Chapter 440 Reasons for Failure

Yang Shuzhun's eyes flickered and changed, and he looked at Lin Qingshan who really walked straight in front of him.

You must know that they are competitors. He had directly challenged Lin Qingshan before.

Lin Qingshan must remember that time he challenged him face to face, even though it was several years ago.

Moreover, his "Gods" has "suppressed" Lin Qingshan's comic works several times.

Lin Qingshan will definitely remember him, and may even be very envious and jealous of him.

But now that "The Strange Immortal" has once again surpassed "Protoss", and its popularity continues to rise, Lin Qingshan should be proud and proud.

So he comes to me now...does he want to declare his victory?

Just when he was guessing why Lin Qingshan came to see him...

Lin Qingshan said excitedly, "Teacher Itchy Rat, I am your fan! Are you free to chat with me now?"

He is indeed a fan of Yang Shuzhun, whether in his previous life or in this parallel world.

However……

Yang Shuzhun was a little stunned. Lin Qingshan, a cartoonist who is also a competitor, would actually say that he is his fan?

impossible! Absolutely impossible!

The key is that they are competitors of the same generation. If you say that Lin Qingshan is Yang Shuzhun's senior or junior, it is nothing.

But how can peers say they are fans of their competitors?

Even Yang Shuzhun likes Lin Qingshan's comic works. He has read them many times and even borrowed many details from them.

But he would not tell anyone that he was Lin Qingshan's fan.

Lin Qingshan said this... The only possibility is that he wanted to come here to show off to himself?

"You actually want to show off to me..."

Yang Shuzhun immediately pretended to be indifferent and said.

"show off?"

Lin Qingshan was a little curious and said, "No, I am really a fan of your "Protoss" teacher Itchy Rat. The plot you drew is really great!"

"I really think your talent is very good!"

Seeing Lin Qingshan's serious and truly admiring look, Yang Shuzhun suddenly doubted himself.

Is it possible...

Is Lin Qingshan really his fan?

But even if they are competitors, why can the other party express it so openly?

Yang Shuzhun was a little confused about Lin Qingshan, but...

He looked at Lin Qingshan with strange eyes, and he seemed to have some mental problems with Lin Qingshan.

After all, although Lin Qingshan is known as a genius cartoonist, he is recognized as a genius - not only in cartoon creation, but also in academics.

But the painful experiences he had in the past caused him to suffer huge blows, leading to mental problems.

So... Lin Qingshan really didn't mean anything sinister, he just expressed his love for his works frankly and straightforwardly.

This made Yang Shuzhun suddenly feel a sense of joy and pride in his heart.

You see, Lin Qingshan, a talented cartoonist that everyone praises, is still a competitor who bows to his talent.

Sure enough he was absolutely right.

But at this moment...

"But Teacher Itchy Mouse, there seems to be some problems with the plot direction of "Clan of Gods"."

At this time, Lin Qingshan suddenly approached Yang Shuzhun and whispered, "If this continues..."The future of "Gods" will not be good."

Yang Shuzhun immediately frowned and said, "What problems can there be with "Clan of Gods"?"

"In terms of protagonist creation..."

Lin Qingshan scratched his head. In fact, he also felt a little embarrassed.

After all, it is someone else's work, and it is not his turn as a copywriter to give his opinions.

But he was just giving suggestions as a friendly fan.

So he went on to say, "Shai Zai... In fact, everyone hopes to see the moment when he fully grows up. Although it is good to retain the character's characteristics, I think the follow-up can allow Shai Zai to truly grow up and remove the missing link." character weakness."

"Isn't Shai Zai grown up enough?"

However, Yang Shuzhun frowned and said, "He has grown very fast and will continue to grow in the future. This is also the essence of hot-blooded boy comics, isn't it?"

"Not really..."

However, Lin Qingshan scratched his head, and then continued, "Teacher Itchy Rat, don't you think that Shao Zai only realizes it at the end and fights for his life... Isn't it too hesitant?"

"I think human life is the most precious. Only in this way can the protagonist's contribution be shown to be valuable."

