Curriculum Testimonials

Thanks to the book friends who have supported me all the way, thank you very much, this volume is now completely over, and the Canghua chapter has come to an end.

In the middle, I deleted, edited, and deleted many branches. For example, the little green snake will evolve in this volume, Lillie will find Shirabi and Xu Qiansu to start a story, and Lusamine will also have a lot of roles... I have all these It was deleted, and most of the space in this volume was used to write about Cattleya and Zoroya.

So simply chat with you a few words, and answer some questions from book friends.

The source of inspiration for this volume is the remonstrance left by the witch who died at the beginning of the old ring for the player.

"Even if the guide is broken, please be the king of Elden"

The entire volume is written because of this sentence, and there are some elements of the chainsaw man and the world's wonderful story in the middle. Some book friends have already guessed it while watching it, so I won't point it out here.

Overall, I am quite satisfied with the Canghua chapter, far more satisfied than the Cuixue chapter and Silver Wind chapter.

Cui Xue in the Cui Xue chapter was written too hastily and too stiffly.

Cattleya helped Xu Qiansu settle the alliance for fun, and the perception was not very good.

The haunted house at the beginning of the Silver Wind chapter should be written more delicately and more interestingly.

The middle part of winter camping is too boring, and the subsequent cataclysm is too straightforward to read.

The first two volumes can be regarded as having their own bright spots, but both have considerable flaws. I wanted to change them, but I didn't know where to start, so I gave up.

Compared with the previous two chapters, the Canghua chapter is obviously much better.

The foreshadowing is better than that of the Cuixue chapter, and the story's transition and succession are more reasonable and gentle, that is, in terms of romance and rhythm, it is not as good as the Cuixue chapter.

As for the Silver Wind Chapter... Except for the daily life and "Traveler", there seems to be nothing in the Silver Wind Chapter that can be achieved.

The Canghua chapter absorbed my experience and lessons from the first two volumes. It can be regarded as a product of absorbing the strengths of the first two volumes and discarding the shortcomings of the first two volumes.

More reasonable than Cuixue, more lyrical than Yinfeng, but not as deeply moved by Cuixue, nor as happy in the early and mid-term of Yinfeng... It can be regarded as a bucket.

When new readers read this book, I always suspect that the bad content I mentioned above will dissuade them, but Canghua chapter does not have this trouble. relatively few.

What I am most dissatisfied with about Cang Hua is that the rhythm is too slow, so slow that it seriously affects the perception.

But that's just my dissatisfaction.

In fact, many book friends hate Cattleya's character design, thinking that she is very clever, and she manipulates the whole situation to make Susu die for Zhulan, isn't she a tyrant? In addition, I answered at the time that this plot is not chasing a husband, so the book has no logic in an instant, the character design collapses, and the Canghua chapter is extremely poisonous.

What's more, they directly hung the book on the post bar to ridicule.

At that time, a reader who scolded me for being weak and immature after reading Cui Xue immediately came to the comment area to mock me, and I didn't know that this book was hung up. Check out that post.

I won't say what he scolded, so as not to affect the good mood of the book friends, but I was greatly shocked.

I only visit B station, and I have never used software such as Doukuai, wb, Little Sweet Potato, and Tieba Zhihu.

But when I read that post, and then spent two hours in the post bar, I finally understood this stalk.

Don't get me wrong, I'm not angry, or lost or anything, on the contrary, I feel very interesting, I feel that I am still too tender and too young.

The criticisms I suffered before, those points of being hacked, are simply not of the same order of magnitude as compared with the straightforward words of the post bar brother.

Let me give you an example that I often give you.

The chicken fork is big.

As the leader of the harem style, he was even blacked out by the old man on the post bar.

"Ask the Red Dust", the first volume I like very much, was called weak and immature Wenqing by the old man on the post bar, abused the master, dark, Wenqing Wenqing Wenqing, full of poisonous points.

