Chapter 531: A 20,000-Word Masterpiece (Part 2)

With the question swirling in his mind, Ning Yuan almost couldn't wait to turn to the next page.

At this moment, he lost his identity as an ordinary commentator on Ifeng.com and acted like an ordinary reader, eager to know the plot below.

For people like Ning Yuan who love stories, work can start at any time, but the happiness brought by reading is rare, so at this time he just wants to feel the charm of "Country Teacher" as a reader.

In the next plot, the carbon-based aliens conducted a sample survey of the planets within the range, and soon it was the earth's turn.

Unexpectedly, but within reason, the aliens chose the students of Li Baoku, a rural teacher in this small village. In fact, by this time, Ning Yuan had already vaguely grasped the context and intention of the story——

But instead of losing interest, he became even more excited!

The aliens began to ask these children questions for testing, and asked several questions in a row.

These children were all silent. After all, they were just students from the countryside with limited knowledge. Before they could learn many things, their teacher Li Baoku had already passed away.

Some alien high-level officials have lost their patience.

Prepare to directly destroy the earth, and the weapons are ready.

But the question continues, "3C Civilization Test Question No. 14: Please describe the relationship between the forces between two interacting objects."

The children responded in unison: "When one object exerts a force on a second object, the second object also exerts a force on the first object. The two forces are equal in magnitude and opposite in direction!"

Blessing to the soul!

Newton's three laws!

Ning Yuan couldn't help but stood up from his seat: "That's it!"

He waved his fist fiercely, as if he was proud and happy for the children.

Yes, the answers to the questions extracted by this group of aliens are exactly what rural teacher Li Baoku tried to memorize Newton's three laws at all costs at the end of his life.

And below, "Rural Teacher" continues:

["3C Civilization Test Question No. 14 passed, 3C Civilization Test Question No. 15: For an object, please explain the relationship between its mass, external force and acceleration."

The children said in unison: "The acceleration of an object is directly proportional to the force it experiences and inversely proportional to its mass!"

The alien intelligent voice sounded: "3C civilization test question No. 15 passed, the civilization test passed! It is determined that there is a 3C-level civilization on planet No. 3 of the target star 500921473."]

At this point, the story has completely reversed!

Ning Yuan's eyes sparkled: "A rural teacher taught the students Newton's three laws of mechanics before he died. In the end, these students saved the earth by reciting the three laws. Such a fantastic idea is really wonderful! "

If the mood at the beginning was one of disappointment, then at this moment, Ning Yuan's mood could be described as surprise.

It wasn't until ten minutes later that Ning Yuan's mood gradually calmed down: "Okay, next I want to watch "Country Teacher" again as a special commentator on Ifeng.com."

This is his job.

The experience of reading a story from a professional's perspective is completely different from reading a book from a reader's perspective.

After spending another half an hour, Ning Yuan finally finished watching "Country Teacher" for the second time. This time he read it carefully, so he discovered many details that he failed to discover the first time.

The first is the exquisite structure!

This "Country Teacher" uses a lot of contrasts and has a clear structure!

The impoverished and dying rural teachers are evangelists who save the earth, and rural students who cannot enjoy educational resources become the heroes who save the earth. The smallness of the village contrasts with the hugeness of the earth.

On the other hand, the smallness of the earth contrasts with the power of carbon-based life.

The story of the rural teacher is common, and domestic reports on this aspect are also common. However, when placed in the larger environment of the universe, and the content of science fiction is added, it has the effect of turning decay into magic.

The story jumps beyond the earth to see human beings and examines themselves from a lofty perspective.

This is something that only science fiction novels can do - Luoyang has formed its own unique memory point in the story, which is eye-catching. It is only 20,000 words long, but it is exquisite to the pinnacle!

"Secondly, there is a tribute to teachers in this novel."

The Dragon Kingdom pays attention to respecting teachers and morality, and Luoyang shows it in the novel——

In the universe, other species transmit information directly. Only people on Earth choose to use the profession of teachers to transmit knowledge, without the need for memory inheritance.

As the bearers of the fire of civilization, teachers act as a medium for transferring knowledge between two generations of life forms, surprising both alien senators and supreme governors. This is a word from the ancient era of galactic civilization.

In the end, Ning Yuan concluded: "Although it is still a science fiction novel, it has an incredible artistic conception."

Convinced, Ning Yuan was really convinced by this article "Country Teacher". At first, he thought Luoyang's writing about teachers was a failure, but now after looking at the full text, he realized that this is the brilliance of "Country Teacher"!

Rural teacher and alien, the two lines are written crosswise, and there is an appeal that runs through time and space.

In the end, the children used the knowledge taught by rural teachers to save the earth, which reflected outstanding humanistic care.

As a special commentator on Phoenix.com, I am being manipulated by Luoyang's creative thinking. I really can't accept it.

This short science fiction of about 20,000 words can be regarded as a masterpiece in Ning Yuan's opinion. The interweaving of realism and science fiction makes this work a perfect combination of reality and romance.

"It is a five-star masterpiece. Bai Yi was born at the wrong time."

Ning Yuan was very emotional, because Bai Yi's "Flower God" was not that bad.

As a science fiction work that can be rated four stars, "Flower God" is still worth reading. The thread in the story is very clear, and the structure is relatively well organized. Although there are some bugs in the middle, it is not a big flaw.

But if you have to compare Bai Yi's "Flower God" with Luoyang's "Rural Teacher"...

It can only be said that it is a pity, because there is a level difference between the two. After all, excellent works like "Flower God" are still common, but masterpieces like "Rural Teacher" are really hard to come by.

The media are still hyping it up, Luoyang vs. Bai Yi?

A complete victory from creativity to intention, from control to writing power.

Ning Yuan couldn't help but think of Luo Yang's shocking self-introduction during an interview some time ago. Perhaps, this young genius...

may really become an indispensable figure in the field of science fiction in Longguo in the future!