Yang Shuzhun still said, "If you just fight with others casually, then it won't seem important."

"But such a character would still look cowardly."

Lin Qingshan became determined at this time and said, "In the early stage, you can still hesitate to say that you cherish your life, but later... when there are not many things left, you should no longer cherish your life, because losing your life has not lost everything. The only thing left is terrible."

Just like those soldiers who defend their homeland, do they cherish their lives?

Even if they sacrifice their lives, does that make the lives they sacrifice unimportant?

Does their sacrifice seem unimportant?

No.

The lives and sacrifices they made are still very important, and no one can forget that they showed the most dazzling brilliance of humanity in that moment.

In fact, even if Yang Mingfei, the protagonist of "Protoss" hesitated, his life and sacrifice were quite important when he gave his life to save others.

But the point is...his hesitation may ultimately make the effect of sacrificing his life worse.

Why did Shao Zai sacrifice his life and self?

Just to save the lives of those important to you.

But if you hesitate for a while like Yang Mingfei did, you will lose the chance to save Eryi's life.

However, although Eriki was regretful that time, everyone can still understand it.

But if you have lost once and are still hesitating, it would look too stupid.

Human beings are more or less stupid-phobic, and they will definitely feel a certain amount of disgust for people who are obviously too stupid, especially those who still can't learn it after several times.

Yang Mingfei is like this now. You can't say whether he has grown up or not, but you can't say he hasn't.

But after four years of college, I have only grown a little bit, especially in terms of personality. The growth in this aspect can only be said to be temporary.

"No, no, no, you still don't understand."

Yang Shuzhun continued to say confidently at this time, "People are all complicated. It is precisely because of their own cowardly character that the moment of desperate bravery becomes even more valuable... And in this way, Nono will know how much Yang Mingfei loves him. She."

Lin Qingshan blinked when he heard this. He understood that Yang Shuzhun's portrayal of the protagonist of "Gods" probably wanted to be more three-dimensional and complex.

Yes, real people are not that monotonous. Only characters in creative works will have labeled and monotonous personality traits.

A real person has a selfless side and a greedy side, a true side and a hypocritical side, a sinful side and a kind side.

These are all subject to debate.

A bad person will also be kind to his friends and relatives, and even occasionally radiate kindness to some passers-by.

But having said that, only real people in reality can be so complicated, and in fantasy works, a character is at most a little complicated, and it just needs to be made more three-dimensional.

It really allows a character to show various personality traits that are extremely fragmented, reflecting his authenticity...

I can only say that while it is very troublesome, it will also make fans feel very inconsistent.

It's like when you portray a character who was originally a villain who was against the protagonist group, but suddenly wakes up at the end and chooses to help the protagonist group fight, do you think it is very disconnected and inconsistent?

However, in reality, people do "suddenly wake up" at some point, without even a suitable reason or much logic.

Just like you suddenly want to eat something one day, reality actually requires the least logic.

But fantasy works are not acceptable. Fantasy works must follow logic.

For example, if in a historical novel, the protagonist only has 3,000 soldiers and horses, facing an enemy army of 400,000, this is definitely a battle destined to fail miserably.

However, at this moment, it was written that a meteorite suddenly fell from the sky, killing and injuring countless enemies of the protagonist, and the war was in chaos.

On the protagonist's side, no one was hit by the meteorite and suffered no casualties. Then the protagonist rushed over with his army and defeated the 400,000-strong army on the opposite side with 3,000 soldiers and horses.

Anyone who watches this kind of plot will think it is too outrageous and there is no way such a thing could happen.

However, in real history, this is how the founding emperor of the Eastern Han Dynasty, Emperor Guangwu, defeated the main force of Wang Mang's 400,000-strong army of the new dynasty...

So reality requires less logic than fantasy works.

But fantasy works are very unfair and require logic.

"It's illogical for you to do this...and Teacher Itchy Rat, do you really think..."

Lin Qingshan, a mental patient, felt speechless for the first time and said, "Is it really good for the protagonist to end up with Nono?"

"Why is it bad? They really love each other."

