Complete Remarks
It ended very suddenly, but it was indeed written to the end, and the intention was about to end. The original outline was about Xiao Meng and Xiao Sang angrily fighting against the Golden Emperor, and ending with a passionate battle, but most of the way through the writing, it became more and more obvious. The more I write, the more I feel about the terrifying scheming of the Golden Emperor and his firm pursuit of the road. It is impossible for such a boss like the other side to let himself end up like that. The organization is too clever in his calculations. He should be the one who has an iron heart on the road. Therefore, the final climax cannot be reached and the ending cannot be hearty. For a creator, it is too painful to not be able to take both the cake and the bear's paw at the same time.
But in the end, I decided to respect the character of the Golden Emperor, respect the villain who supports the next third of the story, and respect the character's personality and setting. This is also my original intention of writing The Supreme Being - I will do this in every book. Consider what areas of your shortcomings you want to improve upon.
Destiny is a complete story of cultivating one's mind and nature. There is nothing else. I wrote my heart with my own hand, so I wrote it with fairy thoughts, but it lacks too many things, such as writing, plot design, rhythm control, and character creation. These may have some highlights. features, but overall it is still too ordinary and thin. Therefore, Arcane God's Throne is dominated by the decryption of the world view. The rhythm control is very good. The level of fine structure exceeds that of Destiny. The characters have also been improved, but it is not enough, and the fighting is weak.
With these summaries, the original intention of I was to write about people and concepts. In the first half of the story of "Yiyi Jianghu", I felt that the characters, fighting, conflicts, secrets, suspense, concepts, passion, happiness, etc. were all written to a whole new level, breaking through My past self, but after I stepped into the location, the fighting began to become empty at first. There were so many problems in Gao Wuliu's confrontation that I had never encountered before. It was very painful to write, and I slowly fell into a bottleneck. As the story became relatively dark and heavy, The world view is gradually revealed. The conflict of early styles and the integration of past characters are new problems. The more grand background, more character games, and more detailed clues require racking your brains. It is difficult to take into account other things. Unless you can update a chapter in two or three days, many of the advantages in the early stage are gone while the main body is still good.
These things are not things that can be thought of in the initial outline. Only when you write them down will you understand them, and only when you encounter them will you know how to solve them in the future. This life is good, but there are indeed many problems that need to be summarized.
Fortunately, The Game of Might has finally come to a successful conclusion. I am very satisfied with this. The content of nearly 4.5 million words has been able to reach this level. I feel good about myself. I just hope to summarize more in the next book. Improve it further.
The most satisfying characters in this book are Xiao Meng, the Golden Emperor, and Xiao Sang. Xiao Sang was originally a supporting role for a girl I knew before. There was only one requirement: to be written as a female villain. I looked at Yulong Zi The setting of the movie, I suddenly felt that psychosis is quite cute, so she became schizophrenic, and then I extended a series of inspirations, and came up with the layout of the Golden Emperor. If it weren't for this accident, maybe the life you see would not be like this. Yes.
Many people may not like the character Xiao Sang, but at least for me, I think she is the best female character I have ever written. I am not my favorite but the most satisfying, but the best. At the end of the seventh volume, Xiao Sang and the Golden Emperor Faced with it, when the pride was stripped away bit by bit, I even felt like this character was alive.
To summarize here, let me first answer some questions that are not filled in in the main text:
1. What did Zhu Bajie know? With some kind of lustful intuition, it was keenly aware of the adultery between the God of Thunder and the Demon Saint, and thus figured out that there might be something wrong with the God of Thunder's true identity, so the old pig must die.
Second, Han Guang and Wang Siyuan were portrayed with resourcefulness and exhaustive strategies in the early stage to show that God's will after the real unveiling has been difficult to predict since ancient times. Therefore, there is no drama. Han Guang's ending has already been doomed. The original owner of Luo Shu is Donghuang. , Wang Siyuan thought he got it back by preliminary understanding of the monsters of heaven, but in fact it was the arrangement of the demon Buddha, and his resistance was always under the control of the demon Buddha.
Third, the escaped remains of Kasyapa represent the terrifying need of the Supreme Buddha. He was taken away by the Monkey King. The following is left blank. You can imagine whether it is possible for Him to turn into a relic in the new era and find a new successor.
Fourth, why did no one rush to carry Tang Sanzang’s remains after the Battle of Lingshan? Because the other side was balanced and involved with each other, no one dared to move first, until they all fell into a chaotic sleep, waiting for the end of the catastrophe. Laojun did something inaction again, and could not recite the legend, so in the end Monk Xuansha returned early.
Fifth, the golden cicada carapace was originally prepared by Meng Qi to deal with the Supreme Buddha, but the Buddha was not truly transcendent, so he could not use it.
Sixth, there is no pitfall for the Buddha to truly transcend. There have been reminders in the early stage. Dao Zun’s subtraction and emptiness products are very powerful. There is Huang Laojun, and Huang Laojun split into the Eastern Emperor and the monster of heaven. They are all on the other side, and there are ancient ones. , and although the Supreme True Buddha is indeed powerful and strange, Tang Sanzang is much weaker. Meng Qi thought it was because of his improvement. When he found that the traces of the Taoist Master were empty, but the Buddha's imprint was still there, he began to doubt that the Buddha was not transcendent. In addition, Dao Zun has not taken any action, Buddha has records of his actions, and Mo Buddha has revealed his cooperation with Yuanshi Tianzun before, so the final action is foreseeable and not a whim.