Then the volumes behind Jichada changed the writing style to cater to the market, but in the end they were still scolded that the plot was immature, lacking in depth and logic. What's more, they don't read the book at all, and directly scold the subject of many heroines, thinking that writing fairy tales should abandon lust and so on. Violation, writing about the most disgusting subject of modern people...well, the harem.

Hahahahahaha, I laughed at that time, from the bottom of my heart.

Well, web articles always have their own bright spots and their own shortcomings, just make use of their strengths and avoid weaknesses.

I don't know how to write slapstick and cool articles, so I won't write. I write daily life, love, and Pokémon that I am good at... So you just call me this is not a cool article, there is no pretending to slap your face, this It's true, I think, but it's just a matter of subject matter, and I don't think it's worth making a fuss about.

Some authors are good at writing elven novels with a fantasy style of pretending to slap faces, grassroots counterattacks, but not very good at writing about daily life and love, so he can just write about nurturing and fighting.

There are a group of book friends of their own, and everyone reads the part they like to read.

Directly attack the short points of a certain book without thinking, pay attention to the attack without thinking, and even attack the subject matter itself... It is a bit childish to be true, as if the background of Dream of Red Mansions is a feudal society. Joy every day these points are as hard as black.

However, it seems that 99% of the Internet articles in the post bar are not worth mentioning, and they all have points that can be attacked, so I was listed on it, and I became famous indirectly hahaha.

Everyone is scolded, and I am not alone.

But to be honest... It's still very interesting to fish and paddle in the post bar and see all kinds of stinky mouths of the old brothers in the post bar.

Cough cough, it's too far away, let's talk about this book again.

In fact, many readers can't accept the adventure of Xicui part, thinking that I have changed the taste of this book again, and I have written it to death.

For one thing, Miss Mary made too few appearances.

Second, the daily life is not good-looking, and many places are blurred and incomprehensible.

Three times, instead of writing about Pokémon, write about Cattleya.

As for Ms. Mary, as the soul of the first two volumes, she has a lot of popularity, her role is reduced, and she is suspected of stock trading, so many book lovers skip this volume directly. I think this is correct, indeed. There was a problem with the scripting. (However, there are also many book lovers who have gained some refreshment from it... Well, Miss Niu Mali)

Because if Miss Mary and Xu Qiansu came to Xicui together, there would be nothing to do with Cattleya... There would be nothing to do with her emotionally, and it would truly be "Jia is gone".

So this is a last resort for the sake of many heroines. Considering the characters, if Miss Mary is not sent away, it is absolutely impossible for Xu Qiansu to open up to anyone... My writing skills are limited, so I can only write like this.

Regarding the daily life, it mainly focuses on the daily communication between Xu Qiansu and Cattleya, which are all dialogues, with occasional benefits mixed in, but more of them are a lot of inexplicable expressions and movements, which many people find inexplicable, confused, and weird .

This is what I did on purpose. I didn't deliberately write it inexplicably, but deliberately wrote the emotional drama in a subtle and euphemistic manner.

Xu Qiansu, Ma Li, and Cattleya are all smart, quick thinking, and keen observation skills... It is similar to Miss Hui Ye's "Psychological Warfare in Love between Genius Boys and Girls", except that I didn't write happy love comedies, but It is reflected in their words and deeds.

As far as the relationship between Xu Qiansu and Cattleya is concerned, many of Xu Qiansu's words are subtle and euphemistic.

Let me give you a very straightforward example that I have written in the text for your understanding.

Feng turned into Cresselia, which made Cattleya fall into a sweet dream. Xu Qiansu cared about Cattleya, but said, "As Pokémon, Xanadu and the others always make me feel more at ease in terms of safety."

The logic of this sentence is that you and the Pokémon are in a dream - the Pokémon are not as weak as you - he doesn't have to worry too much about the Pokémon - but you are very weak, I am afraid that you will act The spiritual body cannot afford a dream.

And Cattleya was well aware of Xu Qiansu's implicit statement, so she felt relieved, and thought to herself, even if he cared about herself, he wouldn't say it so bluntly, he would only use this implicit statement.

