This One Will Be Later
I have written 3,000 words on this chapter, but I don't think I can finish it before midnight. Although I can post it directly with 4,000 words, I can't finish the plot and it will seem watery, so I decided to finish it and post it in the second half of the night.
The reason why this chapter is so slow is because I have been reading the official novel about the Raven King recently: I have to say that GW's description of the Raven King is really a mess from beginning to end. The biography of the Raven King's Primarch is the worst biography of the Primarch I have ever seen, and the writing style of his biological father also makes the character of the Raven King seem very undimensional.
I got a mouth ulcer from reading it.
Okay, no kidding, my mouth ulcer is due to other things. There were some things going on at home recently, which made me very busy. I just stopped in the past two days. In order to concentrate on family matters, I temporarily uninstalled my QQ in the past two days. I don't know what my reader group will be like now.
In addition, I have been reading the interludes of each chapter. I have been improving the psychological descriptions and watery problems reflected in the interludes of the past two days. I was not in a good state in the past two days, so the chapters were not written very well. I am also speeding up the progress of Crow King. I think this chapter will solve the problem of Redemption Star, and then jump back to the Far East Frontier. Whether to write a transitional plot or start Perfect City directly, let's see what I can come up with next.
Speaking of Perfect City, I have to catch up on a lot of novels. Fortunately, Luo Jia's image should not be so self-contradictory. Crow King's novels really make me angry and funny.
Let me tell you a joke. There is such a situation in the novels of Raven King: his biography of the Primarchs was not written by his biological father, but by the writer of Conrad's biography of the Primarchs. How should I put it? Conrad's biography of the Primarchs can be said to be the best biography of the Primarchs I have ever read, while Raven King's is the worst biography of the Primarchs I have ever read. It is hard for me to imagine that they are both written by the same person, and this author even has to praise Conrad in Raven King's biography. Many stereotypes of Raven King also come from this biography of the Primarchs.
In short, it is very harmful.
In addition, let me talk about the image of Raven King in my book. I believe that everyone can see that my Raven King here is not a left-wing revolutionary, because I personally think that no matter the depth of Raven King's own thoughts or the actual situation of Warhammer, it is impossible for a left-wing revolutionary to appear. Raven King is at most a Robin Hood-style rebel. He did not want to establish a new system. He just wanted to overthrow the tyranny of the existing system. What he did cannot be called a [revolution].
Don't think that revolution is simple, and don't think that revolution can be carried out in any world view like in some novels now: revolution is a very complicated thing. In a world view like Warhammer where slavery economy exists on a large scale, it is almost impossible to carry out revolution, even if he is the primarch.
In addition, if I really write the Raven King as a revolutionary, and then describe some issues related to the revolution, this book will be easy to lose: those who understand will understand.
Finally, the Raven King here is not a silly Tianbai-like character. He has enough cognition and means. He may have some idealistic feelings, but he is not a pure idealistic dreamer: the Raven King here has another problem, but it is not like Conrad's problem that requires a long discussion, because my definition of the Raven King is to follow Morgan for a main line, so that it will not delay the training of the Raven King, nor will it delay the continuation of the main line, so I will not write specifically about Morgan's education of the Raven King, it is more like a branch line that is carried out at the same time.
Anyway, that’s it. I’ll write more about it someday in the future. Now I have to start writing. I have about 3,000 words to write. I’m not sure when I’ll finish it. Anyway, I’ll get up tomorrow morning to check for updates.