October Summary and Guaranteed Monthly Pass
I haven't gone out this month, and I've been staying at home honestly, typing seriously, but I still encountered some things. Mobile terminal
Last week, my eyes were a little inflamed, which made the vitreous turbidity worse. After some ordinary eye drops had no effect, I hurriedly registered to see a doctor. Before leaving, my daughter-in-law, an ophthalmology graduate, said that this It’s nothing, as long as it’s not fundus lesions, it’s nothing. I asked what fundus lesions include. She said macula, and then forgot about others.
When I arrived at the hospital, the doctor checked that the vitreous was indeed cloudy, but the black shadow was small and could move without flashing light. The problem was not serious, but your macula seemed to be not in good condition. At that time, I was so scared that I peed and immediately made an appointment for a follow-up examination. I was depressed at home for two days, but fortunately, after the final inspection, I said there was no problem, and I just need to remember to do regular inspections in the future.
Gentlemen, if you have high myopia, please remember to take good care of your eyes and use them scientifically!
Well, this month finally pushed the plot forward to the beginning of the war, connected many of the reserved foreshadowings, and paved the way for a tense atmosphere. This part should end in November, early December at the latest.
Considering that war is a continuous process, it is impossible to reach a climax like the great smog in Backlund. There are many foreshadowings and tragedies, so I did not use the writing method at the end of the second part, but exaggerated it a little Take a look at the atmosphere of the war and the reactions of different people.
This also led to the chapter "Self-question" not having enough pre-emotional foreshadowing. Of course, I didn't write that chapter as a climax. For me, it is just a more important point in the plot structure. It's not about sensationalism or inner shouting, but about changing Klein's state of no major purpose and no strong appeal from the beginning to the present of the fifth part, and stretching the tension of the subsequent plot.
Therefore, what I need is clarity, a certain amount of explosive power, nailed into the plot like a nail, and tighten the following story.
Considering this purpose, I finally adopted the repeated questioning technique that I did not intend to use in this book, because if I use the side, or line drawing, implicit method to express, the whole point that needs to be highlighted cannot be expressed. Clearly, this will lead to far insufficient emotions conveyed in the following stories. If it were not for the existence of the previous chapter, the emotions and emotions hidden in the conversation with Bernadette would not be presented so lightly. The way other items talk, I wrote the first version, which was very embarrassing, many times more embarrassing than asking myself.
Of course, because it was a temporary measure and a temporary change of the writing method, there were a lot of repetitions in that part. At that time, it was because I wanted to let the emotions slowly unfold, and then tightened up. Well, now it seems that it is too late. Sometimes, I have to repeat Remind yourself of the word "restraint".
As for war, because of the foreshadowing of the previous style, Xiao Ke is unlikely to go directly to the battlefield, and I am not very good at describing specific wars positively. At most, I will highlight two or three battles to achieve the purpose of outlining the situation. Next, Xiao Ke, Bernadette's efforts and the plot of the giant court will be intertwined, and I hope it can be written well.
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