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The second volume, Demon Slayer: Blade (1) has come to an end. I don’t know what you think of this volume. I personally hope that everyone can comment on the plot of this volume. If it is well written, praise it Don't be stingy, if the writing is poor, I hope to point it out in a friendly way so that I can continue to improve.
This volume is actually a transitional volume in the early stage, allowing Liu Xia to pass the weakest stage in the early stage, and then she can consider going to some more advanced dungeons, of course, the next volume will not be available for the time being.
Some readers may have doubts about Liuxia's choice to become a ghost when fighting against Yiwoza, but in fact, I have laid the groundwork many times before. Liuxia herself has the idea of becoming a ghost, and then faces Yiwoza After being forced into the palace by the nest, he naturally chose to become a ghost.
The battle with Yiwozuo is also my personal opinion. It has been a well-written battle so far. Some readers may not have noticed that the battle between Liuxia and Yiwozuo actually lasted for nearly ten chapters, but the whole process is not divided. The wave advantage, I have the wave advantage, you come and go, until finally Yiwozuo succeeds in forcing the palace in the form of an evil ghost, and the curtain comes to an end when Liu Xia turns into a ghost. This way of writing should not be called water, right?
Back to the topic, there are many benefits of becoming a ghost. Immortality, immortality, and death are all afraid of me... No, it is the ability of blood ghosts. Turning into a ghost can greatly improve the current strength. The most important thing is to survive. Ability has been greatly enhanced!
Moreover, Liu Xia knew that the side effects could be eliminated by raising the spirit foundation. In this case, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages anyway, so she chose to become a ghost without hesitation.
If you still have doubts about the plot, you are welcome to leave a message in the comment area. On the premise of not involving spoilers, I will selectively answer some questions.
Of course, for completely spoiler questions such as 'when did Liuxia's trajectory differ from the original', 'what is the purpose of the root formula' and other completely spoiler questions, please forgive me, anyway, I will definitely give a powerful answer in the later stage The answer is yes, you can look forward to it.
And then about the world to be written in the next volume.
The world I want to write in the third volume is—the event book of King El-Melloi II, which involves the clock tower’s authority, organizational structure, etc., and there are many obscure magic knowledge, I will try my best to write Keep it simple and accessible, and focus on the story, not the magic.
Then when it's on the shelves, I hope everyone won't contribute to the first order because the plot is not exciting enough (manual gestures), alas, the plot of Yiwozuo is so explosive, why can't it be put on the shelves in this section, sigh.
In this volume, the side effects of Lucia's ghost blood will be erased, and the first treasure will be obtained, so stay tuned!
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