"A Complete Remarks on the Complete Book That Doesn't Follow the Routine at All"
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After 389 days, this book is finally finished!
There are 2 million words in total, with an average of 5141 words per day, which is not particularly short (dog head).
Although it hasn't exploded, it hasn't stopped either. There should be relatively few leave requests. We focus on stability!
I will work hard to make the next book longer!
Then, let’s talk about the ending point of the final chapter.
I saw many book friends saying it was sudden, and some friends in the group complained, but in fact, Xiao Mengxin said a long time ago that the structure of this book is almost 2 million words, and it is just right now. It can be seen that the outline is not distorted. Yes, the overall rhythm is no problem, and Xiao Mengxin’s control ability is very strong (cross out)...
You can read the previous chapters. Basically all the pitfalls have been filled. This book has learned the lessons from the previous book. The length of the final battle has been slowed down a bit, and the clearance method and some details have been buried very early. The foreshadowing and foreshadowing should be more obvious if you watch it from beginning to end.
Regarding the God of Destiny - in fact, in my setting, the old gods are players at the 3.0 civilization level. The content of the 2.0 version is about the grudges and resentments that occurred during the growth of the new gods of each race. Destiny will eventually appear as the final BOSS at the end of 2.0 ( In fact, Destiny is just a rookie in version 3.0), and the gap between each civilization level is very large. There is actually a foreshadowing here, the Ant-Man civilization.
In the text, Gu Chi guides the Ant-Man civilization to find trouble with fools, but in fact, the fools outside the loop have been GG a long time ago. When the Ant-Man civilization arrived at the land of the gods one day, the fools could not be found. Yes, but you can find your destiny (laughing to death), this foreshadowing should have been pointed out through another foreshadowing in the early stage of version 2.0, and then revealed in the middle and late stages, but because this newbie did not write the outline of 2.0 (dog head akimbo), and was not sure to write it Okay, after thinking about it, I decided to end the story of Sister Xia Leng, the Goddess Huang Xi, Youyou and Avreya with such a small tail.
What, Gu Chi?
I don’t know who Gu Chi is, I only know the female protagonists (乐).
In fact, you should also feel that if you continue to write version 2.0, the world view will be very huge. With Xiao Mengxin’s current writing power, there is a high probability that it will not be able to control it. Rather than falling apart and unfinished in the middle of writing, it is better to follow the original Plan, I will stop after writing 1.0, and leave some room for readers to imagine - look, I am so considerate!
Having said that - from Xiao Mengxin's own perspective, this book is complete in terms of main plot, characters, and some emotional lines. The whole story may not be great, but it shouldn't be too bad. From the previous book Old friends who have been chasing after card makers will definitely find that this book is much better than the previous one, whether it is the writing power, writing techniques, the way of ambush the pen, and the narrative of the entire frame. This is something Xiao Mengxin himself agrees with. (Feel good about yourself, happy).
The results are also much better than the previous one.
This is actually quite surprising.
It was the first time I wrote the Wu Quxing book. The reading was much more than I expected and the pressure was great. This caused the rhythm to change in the middle and later stages of the copy, and I also wasted a lot of manuscripts I had saved. Fortunately, I managed to stabilize myself later and finished the book. The book will definitely not make this mistake!
Let’s get back to this book.
There are several aspects, one is about the character design of Youyouzi.
Her character and family have actually been foreshadowed in advance. She may be unpleasant or even annoying, but what Mengxin wants to say is that the internal and external logic of this character should be okay. The environment has distorted the character. Her twisted personality caused her behavior to be incomprehensible until she was redeemed by Gu Chi. The girl who had lacked care since she was a child put away all her perversity and carefully protected this hard-won emotion. Some readers have previously questioned that this is not a yandere, but in fact, This is yandere, but the giving type, not the harming type.
She has been treated unfairly, so she hates the real world, but at the same time, her nature is kind-hearted, so she will ignore the risks in the real world for the sake of Huang Xi, and in order not to hurt others, she resists not using anything. The player's ability is struggling on the edge of darkness. You may not believe it if you tell me. This is the truest portrayal of the heart of everyone who has suffered violence.
Of course, this still cannot change the fact that she is not liked by many people. Next time, Xiaomengxin will modify the character so that she can be accepted and liked by more people, but the writing method remains unchanged, that is, the environment affects the character, and the character affects the behavior. , thereby creating a more realistic character.
The second is a copy of Horizon whose relationship is as confusing as a headphone cable.
Judging from the feedback, this dungeon was undoubtedly a failure, especially the final oasis stage, but at that time, the content that should be explained in the entire dungeon was already fixed, and there was no way to modify it. I had to bite the bullet and write it down, otherwise it would collapse. Even more awesome, I discussed this issue later when I was chatting with a reader friend. If I could write it again, I would change the mode.
It is probably set from the rules that each player must integrate into the character, otherwise a certain "health point" or score will be deducted, forcing the players to act from a higher dimension, and then letting Gu Chi tease them with sexy operations. I hate this old six. But I have to co-star with him, so it should look better.
But it’s too late. I’m sorry for bringing you a bad reading experience. I will definitely change it next time!
You can rest assured that Xiao Meng Xin really knows how to change things when he says they have changed. This book has basically avoided all the pitfalls encountered in the previous book, including pacing issues. Although Meng Xin has no writing talent, his learning ability is still there. OK, I am good at learning from experience. The writing is a bit bad, but it also shows that there is a lot of room for improvement, right? (dog head)
The third is the original mode.
This was actually a low-level mistake. I might have lost my mind at the time and forgot the most important point. I was thinking about how to take advantage of Xiao Poyou, but I didn’t realize that deliberately suppressing the protagonist would bring about a very bad negative reading experience. There is nothing to say, I will just stand at attention and take the beating (gently), and I will promise never to do it again next time!
Then……
It seems there is no more?
Oh, yes, in the middle of this month (April) the group will open the last lottery for this book. Anyone who has fully subscribed can join the group and fill out the form!
Finally, let’s talk about the new book.
The classification has not been decided yet, but I will probably choose one of three among fairy tales, western fantasy, and fantasy. It will still have multiple female protagonists. The style will not change, and it will still be mainly light-hearted. The book is expected to be released from July to September. Come on and save the manuscript!
To be honest, I actually had about 70,000 words of manuscripts for this book before it was published, but as I wrote it, it disappeared before it was put on the shelves. I don’t know why (confused).
Maybe that change of pace wasted too many saved manuscripts?
Anyway, the next book won’t be like this.
Finally, I would like to thank you all for your support all the way. Without you, there would be no achievement of this book - although at the starting point, the performance of this book is not very good, and it is still far from the real big brother, but Xiao Mengxin Very contented!
Writing is a process of progress. I said in the last book that this book will be better, and now I want to say the same thing - the next book will be better than this one!
If you can't do that, you can just——
forget it! (do not hit me)
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Thank you again for your support and your patience in seeing this. I give you a thumbs up: Or2.
I hope to see you again in the next book, /bixin.
One day from July to September, see you there!