.

Still early.

So I turned on my computer and reorganized the plot of "Wind and Cloud III".

It was already two o'clock in the morning when everything was done.

I have to say that "Wind and Cloud III" is too lengthy.

Yunfeng deleted some plots and limited the number of chapters to three hundred.

As for the protagonist, Feng Yun is definitely still there, and Nie Feng's role has been added to prevent it from becoming "The Legend of Bu Jingyun".

"Aha……"

Yunfeng let out a long yawn.

He tilted his head and looked towards the balcony.

It's late at night, and in the quiet night sky, the bright moon hangs high and there are stars.

Yunfeng got up and came to the balcony.

The breeze blows slowly, bringing a little bit of coolness.

He couldn't help but look at the girls' dormitory building opposite, and Tang Yu's appearance appeared in his mind.

a long time. "

Yunfeng picked up his mobile phone and first sent a screenshot of the registration of "Yuntang Music Studio" to Tang Yu, and then posted a microcircle on his own microcircle about the establishment of "Yuntang Music Studio".

"Ding dong..."

Tang Yu: "Where are you?"

Yunfeng: "Today I took over a music studio with Brother Chen's help, and then went to Youxianqi Company to talk about work. Now, "I'm in the dormitory, why are you still awake at this hour?"

Tang Yu: "I was asleep, I was woken up by your Wechat message, (_)."

Yunfeng: "I just miss you, go to sleep, good night."

Tang Yu: "You should go to bed early, don't be too tired, good night, (づ￣3￣)づ╭~."

However, Yunfeng wasn't the only one who didn't sleep. This small circle attracted many night owls.

[Swallowing tears and pretending to be happy]: I thought it was some big deal, so I clicked it and took a look, here I go, the dog food from late at night is really yours!

[Songs of young people sleep in old alleys]: Is the master’s music studio hiring? I can’t even write or sing songs, but eating is my top priority!

[Nanyu]: Now that you have established your own music studio, are you going to announce your official debut? Otherwise, I won’t be able to participate in the selection in this year’s World Chinese Music List.

[Mermaids don’t cheat but can use their mouths]: Is this a song that will hit the top spot on the new song sales chart for the tenth week?

[A smile is worth a thousand words]: Release a new song soon. I have been depressed by Luo Mu’s sad love songs these past few weeks.

…

Fans just want to watch the fun.

but.

People in the industry look at this matter from a different perspective.

"It seems that he has parted ways with Zhanlan Music Group. In fact, this is inevitable, but it is just because Luo Mu's appearance has brought the time forward."

"Since he refused to sign contracts with all first-tier music and entertainment companies, I have already guessed his idea, either to open a company or a studio."

"Although his songs are good, the music studio is not that easy."

"What he does is contrary to the development of cultural undertakings. The competition in the future is no longer the competition of works and channels, but the competition of resource integration and the competition of fans. Who can hold the resources and sustain the competition?" There are consumer users, no matter what kind of artist they are, as long as they are packaged and exposed enough, they can support them.”

"Don't say anything too absolute, or you will be slapped in the face. The saying left by the ancients, 'The fragrance of wine is not afraid of the depth of the alley' still makes sense. Works are the standard to measure an artist's popularity."