Chapter 33 Sorry, Updates Will Be Suspended Today!

Sorry, sisters, I will suspend the update today.

The situation is that the chapters I posted recently and some of the chapters I posted before have caused some controversy.

So after thinking it over again and again, I plan to revise the entire text.

As an author, I also know that it is unwise to delay the publication because of revisions.

But I still hope to uphold an attitude, that is, to write every book, every story and every character well.

From the beginning, this book was a new challenge for me in terms of description and character setting.

In the process of this challenge, I did not have a good grasp of the main story line and character setting, so I wrote some controversial parts.

Originally, I thought I would improve it later.

But I found it more and more difficult in the process of writing.

Because the rhythm of the previous and the next changes too much, there are too many characters, the male and female protagonists have too few roles, and some supporting characters have begun to show lower intelligence, which led to some readers leaving messages to give me feedback.

Personally, I don’t think it’s a problem just from the recent chapters, but when it comes to the whole novel, it is indeed a big problem.

So, I plan to spend a few days to revise it.

I had a draft saved, but I passed away a while ago, so it's gone now. I can only say sorry to everyone.

I will revise it as quickly as possible.

At present, the first 32 chapters have been adjusted, with some small details adjusted and some new stories added, but overall the changes are not many.

Next, the main changes are a few controversial points.

The rhythm is too slow and there are too many details.

Delete some unnecessary side lines and unimportant characters.

Increase the role of the male and female protagonists.

The most important thing is to sort out the rhythm, hoping to keep the pace consistent.

Instead of being slow at the beginning and suddenly speeding up the progress at the end, this also disrupts my writing rhythm.

If you have time, you can wait for me to revise it and then slowly look back~~

The purpose of revising the text is to present a better story to everyone, so that I can live up to the support of my sisters.

After I finish revising it, I will make up for the manuscripts that have been missing in the past few days! ! !

Sorry again!

I failed to write this story well, causing everyone to feel unhappy when reading it!

I will try my best to adjust it, and I hope the revised parts can make this novel better! !

Three Avocados.