I Reflect on This Plot Problem.
This plot is not well written, I know.
Originally, I wanted to imitate the Drum Island and write about a fool chasing flames in a dark kingdom, and finally willing to die for the flames.
But the taste was bad at the beginning, and it felt wrong.
It was easy to think of Shishigoro in the previous book, and then the taste was not right. In addition, the plot was not set well, and the more I wrote, the more wrong it became. In the end, it couldn't move. Only then did I determine that this plot collapsed.
But there must be an ending, so I can only force it.
I think it's not good.
If you want to create an original plot, you should polish it more carefully and make it perfect before preparing.
My problem, I am reflecting on it.
No more today.