Yang Mingfei became impatient and said, "Okay, Lin Qingshan, don't say anything else. This is my comic work!"

Lin Qingshan blinked, but he continued to try and said, "I just want to make some suggestions as a fan of Mr. Itchy Rat."

"That's a good suggestion, but I advise you not to mention it."

Yang Shuzhun said expressionlessly, "I know you are very successful and popular now, but can you tell me what to do with my work?"

"no……"

Lin Qingshan felt a little troubled. Why is it so difficult to help "Gods" have a good ending?

"If you're just a fan, you just need to simply support me."

Yang Shuzhun said, "As for the other things, I can only say that they are exempt. I think as a creator, you don't want others to criticize your works, right?"

"Actually...it's okay."

Lin Qingshan thought for a while and said, "If there is really a problem, I will correct it."

But he is a literary copywriter, so he can change whatever he wants. There is nothing wrong with these original popular works, so of course there is no need to change them.

Yang Shuzhun sneered and said, "Actually, you and I are the same kind of people, it's just that you haven't fallen into trouble yet."

Lin Qingshan seemed a little at a loss again. After all, he was just a copywriter.

"But I will not admit defeat. The victory or defeat now is only temporary."

At this time, Yang Shuzhun seemed to suddenly have the soul of the second grade on fire, and said, "Watch Lin Qingshan, and I will get back the things I lose one by one with my own hands!"

Then he turned around and walked away with his head held high.

Lin Qingshan blinked, but he didn't dare to continue to follow and talk to Yang Shuzhun.

Seeing this posture... the other party is going to continue to be stubborn to the end.

Lin Qingshan was a little powerless.

And soon, another group of people watched Yang Shuzhun leave and continued to surround him.

"Teacher Qingshan..."

...

The award ceremony of the newcomer grand prize of the comic world is over.

However, at this award ceremony, Lin Qingshan seemed to have become the real protagonist of this award ceremony, stealing all the limelight.

This not only made the industry talk about it with relish, but also made the outside world discuss it enthusiastically.

After all, now is the Internet age.

The newcomer award ceremony and even the annual meeting within the comic world are not as mysterious as before.

The official website of the comic world even made the award process and some interview highlights, so a group of comic fans saw Lin Qingshan's popularity at the newcomer award ceremony, as if he had the aura of a protagonist.

There is also the conversation between him and Yang Shuzhun earlier - the part where he claimed to be a fan of Yang Shuzhun.

It immediately caused a heated discussion among everyone.

"I didn't expect it, Qingshan Laozei is a fan of Yanyangshu Laozei."

"The beginning of "The Gods" is indeed good, and Qingshan Laozei also looks like the kind of person who is heartless and simply likes good works, so... it's not surprising."

"As a fan, Qingshan Laozei can't help but scold Yanyangshu Laozei after seeing the current plot of "The Gods"?"

"We are all colleagues, half colleagues, and we meet each other in the circle every day... It is definitely impossible to open up to each other face to face."

"I think it would be great if Qingshan Laozei could give some advice and pass on some experience to Yanyangshu Laozei. It's true that "The Gods" is now relying on big."

"The Gods is over. I said that the current Yang Ming The more I watch Fei, the more I hate him. He's still thinking about his boss' girlfriend. His personality is like a child, and he's pretty stupid. I have a phobia for stupidity and I really hate this kind of protagonist more and more. "

"I can only say that if Yang Mingfei could learn a little bit from the protagonists in the works of Aoyama Laozei, like David, Agni, Denji, and Shinichi, he wouldn't be so annoying now. "

"The key is that the plot and setting of Return of the Dead are really based on the foundation. It's not just a problem of character creation, but the whole comic plot has problems. "

"But the most disgusting thing is the protagonist. It seems that he has no growth at all, and he always fails, and he is always obsessed with Nono. "

"Let's not talk about "Protoss". By the way, the new show "Fate Zero" on C Station is going to be broadcast tonight!" "Yes, it's better to watch the new animation of Aoyama Laozei than "Protoss". It's much better than that thing that suddenly gives you Akaashi. "