Summary of Part 5, Asking for Leave and Asking for a Guaranteed Monthly Pass

Cough, if I write directly about the Tarot Club at the beginning of the next part, I write that everyone is having a meeting normally under the watchful eyes of Mister Fool, but Gehrman Sparrow "The World" seems to be wearing a monocle, And Mister Fool's posture is more leisurely than usual, his body is slightly tilted, his right elbow rests on the armrest, and he pinches his right eye socket from time to time... Will this be overwhelmed by the thrown blade?

Hehe, just kidding, no matter how dramatic the turning point is, it must conform to the basic law. No, the basic logic, given the foreshadowing and clues above, I can’t write whatever I want, so you can rest assured.

In the entire fifth part, I have already summed up the main problem, that is, for a long time, Xiao Ke was rather confused and lacked enough endogenous motivation, which caused the plot tension to gradually decline, after all, it was not the beginning stage, you can follow Xiao Ke to understand this novel world a little bit, and have other things to cultivate and maintain interest. In the middle and late stages of a book, everyone definitely wants to see the development and advancement of the plot, and it must be The kind you can look forward to.

However, when I first made this part of the structure, I considered that this change should not be too abrupt. After all, after such a big impact at the end of the fourth part, Xiao Ke will definitely need a lot of time to digest and accept it. Pave the way to slowly find new motivation, you see, there is no need to worry about the plot tension of the next movie now.

While writing Xiao Ke, I also had to take care of other characters, describing their growth, their obsessions, and their inner conflicts, so the rhythm was further slowed down, like a squid waving its own Multiple tentacles, from the beginning to control two or three simple lines, to manipulating seven or eight dozen story lines and character lines, it is really getting more and more difficult, and this cannot be allowed to affect the story structure of this movie, and it cannot be let It is bulky and shambling.

It's a pity that for this reason, we can only temporarily suppress the plots of certain characters to prevent the story structure from being unbalanced.

In addition to the problems summarized above, there are two more things to say now. One is that the upgrade was completed in about two hundred chapters. From the perspective of the story structure, it is too slow, but from the actual process, it is too fast. This result seems reasonable, but I still think it is too compact, and it is more gentle for Xiao Ke to digest the promotion in one to two years. Pay attention to this point in the future. This is a problem with the overall story arrangement, and there is not much room for jumping timelines.

I finished it too quickly, and said it too slowly. I don’t know if I have summarized it before. I don’t remember it anyway, so let’s say it again. For many authors, the main function of upgrading is to provide refreshment. Exceptions, but I have other understandings of upgrades. This is my tool and measure to grasp the rhythm of the plot.

Why is this possible? My understanding is the word "change". If the story of a stage lasts for a long time, everyone will be eager to add new things, desire something different, and don't want to stay the same. At this time, upgrading can naturally provide "change". ", very gentle, and not just the change of the environment, but also the change of the protagonist himself, from the inside to the outside, both inside and outside.

Therefore, it is not impossible to write what does not directly contain upgrade elements, but there must be "change" nodes one by one. In a sense, this is an internalized and softened upgrade, just like some romances, the hero and heroine's Feelings can also be regarded as an escalation, from less to more, plus elements such as regression, split, and reconciliation.

The second point I want to say more is that many plots in the fifth part are gradually separated from the middle and low-level Extraordinary, and from the social environment. I hope to find a way to solve the problem, because once there is no environment and no sense of reality, the whole story will have no root, and only drama conflicts will remain, which is the reason why my previous books develop faster and faster, um, except for martial arts. , it is because the repetition is too large, and the upgrade brings too little "change" to the plot.

One of my original intentions when I came up with the sequence system and the acting method is to let the high-ranking people who have left society re-enter the world through the acting method, give them a life, and return the world to reality.

This point, due to the problem of the main tone of this film, has some manifestations, but not too much. I hope that some enhancements will be made in the follow-up.

Going back to the fifth part, the theme of "Red Priest" is to represent war. There are not many positive descriptions, but it runs through the whole text and is the bright line of the plot. At the same time, it uses the encounters in this environment to show the sense of drowning and struggle. Triss is One, Xiao Ke is one, and all the characters who are struggling in the face of the torrent of the times are all.

I repeatedly emphasized drowning in the past, just to stop mentioning the last dozen chapters, to create such an atmosphere and feeling through the story itself, I believe everyone can understand it, after seeing Triss say those words, she fell into the mausoleum , when Amon put on the monocle in front of Xiao Ke, the feeling of the struggling person finally sinking into the water came out.

The corresponding characters are erected.

Because of the need for such an atmosphere, the encounters in this movie do not have many dramatic twists. In my opinion, being attacked by the enemy, being attacked by the enemy and then being attacked by the enemy may not be as good as struggling all the time, trying to break through, but can't find it. The step-by-step foreshadowing of the direction is gloomy and depressing.

And because of the problems summarized above, since the fifth part, the follow-up subscription has been falling, and occasionally rebounded a little, but the trend has not changed, and it has dropped by almost 10,000. Therefore, I said it is necessary to ask myself which one, because It solves the problem of endogenous motivation and plot tension. It is a little harder, but the effect is very good, and the effect is immediate. Since then, the follow-up subscription has rebounded steadily, and recently reached the peak state, and the average subscription is now 80,000. 9 up.

The sixth part is called "Light Chaser", which comes from Sequence 2 of the "Sun" pathway. It was called "Sun Chaser" in ancient times. The specific meaning is the literal meaning, but it symbolizes many individuals and many things.

This one is very important to me personally, it is the most important link in the overall story structure, it is the initial completion of the world structure, it is also the opening of the situation, and it is the key to whether the impact of the plot can be formed. Ask me if Mystery has passed the peak stage of the story and is in the end, I said no, the peak I expected is in the sixth part.

I'm a little nervous, I don't know if I can write it well.

Well, for the next three volumes, the chapters in each of them will definitely not reach two hundred chapters. Hundreds, this is mainly because before the sixth part is finished, I can't foresee how much the seventh and eighth parts can be written.

I am a squid with no outline or detailed outline, only the key points of the plot, climax scenes, general development, and main structure, so before writing each chapter, I have to take a long exam for nearly an hour, sometimes more, Well, it doesn't mean that there is no outline and no detailed outline, it's all in my mind and updated dynamically every day. A friend asked me to read my outline before, and I found out what the hell it was. Except for the world setting, character setting, power setting, and historical chronology are very detailed, the outline is often just a decoration, and I basically don’t follow it ==

Well, it’s time for the much-anticipated part again. The fifth part is over, and we will rest for three and a half days. This time, I have to make a more detailed outline for the sixth part. Otherwise, it will be more difficult to deduce it in my head. , it is too much to consider.

Well, half a day starts at noon on Saturday, and the last chapter is updated in advance, that is to say, half a day off on Saturday, Sunday, Monday and Tuesday, and update at 12:30 noon on Wednesday.

Also, it's the beginning of the month, don't forget to buy a monthly pass, give me the motivation to write the sixth part~

I will provide the first update of the November monthly pass at a critical time in the plot!

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