Edit the Outline, Revise the Article, and Write a Single Chapter as a Summary

Well, I wrote this book on impulse at the beginning, without thinking about the outline and follow-up. I dug a lot of holes. I started to prepare the outline during the Chinese New Year, so it should be better later.

I really wrote the fantasy side storyline to death. I thought it was good at the beginning, but I still didn't write it well. Sorry.

I have also started to learn recently, reading more books by big guys to start learning.

Then I have also started to look directly at the garbage I wrote in the past (bitter smile). In fact, I used to spend about an hour writing a chapter at night and throw it away without reading it. Here I would like to thank Luo Youfu Ning again for pointing out the typos and his support. Now I start to look back at the garbage I wrote, and I may make some changes.

In addition, thank STK for his support and critical suggestions. Here I will also explain the story I want——

——I have always been thinking: In such a huge world view of mhy, what is the future of the collapsed world? Is there a definition of collapse? Among the countless world bubbles, there may be other non-world bubbles, and the real world also exists. It is also disturbed by the collapse. Those who have played the post-Honkai II storyline should also know that there are also higher-dimensional worlds in the Honkai world, and even the Honkai will itself is just the representative of a certain world (I seem to have seen it somewhere, but I forgot.)

So I suddenly had an idea, combined with the worldviews of other novels I have read, and combined them, I want to build a huge worldview that belongs to my imagination.

In addition, in fact, if there is no story of the Honkai world, what I think can be published in another book, but as a high school sophomore (I will be a senior in the second half of the year), my motivation for writing a book is because I like the story of Honkai III, I like the spirit of the Valkyries, I like every bit of them, I like the knives (bushi) on their bodies, cough cough, in short, in my mind, Lin Jue will take them to drive the Hyperion, fight against Honkai together, go outside together, and go to a wider world (PS: But the plot at that time has nothing to do with the Honkai world plot, don't worry about the screenwriter's backstab hahahaha)

In terms of the plot, I think I will change some tragedies, change some tragedies in a different way, and will not change some tragedies. At the same time, the definition of Lin Jue is a variable that affects everything. When he appears in the collapsed world, the future of the collapsed world is already unclear.

Another thing to say is about the protagonist - that is, Lin Jue. Forgive the newcomer for not being good enough. I failed to design him well, which made everyone confused. He looked very strong but also very weak. His character was not established. Sometimes he was calm, sometimes he was wise, sometimes he was rude, and sometimes he was mean. I will slowly improve this. Then I buried a lot of pits in him, such as the dialogue buried deep in the memory, the plan mentioned by Master Mo, etc.

Lin Jue's memory is a big pit in the future and a turning point for the emotional sublimation of the Valkyries and the protagonist. Master Mo's plan is actually the main line of this book.

(In addition, if you still remember that curse, forget it. I will delete it after a while. It's too awkward.)

As for the female protagonist, I want a harem, but I have always been afraid that I can't control it, so I am also undecided. Because I have been single for many years, I have no experience in this area at all. I am currently reading some light novels about love and learning more from the big guys.

In addition, I have no way to promote the book. I don't know how to promote it. Besides, I don't think I wrote well before, so I dare not promote it. I am just a high school sophomore, and my main task is to study, so I don't really care how many people read this book in the end. As long as the collection increases occasionally, it's fine.

Finally, I was reading another fan fiction of Honkai Impact 3rd when I wanted to write it myself. Then I didn't know how to write it myself, so I borrowed a lot from the book "Honkai Impact 3rd" in terms of plot, but I didn't plagiarize. But this book is much better than mine (forehead). You can go and have a look if you haven't read it.

Well, finally, thank you to the book friends who can see this! Thank you very much! I also hope that everyone can keep this book and come back to read it in a few months. I believe that this book will not disappoint you. (But remember! Don't forget it!)