Immortal Tea Party 13-The Boat Has Passed Through Thousands of Mountains
The debate about "Hydrology" in the book review area is a bit intense. After a period of observation and thinking, Shuiyun decided to hold another tea party to respond to everyone's concerns.
The focus of the debate is probably concentrated on the following two points:
First, some book friends believe that there are too many side quests in the current Flashing Gold Plains volume, and the main line is advancing slowly.
Secondly, the protagonist often chats and fools around with friends, and the description of food is not enough.
The daily update space is limited. The above two points lead to the fact that you can finish reading it after just flipping through it, and the experience of chasing updates is not good.
If there are other questions, please add them later.
Let's talk about the first point first. Let's take a look at the main and side lines of the Flashing Gold Volume.
The main line of this volume is to unify the Flashing Gold Plain. There is no doubt about this, right? Then the next point of interest is, how can the protagonist do it?
If it is another novel, the worst case scenario is that the deep blue will be added, the gold finger will be bold, and the later stage will be flat and crushed, and the sense of pleasure will be full.
But this does not conform to the tonality of this book, nor is it the selling point of this book. The only gold finger in this book is not very good to He Dashao.
It's the same old saying, why should you take the place that's easy to occupy? The protagonist wants to unify Shanjin, and there is no other way except to follow the steps and do a lot of careful and meticulous preparations.
Recalling the second volume of the Utopia of Demons, the main plot is to make a big fuss in the Heavenly Palace and take back the lid of the big square pot. The climax is only a few dozen chapters, and the time in the book is only a short two quarters of an hour. How much preparation and effort did the protagonist make for this in advance?
So much ink and description, are they just fillers added by the author to lengthen the length and cheat some manuscript fees?
There are actually eight branch lines in the second volume of Demon Kingdom, which are parallel and gradually merged, and finally converged to the main line, together to promote the overwhelming and earth-shattering climax.
Each branch line involves different events and characters, which not only allows everyone to substitute different perspectives and see the strength and weakness of the empire for six hundred years, but also makes the victory of the weak over the strong in the battle of the Heavenly Palace from unreasonable to possible. In fact, they will connect with the subsequent plots in the future, and their significance and weight will continue to increase.
Back to the Flash Gold Scroll, the protagonist faces the same problem: the mission is too difficult and the opponent is too strong.
He Lingchuan's opponents are not only the powerful people in Flash Gold, but also all the forces that do not want him to become too powerful.
If he wants to take over the entire Flash Gold, it is still the familiar formula:
Only speed can not be broken.
When he really takes action, he must be as fast as thunder and lightning, and catch any external forces off guard.
People often only see the earth-shaking avalanche, but do not notice the gradual accumulation of ice and snow, and this is He Lingchuan's latecomer advantage. What he has to do now is to steadily guide the process from quantitative change to qualitative change before triggering the much-anticipated "avalanche".
What kind of person or force is the most terrifying?
Is it the one who shouts every day to suppress you? Is it the one who bullies you with countless small actions? Is it the one who takes advantage of you every day?
Oh, a smart person once said that if you really want to knock someone down, you'd better not let him know in advance. When he finds danger, your knife has already stabbed into his chest.
He Lingchuan planned to do this for the Shining Gold Plain; conversely, in order to unify Shining Gold in the end, all the preparations for it are actually the main line, right?
So far, what preparations has He Lingchuan made?
First, run the hometown association.
This is not just a simple way to win over talents and establish an information network, nor is it just because these people are easy to win over. Their role will gradually be reflected in the future.
Second, use the activities of the Chamber of Commerce as a cover to infiltrate Yangshan's power into every corner of Shining Gold.
Third, the Black Armor Army will enforce justice on behalf of heaven, establish the myth of the Nine Nether Emperor, and cooperate with Yangshan's propaganda team to carry out extensive publicity.
The above work is relatively hidden, and it is not easy to attract the attention and vigilance of local tyrants, but it can achieve the effect of moistening things silently.