Yes, implicit, these two words carried through Xu Qiansu and Cattleya's love from beginning to end, carried out almost every word Xu Qiansu said to Cattleya, and occasionally said a few straightforward words that were close to Cattleya It was also Cattleya who forced Xu Qiansu to say it by means of words and tricks... This is why Cattleya often smiles like a 'winner'.

Another example.

Beili Town was assassinated, Xu Qiansu asked after touching Ye Zi, "...you don't read my mind anymore?"

This sentence was hinting at Cattleya. He already knew that Cattleya killed the two of them. He hoped that Cattleya could tell him anything, without hiding it.

"If I want to study, I can study. Besides, sincerity is often mutual. If you are willing to treat me sincerely, I will naturally not read your heart every time." Cattleya blinked before explaining... This is the original text .

Cattleya guessed from Xu Qiansu's reaction that he found something tricky, but she couldn't be sure, but she didn't dare to read her mind. It was similar to self-evasion... because she didn't want Xu Qiansu to die for Zhulan at the moment, she herself didn't want to die for Zhulan. Constantly struggling, she hoped that Xu Qiansu could find out the problem by herself and live on. At that time, Cattleya would have nothing to say and accept her fate calmly.

The reason why she mentioned sincerity is because she and Xu Qiansu had talked about sincerity when they were at the seaside villa, and said that they should treat each other with sincerity, but at this moment, Xu Qiansu guessed Cattleya's secret, but didn't tell Cattleya. No matter how sincere, Cattleya has never been sincere from beginning to end... so full of irony and self-deprecation.

This kind of conversation with deep meaning has always been there since the two came to Xicui.

If you read this volume and read it again, you should have a different feeling... I won’t give more examples here. To put it bluntly, it will lose its flavor.

Someone here is about to ask, Cattleya is obviously struggling and complicated in her heart, but she can't tell it at all! It didn't show up at all!

Except for bad women, you can only see the attribute of a defeated dog.

Is it because you didn't think about it that much at all, and now you say this just to heighten the depth and let us readers make up their own minds! ?

no.

Ordinary novels and anime, in order to highlight the growth of the protagonist, will indeed go through a series of processes such as failure, confusion, and pain, and then make up their minds, accomplish something, and grow.

But Cattleya is not. She is an adult, with quick thinking and clever mind. Even if she has complicated thoughts, she will take action when she should, and she will never be soft.

Regardless of her heart, she is decisive and unambiguous in her actions.

Before she was confused, she acted decisively.

Confused, she still acts decisively.

No more confusion...then don't mention it, and act more decisively.

Compared with the general main characters, Cattleya does not have the plot of "triggering events due to confusion and pain, thus growing up (changing goals/washing white, etc.)"... That kind of character design is too naive for Cattleya .

So she gave herself a psychological hint without hesitation and asked Xu Qiansu to die for Zhulan.

She also committed herself to Xu Qiansu in the reverse world without hesitation, and helped him return to Xicui again.

So when she was rejected by Xu Qiansu in front of the oden cook, she just said 'I knew it a long time ago', other than that, she didn't respond... Of course, I did this on purpose,

However, in order for readers to understand, I still added a lot of narration, leading to Cattleya's complicated mind...but there are still quite a few readers who say they don't understand.

This point is purely because this kind of implicit writing method is not suitable for online texts at all. Most readers just want to read it without thinking about it. Who wants to spend their time thinking about the various meanings of the characters' actions and words in the book? Why is it so tiring to read a novel?

How to write the emotional drama of the characters is simple and easy to understand, how to make it cool and warm.

Therefore, like Xu Qiansu and Cattleya's subtle and euphemistic, full of deep meaning, the vast majority of readers can't understand it, so it's normal to find it boring and boring... But if you don't understand, I understand, you scold Xu Qiansu, Mary, and Cattleya are straight men and straight women, so they scolded me for not knowing how to write emotional scenes, so what?

