Chapter 159 System Crash (Fourth Update)

Seeing this sentence, people from all walks of life in the online literature community were filled with mixed feelings.

The creative reward of 10 million yuan for opening the book was transformed into a sentence in Bai Yi Qing Cheng's mouth: "It's raining, your mother is calling you to go home and collect the clothes."

It's very kind and humorous. It's this sentence that makes countless people feel convinced. With a feather fan and a long scarf, the masts and oars are destroyed in the midst of laughter and conversation - this attitude is called the king's demeanor.

Suppressing the shock from just now, countless people finally saw the long-awaited first chapter of "Panlong" - "Morning in the Town".

"Wushan Town, the first mountain range of Yulan Continent, an ordinary town in the Fenlai Kingdom west of the Warcraft Mountain Range.

The sun is rising, and the small town of Wushan Town still has a hint of coolness in the early morning, but almost all the residents in the town have come out to work, even the children of six or seven years old have almost all gotten up and started traditional morning exercises.

In the open space east of Wushan Town, the warm morning sun shines through the big trees next to the open space, leaving mottled spots of light on the open space.

I saw a large group of children, and it was estimated that there were about one or two hundred of them.

The group of children was divided into three teams, and each team was lined up in several rows. The children stood quietly in the open space with serious faces. The children in the northernmost team of this group of children were about six to eight years old. The middle team was about nine to twelve years old, and the southernmost was a group of teenagers aged thirteen to sixteen..."

This is the opening shot of the first chapter of "Panlong", which is full of visual sense.

Moreover, Luoyang wrote a full 9,000 words in this chapter, which is a large chapter. The world view, early level division, and overall structure of "Panlong" are also directly disclosed. At the same time, Luoyang also threw out one of the core points of "Panlong" in the first chapter, the four ultimate warriors!

When many people saw this paragraph, their eyes lit up, and a strong sense of expectation that they themselves did not even notice had appeared.

"On our continent, there were four ultimate warriors thousands of years ago. These four ultimate warriors all had strength comparable to that of dragons. They could roam among millions of soldiers alone and easily take the heads of enemy generals! These four ultimate warriors are dragon blood warriors, purple flame warriors, tiger stripes warriors, and undead warriors!"

"Warriors are divided into nine levels. I, a mere level 6 warrior, can easily smash boulders and kick down trees! And the level 9 warrior is probably the strongest in our Fenlai Kingdom."

This is the world of the strong. This is the new world created by Bai Yi Qingcheng. The mysterious veil has been unveiled amidst the long-awaited calls.

Strong men who climb mountains and cross seas, the legendary holy land, and the four powerful ultimate warriors... When countless readers and even online writers finished reading the first chapter of "Panlong", they were surprised to find that -

I, who was not interested in the so-called Western fantasy, was actually looking forward to the following plot of "Panlong"!

This sense of expectation puzzled many people. They didn't expect that such a Western world would not be boring.

"It's not a mercenary adventure fantasy. It's an interesting beginning. Lin Lei's character is very full. It seems that I have to continue reading."

"Oh, that's not right. The first chapter of Bai Yi Qing Cheng didn't write anything interesting. Why am I looking forward to the following plot?"

"I don't like Western fantasy very much. I just came to take a look for Bai Da's sake. As a result, I found it quite interesting? What the hell?"

"When I read the first paragraph just now, I almost gave up the book. Bai Da's writing style has regressed too much. It's so sad. But when I read on, I found that this kind of writing style combined with such a story is unexpectedly exciting!"

Even some professionals who have been engaged in online writing for many years are puzzled: "Why, there is no conflict or twist in the plot, but I have a lot of interest. Where does this expectation come from?"

"Brilliant, really brilliant!" There are also great writers who come with a learning attitude. After studying, they suddenly have a flash of inspiration and see the exquisiteness of the first chapter of "Panlong".

"The protagonist is a child with unlimited growth potential. Bai Da made this Lin Lei flesh and blood in the first chapter. Although the writing is a bit plain, the spirit of self-improvement is immediately evident!"

"Although it is a Western fantasy, the protagonist Lin Lei created by Bai Da makes readers feel very involved!"

"Then, Bai Da described the abilities of the strong in the article. Becoming a high-level warrior can have the ability to break mountains and rocks. This will instantly make readers associate that the protagonist works so hard and seems to have good talent. It is almost certain that he will have this ability in the future. How powerful it will be! Wind!"

"This is the sense of immersion created by Bai Da, which makes everyone have such expectations. At this time, Bai Da released another bombshell, which is the four ultimate warriors in the mainland legend!"

"Generally, this is written in novels, which must be a foreshadowing of something. Does this mean that the protagonist may be one of the four ultimate warriors, or... In short, at this time, the reader's own imagination creates a huge sense of expectation for himself! This leads to the fact that after reading the first chapter, you immediately want to see the following plot! "

The subtlety is not difficult to study, just like the principle of some things is very simple, but you can't do it yourself.

Even if someone thoroughly studies Bai Yi Qingcheng's works, they can't write a work that surpasses him. But there is no time to think more at this time. The best thing to do is to read the next chapter first!

At this time, no matter what purpose the readers come with, they all click on the next chapter of "Panlong" with infinite expectations.

However, after the webpage was refreshed with difficulty, the novel page of the website suddenly turned, and a sentence appeared in the center of the screen...

"Dear user, I'm sorry, because the current traffic of Bai Yi Qingcheng's new book "Panlong" is too high, which exceeds the system's tolerance, causing the website system to crash. The backend staff is urgently repairing it and will complete the upgrade in the short term. Please forgive me for the inconvenience caused to you..."

The page is white and the system crashed! !

The backend is still urgently repairing it, please forgive me...

Forgive your sister! Can I read the book happily!

Faced with this scene, readers from all directions vomited three liters of blood directly.

Do you want to do this? We just want to read Bai Da's new book...

In the end, you made a red envelope rain for more than 20 minutes, and made everyone wait for half a day. Now your backend crashed and the whole website was out of order. It's really crazy! !