Chapter 3319 Can You Tell the Truth?

He will soon be sixty years old. If he goes to start a business, he has no energy or physical strength, and the most important thing is not to make money, but to educate his six children and prevent them from going down the wrong path.

Therefore, investing in financial management is the most convenient and fastest way. Not only can you achieve asset appreciation, but you can also have money for the rest of your life.

Turn off the computer and go to checkout with the card.

Two yuan for half an hour, four yuan for two computers, a deposit of twenty, and a direct change of sixteen.

When I came back, I went through the vegetable market, bought watermelon, bought some fresh meat and wonton skins, and ate wontons in the evening.

Bai Wenli woke up from a nap, went downstairs, and saw her own on the table, thinking that her mother and stepfather didn't even look at it, she was disheartened.

When she came to the front, Bai Wenli saw red writing on it.

Bai Wenli was very surprised, her mother and stepfather really had to modify it for her?

Bai Wenli took it out and read it carefully, especially the places marked with red pen. At first, she didn't think her mother and stepfather could give constructive comments, but after careful consideration, Bai Wenli realized her shortcomings.

In some places, she felt awkward when she saw them, and they were all selected; in some places, she thought it was very good, especially the descriptions of people's service and characters, which were very beautiful, but were rejected by her mother and stepfather.

She is very upset!

Bai Wenbin's ability to appreciate is not strong, so he came downstairs with the manuscript and said to Bai Wenli, "Second sister, can I tell the truth?"

He has seen a lot before, especially martial arts, which is his favorite. Among the moves, the protagonist's grievances and hatreds are very immersive, but what the second sister wrote, there is absolutely no desire to watch it, and there is no sense of substitution.

Bai Wenli rolled her eyes, "Failure is the mother of success. As readers, give me your opinion from the reader's point of view."

Bai Wenbin first pointed to a large section of the description, "I know you want to highlight the beauty of the heroine in this section, but I think it's too complicated, so I just swept it away. The plot that follows is slow, it's obviously a martial arts, and I'm happy. Qiu, you wrote it sloppily, anyway, I only read the first two chapters, and then I couldn't read it any more and fell asleep."

Bai Wenli blushed slightly when she heard this, "Hey, I really wrote poorly, three books were rejected, and several poems were rejected. I really don't have the talent for writing. Then I'll give up, I like not being able to eat. When I was in school, I still had the qualifications to be self-willed, but when I graduate, I can't even support myself, don't I want my parents to support me?"

Seeing Bai Wenli's loss, Bai Jingxuan turned the wheelchair and approached Bai Wenli, "Second aunt, don't be discouraged. Who is born to write? It's all about practice, practice makes perfect. You can get into such a good university, which proves your ability to learn. You are very strong, and you have a lot of knowledge. Now we have found out your shortcomings, and if you correct them, won't you make progress?"

Bai Wenfang also hurriedly encouraged her. She knew that the second sister liked it very much. When she was in school, the second sister could save a third of the money for lunch every day and use it for rent. Afraid of being known by my parents, I hid under the covers to watch.

I liked it before, but now I like to write. Since she likes it, she doesn't want the second sister to give up.

"Yes, second sister, don't give up easily." Bai Wenfang encouraged, "Second sister, I think your writing is a bit old-fashioned. Now that the times have changed, you can't write with an old eye."