In the future, I will try to reduce as much as possible such subtle and euphemistic love plots that make people tired and confused.

Try to write about love as simple and understandable as possible. After all, I also have to eat. Using love to generate electricity is really unrealistic.

But I still want a subtle sense of atmosphere.

Xu Qiansu's frank confession of "I like Miss Mary" is used in the whole book, and only this time... to reject Cattleya.

Then why did Xu Qiansu reject Cattleya? Can't you just pay them all?

No, because this is a romance novel, not a stallion essay. Xu Qiansu will not accept one after another, nor will he accept girls like collecting achievements and items... Men and women mainly have heart-to-heart communication, and they must have a good relationship.

Xu Qiansu is a principled person. He may be lustful, but he will not do things that break the bottom line. If he likes Mary, he will not date any woman, but he will have a process of becoming a scumbag... Cattleya was the key, the key to his change.

Xu Qiansu lost his memory, so he just had a crush on Cattleya, but Cattleya was still not as good as Miss Mary in his heart... That's why he refused, not flirting with her.

Then why wait until we return to modern times before refusing? Xu Qiansu just throw away Cattleya after using it, right?

no.

Rejection at this moment is for symmetry and blank space.

When they were in Beili Town, the two had eaten oden. At that time, Cattleya asked Xu Qiansu if he liked Mary. Xu Qiansu didn't answer, but just agreed that when they returned to modern times, they must eat oden again.

Back in modern times, when everything was over and the curtain fell, Xu Qiansu answered Cattleya's question in almost the same place.

It is more flavorful to write like this, not because Xu Qiansu used Cattleya.

Those who say that the male protagonist is flirting with every woman, I said, I’m ambiguous, you’re so hot, don’t see a male protagonist who can talk about love and think he is a scumbag, co-authoring the male protagonist can only be dull Fighting Frenzy/Hot-Blooded Youth/Dark Stream and so on, right?

I'm writing love essays, so can't the male protagonist know how to talk about love?

Xu Qiansu was so indifferent to Li Liai before, did you not mention it at all?

...

Some book friends think that I am writing amnesia because I want to write that kind of bloody plot, but in fact it is not at all... One of the purposes of this paragraph is to deepen Xu Qiansu's character design.

He is very smart, he guessed through the book left by Sorolla, the lost two minutes of memory, etc., that Cattleya must have paid a considerable price for him, and must have sacrificed a lot of things.

So although he didn't love Cattleya, he decided to love her.

That's why I said that this plot is not about chasing husbands and crematoriums.

Xu Qiansu and Cattleya, from the moment Xu Qiansu made up his mind to love her...these two have become.

In the character column, I wrote that Xu Qiansu and Cattleya are lovers.

Regarding the arrangement of the love drama in the future, I will not reveal much at the moment.

When I wrote the chapter "Silver Moon and the Incarnation of Sweet Dreams", I knew from the beginning that Cresselia was Maple. I thought it was romantic and sad for this episode, so sad that when I was writing it, I was so sad. I can't hold back every time, and I write for a while... At that time, I made up my mind, no matter what, I must give Xu Qiansu, Mary, Cattleya and other heroes and heroines a happy ending.

They must be happy!

In addition, there is also Kyurem’s tragic fate for Cattleya. Many book friends still don’t understand what it is. After all, I don’t mention it very positively, and I explain it in Cattleya’s tone.

Now let me be blunt.

In fact, from the very beginning, fate has come.

Cattleya, in fact, never had a happy day.

Trapped by super powers since childhood, the most common thing to do is to sit alone in the room and stare at the high blue wall.

Her rare source of happiness is bamboo orchid.

After controlling the superpower, Zhulan's life and death weighed heavily on her heart again.

After finding a way to keep Zhulan alive, she truly fell in love with Xu Qiansu again.

She wanted Zhulan to live, but she didn't want Xu Qiansu to die, so Zen Jing thought hard and sacrificed herself.

