Remarks at the End of the Volume: You and the Flowers and You

On July 30th, the flower touch volume was completed.

good! ! ! (tremor)

Finally, I successfully adjusted the opening time of the new volume to the intersection of the end of the month and the beginning of the month, completely ending the obsessive-compulsive disorder of finishing a volume in the middle of the month, and starting a new obsessive-compulsive disorder of finishing a volume at the end of the month!

This month Maomao wrote 156,000 words, and he is still a hard-working cat~

But maybe it’s because this summer is extremely hot, humid and stuffy, and I clearly feel that my physical condition is declining... so much so that I started to have high-intensity fatigue before the end of this volume, and I feel groggy and tired every day. .

First, there is a significant decrease in appetite, and then there is the confusion of the biological clock - for example, I just finished today's lunch before writing this speech, and I had breakfast at ten o'clock in the morning. I fell asleep at four o'clock last night, and was woken up by the neighbor's lawnmower downstairs at nine o'clock...

Ah, I hope I won't torture cats like this after summer is over. Pinch the cat.

The theme of this volume is "love". That is to say, "How far can you go for 'love'?" The flower touch in the title of the volume is not only the psychiatrist "Hua Touch", but also the "love touch" and the "crane" created by Russell for Delphinium. The meaning of the unique meaning of "Wanglan".

Well, just like what happened at the end of the last chapter (nods)

Russell is a very lonely and lonely soul who longs to be loved. He deserves to be loved too.

This won't be a tragedy, so stop feeding yourself the knife...

What’s going on with today’s readers? Are they so good at committing seppuku? jpg

Maomao has written eight million words in his book, and this is the first time he has seriously started to write about emotional lines.

The specific reason is that the player's emotional drama has obvious shortcomings, which drags down the development of the overall story and the fullness of Kaifni - some people will say, since you know the shortcomings, can't you skip it and not write it?

——I guess.

I can't write, so I have to practice how to write.

To put it seriously, the premise for maintaining the normal development of the plot without writing an emotional line is, "My plot does not need an emotional line" rather than "I want to avoid the emotional line."

Being able to write but not writing, and not being able to write so not writing are two completely different concepts. I may not be able to write emotional lines, engage in female protagonists, or give out sweets in the future, but I still have to be able to do it. This is like if an author says to himself, "Oh, I just can't do daily work", "I can't write and fight", "My wits are so weak", "My copy has a strong sense of fragmentation"... My evaluation is, yes practice.

Indeed, it is possible to write one or two books, completely avoiding the things you are not good at. But if you want to stay in this industry, no one will be able to make up for the nutrients you are missing.

One day, it will suddenly pop up and become a "poisonous point" when you are writing normally. If you insist on saying this is poisonous, it may not be that poisonous. But when its level is far worse than your other plots, it will in turn drag down the performance and brilliance of other plots.

Mao was quite pleased. From the first volume to the fifth volume... within half a year, he had successfully achieved a breakthrough from zero to one. At least the emotional drama in this volume of Hua Touch has evolved to the level of "barely okay" compared to the previous "I didn't even see it".

The guarantee mission of this book is more than half completed!

It is not difficult to see that this volume is actually a branch volume. There are two main things I am dissatisfied with. One is that the story about Luo Lo is not complete enough - she is a clue in the plot and cannot be added to the plot later in this volume. So she should actually be let out in the middle, so as not to distract the reader.

The other part is the part near the end, the battle with the "budding lover" - I feel that the visual sense and rendering power are not strong enough.

I am a writer who is relatively good at this kind of special effects combat type, but this book suppresses it a bit too much. I haven't written like this for a long time and I feel a little rusty. This is also a warning to me. When practicing new skills, I still can’t let go of reviewing old skills from time to time. Cats can't just break off one by one like a bear with a stick... Of course, I think there should be part of the problem here that the state is not good enough.

I feel like when the weather gets cooler and my routine is restored, I should go for a full physical check-up. Haven't been there for two years.

But I don’t want to have a physical examination, and I have a vague feeling that a lot of diseases will be revealed...

The book now has 930,000 copies, and is almost halfway through - I feel like I can write about 2 million words for this book, and the rhythm and structure will be much neater and more compact than that of Players.

Waiting for the next volume, Russell will officially leave (on a business trip?) Happy Island and go to other empty islands.

It was a completely different customs, another model of the cyberpunk world~

Tomorrow is the usual day off, and the next volume will start on August 1st the day after tomorrow!

Try to finish a volume in thirty days, that will be perfect!

Volume 6·【Amber】

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