[Summary of the First Week on the Shelf]

This book currently has 260,000 words, 13,500 collections, and an average of more than 130 subscriptions.

The free income has increased from a few cents to a few yuan in the past few days. It seems that some readers have gone to QQ Browser to support me.

Not bad.

Next, let me talk about the fatal flaws in the writing of this book.

Too many elements.

I want to write an invincible article, and I want to switch to the writing style of fine articles, and then there is a harem, and I want to establish a character setting, and I want the data to be reasonable, and even add a little bit of weird elements.

I am simply being hard on myself.

If I throw away all the ideas at the beginning and just write a brainless invincible article, I estimate that my first subscription will at least double.

So if I start the next book, I will try to make the novel elements single, find the right market, and then focus on designing the plot.

There are also as few characters as possible. If I can't write a female who satisfies the readers, I will write two less, or don't have a female protagonist.

This week, I received another complaint from readers about the data panel.

This reader actually "watched" the book in the way of listening to books, and then sent several unfriendly complaints in a row.

Imagine when the voice reads the character panel data, I suddenly want to laugh.

How many points of physical attack, how many points of physical defense, magic attack, magic defense...

Why haven't you finished reading it yet, Zhuo!

I can only say that friends who choose to listen to books have great courage.

In fact, data-based books are very difficult to write. Every time I make a panel for a character, I feel a headache.

You must think about how many attribute points, what talents, and then convert them into how much attack power and defense power according to the corresponding race template.

When fighting against other characters, how much damage will be caused, etc.

These complex data must be considered for rationality.

Anyway, every time I write data, typing is like constipation.

Since readers don't like it, and it's hard to write it myself, I will try not to put the complete data template in the text in the future.

When writing about a new character, at most mention what the talent is, and then directly describe the conspicuous data.

This way, it is relatively simple for me to write, and readers will also have a better impression.

In short, try to write as little as possible, and use the text to rush the plot.

At present, as the protagonist encounters stronger and stronger enemies, the protagonist's cheat is too weak.

Must be strengthened!

Must give the protagonist a big cheat!

In the future, when you meet an enemy, just crush him without thinking!

The above two situations will be greatly improved after my current manuscript is saved and the protagonist completes the second-level job transfer.

In addition, I will never write a data flow book again in the future!

Finally, this week's reward.

Thanks to [Book Friend 20190801201629780] [Fei Yi You Qu] for the huge reward!