But when Xu Qiansu successfully returned to modern times and Zhulan survived, she had fallen in love with Xu Qiansu completely, and even gave him her body (although it was a true fusion of soul and flesh), but Xu Qiansu directly rejected her... This, even It was Cattleya's own choice.

In the reverse space, if she doesn't seal Xu Qiansu's memory, then Xu Qiansu will die.

If Xu Qiansu's memory is sealed, Xu Qiansu will not fall in love with her.

She's always making choices like this...

Kyurem's prophecy at the time was [The future is doomed to lose happiness and lose Cattleya's most important thing. 】

Cattleya thinks there is a causal relationship, losing the most important thing for Cattleya, and thus losing happiness... This is wrong, this is Cattleya's own guess, she thought Zhulan would die, Xu Qiansu would die, But it is not.

She will lose happiness, which means that after she learns the prophecy, she will not have a day of happiness.

She will lose something important, which means that she fell in love with Xu Qiansu completely, and after she had paid so much for Xu Qiansu, even 70% of her mental strength, she would personally seal his memory... As a result, she lost Xu Qiansu in love.

There is also the connection between superpowers and Zhulan and Xu Qiansu, there are gains and losses, that's all.

I don't want to say more, I'm tired, and if I write too bluntly, it will lose its flavor.

It doesn't matter if everyone doesn't understand, because Kyurem's prophecy has been cracked.

By Xu Qiansu, by Soraya.

Kyurem set a time limit at the time, which was March 7.

On the night of March 7th, everything was over. Xu Qiansu rejected Cattleya, but when the time hit zero, on March 8th, Xu Qiansu decided to love her... because of Sorolla's book.

Destiny is unpredictable, no one can crack it, but in my article, there is one and only one way to break through fate... that is Pokémon.

Cattleya was in the inversion space back then, so she could have thrown Sorolla back and brought Xu Qiansu back by force, there was absolutely no need to help Xu Qiansu.

But she chose to help Xu Qiansu and Soraya spend the last month at the cost of losing 70% of her spiritual power.

Even though she was for Xu Qiansu, even though she didn't care about Sorolla at all, she gave Sorolla a chance to say goodbye to Susu, so by chance, the book left by Sorolla made Xu Qiansu decide to love her.

As long as you pay for Pokémon, Pokémon will definitely reward you in various places!

This is throughout the book.

In this volume, I cut down the part of the Pokémon story and wrote Cattleya with all the pen and ink, just to emphasize this point at the end of the volume.

So those who say that I have changed my taste and don't write Pokémon, you are actually guessing wrong.

Even though Soroya and Xu Qiansu have experienced very little and are not as good as Xanadu, she is still willing to endure thousands of years of loneliness and pain for Xu Qiansu.

This kind of Pokémon born out of resentment is full of love for Xu Qiansu. This kind of love, like resentment, gave Soraya a life that can survive for thousands of years.

Why is Xu Qiansu's Zoroya so special?

I have already written in the original text that Soroya was born into this world with love. Her mother, Xu Qiansu, and Feng all love her.

I don't have much to say about her mother, but Sorolla was lying outside Qunqing Town, waiting for Xu Qiansu to fall asleep, but her injuries were inexplicably healed...

Soroya was thrown out when he was a child and lived independently. It is customary to wait for someone to kill him and feel resentment in his heart before he can become a perfect body and have strength.

A Pokémon born of resentment, her mother never forced Soraya to hate anyone, and never interfered with Sorolla's choice.

This kind of detail has already highlighted the mother's love for Sorolla.

There are many more meaningful things, so I won't say more.

I'm tired and don't want to explain any more.

All in all, the reason why Xu Qiansu's Pokémon is different is not the appearance, not the strength, not the cheat, but the story.

Thanks to Ah Le, the lord who wanted the fan, and Yiye Zhiqiu for the rewards, I will add more, and I will talk about it later in the text.

I wrote 6,000 words in my testimonial, and I feel that there is still a lot to say, but I am tired, so I will continue to talk when I have a chance.

Thanks for the support. Thank you very much!