7. As for each era, there is only one transcendence. Buddha has transcended. Why doesn’t Meng Qi doubt what path and fruit those on the other side strive for? He forgot to write it here. He thought this was the end of the world, the end of the previous eras, not a single era, and there might be another opportunity.
Eight, why can't Yuanshi Lingbao take action, but Amitabha and Jinhuang can? That is what Yuanshi said in the last chapter, they have already changed their status, eliminated cause and effect, and waited for the opportunity, without having to rush like Jinhuang, which means they are half a step ahead, with a 70% to 80% chance of winning, forcing Jinhuang to use the Six Soul Banner to reduce morality.
Nine, the status of the Demon Emperor is slightly equal to that of the Buddha, but she is not restricted, but is afraid that her previous efforts will be in vain once she shows up, and is waiting for the opportunity. As long as there is the next era, she is not afraid of the end of the world, which is hinted in the words of the Demon Saint.
10. The timeline of Conferred Gods and Journey to the West, etc., first Conferred Gods, the Emperor of Heaven attained the other shore, dominated the world, then gradually separated from Yuanshi and Daode, and the Journey to the West happened, then the Demon Lord was instigated by Thunder God to attack the Heaven, indirectly revealing the secret of Jianmu Fruit, not long after the Heaven fell, the other shore joined forces, the monkey took the diamond circle given by Laojun, and at the last moment, knocked the seriously injured Emperor of Heaven and the Heaven down to the fairyland, giving him a glimmer of life and maintaining the existence of this era, and finally the battle of Lingshan, Amitabha, Bodhi against the demon saint, Daode and Yuanshi and other ancients intervened later, the diamond circle and the Seven Treasures Wonderful Tree were damaged in this battle.
Of course, after all, it has been serialized for nearly two years, so it is inevitable that some details will be confused and inconsistent. For example, Liu Luo had clearly seen the picture of the strange blood peach drawn by Meng Qi, but when exploring the uppermost layer of the heaven, he said that he didn't know it. Of course, it can also be explained that Xiao Meng's painting ability is "superb", which is amazing. He drew a child so well that even the mother couldn't recognize him. Well, these do not involve the main plot and the direction. If there is a chance to publish in the future, I will proofread it again from the beginning.
The rest are pitfalls of the character endings. Some will be in the extra chapters, and some will be left blank. By the way, I saw a friend in the book review area said that it is better to serialize in the book. In order to take care of them, let's serialize in the book, in a free form. Take a break. There will be the first character extra chapter at 7 o'clock on Friday night. But I also hope that everyone can add my *WeChat*. There will be good jokes, various brain holes, and scraps to read first. Extra chapters that have nothing to do with the first life will also be placed there, such as tonight's "If it is a city". In short, I will have time to maintain three updates per week in the future~ Just search my pen name, don't add the first life of the honor...
Summary, it's time to talk about the new book. I mentioned before that the new book is a city fantasy. Yes, today I can say more clearly that it is the King of Fighters type of urban martial arts or fantasy, the power level will be lowered, so I can write characters and stories better, and use what I have summarized in my life. Moreover, this type of writing is less popular, relatively fresh, and I will be very passionate about writing~
Of course, everyone will say that if I don't do stupid things, I won't die. I change the subject matter and the field. To be honest, I know that this is not good, and I will definitely lose a lot of readers. Every time I see others add hundreds of thousands of new subscriptions and tens of millions of copyright adaptation fees, don't I envy them? That's impossible, but I can't write what I don't want to write, and I can't force a smile and pretend to be climax to write stories that I have no inspiration, no ideas, and no creative passion.
You can say it's naive or stupid, but I still remember the original intention when I first started typing. I write my heart with my hands, write stories that I feel good and can't wait to share with everyone, and enjoy the satisfaction of creating a world and writing a character.
I'm not young anymore, but I feel that I still have dreams, passion, and a breath of energy in my heart, and I still have stories I want to tell. It has nothing to do with the subject matter or style, but only with my heart!
Just like Xiao Meng said, this is not a question of whether it is worth it or not, but whether you are willing to do it!
I am willing, I have no regrets, I am just a big idiot!
The new book has been conceived for a long time. I had some ideas before writing Arcane. Of course, I wanted to write about science and technology at that time, but unfortunately, time has passed and I no longer have that feeling. However, many of the details and plots accumulated at that time can be used. Until now, it has been basically perfected and is waiting for additions. However, I have been writing for almost two years. I am really exhausted. My thinking seems to be slow. I need time to rest and recharge. I need time to read good books and see how others shape characters and tell good stories. I need to learn skills and experience. Therefore, I rest and recharge for two months, and improve the outline and save the manuscript for one month. See you on October 1st for the new book!
Phew, I have been writing for twenty-two months. Some friends have gone through high school, some friends have graduated from college, some have changed jobs, and some have started a family like me. Xiao Meng has accompanied us through a stage of life. If this book can become everyone’s memory of the past, I will be very happy.
Sincerely, Best regards, see you in the extra chapters and the new book!