Let's talk about the actions of the Black Armor Army and the Nine Nether Emperor. Some book friends said that they don't want to see the elimination of violence and the suffering of Shining Gold. In fact, the appearance of the Black Armor Army is of great significance to the Golden Plains:
It breaks the people's superstition about the invincibility of bullies, and then awakens people's instinctive desire to resist oppression, which is the so-called sowing of "fire".
It also gains the recognition of the civilians of Golden Plains, laying a solid foundation for the subsequent unification of Golden Plains.
These are all related to willpower and Yuanli, which will be mentioned in the subsequent stories.
While controlling the general strategy, we also need to sketch individuals. There are many characters in the Golden Plains, and here is a chestnut:
Wanqi Liang. (In contrast, it is Sha Wei in the Panlong world)
When he first appeared, he was a "thorny" image, brave and aggressive, and loved to make trouble. He was not a qualified soldier at all, let alone an excellent general.
Many people say that this world is just a huge makeshift team, and I think this is only half right.
I was born with talent, and it depends on how I carve it:
If it is not polished well, it will be a piece of scrap iron; if it is tempered properly, it will be a magic weapon.
Wanqi Liang will certainly become a magic weapon in He Lingchuan's hands. I will let everyone see the transformation from the "Wanqi Liangs" from Yangshan warriors to elite troops. Since then, their gathering is no longer a grass-roots team.
And the growth of a group of characters represented by him will show Lingchuan's unconventional skills in promoting and cultivating talents.
In addition, I will also explain why Yangshan's warriors are willing to fight for the golden plains thousands of miles away. This is a change of identity, but also a sublimation of mentality and character.
There are many similar examples. If you are interested, you can go back and look for them; if you are too lazy to turn back, the following plot will also be presented.
These contents are small, complicated but necessary. They fill the skeleton of the whole book with flesh and blood and human nature, and affect all the cause and effect of the future and the future.
But these contents cannot be independent articles. I will let them lurk in each story, like a dragonfly skimming the water, but in the end it will come naturally.
What preparations and efforts are needed to unify the chaotic land and create a powerful empire, and what hardships and fights must be experienced? This is the history that the Flash Gold Volume wants to present and the questions to be answered. As the curtain slowly opens and as various people come on stage, the above answers will be like the hydrographic stones at the bottom of the river, gradually revealing their true appearance as the water level drops--
It has always been there, but it needs the right opportunity to come out.
There are always book friends asking me, when will the Flash Gold Volume end? In fact, He Lingchuan's preparations are more than halfway done, and the progress of the book "The Immortal" is also more than halfway done.
Both inside and outside the book are moving forward step by step.
I hope that when this volume ends, the plot, side lines, and characters have all been fully and fully interpreted. And the protagonist's opponents, those forces that do not want to see and recognize us, after roaring wildly, waiting for opportunities to retaliate, suppressing in vain, and even paying a heavy price, suddenly found that the boat had passed through thousands of mountains, and the rise of new forces was unstoppable.
Situ Yu analyzed He Lingchuan and said that a person always has a purpose for doing so many things, and he could not see He Lingchuan's purpose; then, Shuiyun also hopes that his thoughts and feelings can be gradually passed on to every reader as the novel unfolds.
If my friends can give me a little more trust, believe that I am a serious, hard-working, and patient person, believe that I am responsible for the quality of the immortals to the end, if my friends can let go of their guard, follow the rhythm of this book and move forward together, and enjoy the world that Shuiyun has drawn for you-
I think our mentality will be more relaxed, and we will all have a more pleasant experience, right?
I have been nagging for so long today, and it seems that I have only answered the first focus of the debate.
The space is limited. The second focus of the debate involves the creative thinking and ideas of the immortals. If you want to explain it clearly, you need to hold another tea party.
If everyone wants to read it, I will arrange it later.
I know that some friends will say that it is better to write more novel texts than long tea parties. However, writing is writing, and communication is communication. They cannot perfectly replace each other.
Shuiyun is willing to take some time for eating, sleeping, exercising and relaxing every day on the premise of full work to respond to everyone's concerns, so as to enhance communication and reduce misunderstandings.
Long live understanding, it is not just a slogan.
----- Fengxing Shuiyunjian/Jiufangye 2024.4.21