Explanation 1
I'm a little dissatisfied with the last few chapters I've written, and I don't even know what I'm writing. So I hope you will allow me to take my time these two days and think carefully about some writing issues.
The main reason is that the writing taste is wrong. It lacks the open and free feeling of the previous stories, and it feels a bit chaotic, sticky and indescribable. But I think readers who read this book can feel what I want to say.
In fact, there is an outline of the novel, but it is not very detailed. When the story progresses, I have to write out all the details myself. This leads to me writing, and all kinds of small details will be connected. Continuously occupying chapter after chapter. You may not believe it when I tell you, but according to my original plan, the content of the subjugation of bandits at the beginning of the third volume only occupied a small amount of space in this volume. However, as a result, the various contents and details overwhelmed the simple plot in the original plan. It was stretched open.
Yes, even if I opened it, as soon as I typed it, I felt that there were countless details in the simple storyline. Before the writing ability and the priority of the story, I deleted all kinds of trivial content. . What you see is actually the result of me deliberately ignoring the details. Otherwise, in a simple plot, I could even directly describe all the subtle expressions and verbal reactions of the characters.
That's it. Generally speaking, in a dialogue plot, if there are only one or two people talking, then the various demeanor details of the two people can be described in detail. But once there are more people on the field, everything becomes chaotic. Now my writing skills are not good enough. Although I simulated the lively scene in my mind, it is difficult to write it out. Secondly, the entire novel became particularly bloated.
For example, when Longsos entertained visiting guests in the lobby of the small hotel building he rented, if my writing became bloated, I would introduce each person who spoke or who was present in turn at the beginning.
Is this introduction from the third-person perspective of God, or from the perspective of Ronthos?
The two have very different introductions and descriptions of the individuals on the scene.
If it were unfolded from God's perspective, then all book friends would have the same information that I know about the characters. But in this way, let alone lengthy descriptions to introduce each person, whether they like it or not, and whether they find it boring or not, the originally interesting plot becomes uninteresting.
If it is unfolded from the perspective of Longsos. Due to the difference in intelligence, he did not know many of the people he met for the first time, which added to the suspense. However, this made their dialogues and positions less distinct. Each character It was as if they were wearing a cloak of mist, so their words became very strange.
In short, when I was writing, sometimes I would think more, and sometimes, I wouldn’t be able to do it. What I wrote felt inexplicable to me. I couldn’t see it when I was writing. After all, it was in my mind. There is not even the slightest difference between what I think and what I write.
Having said this, I don’t even know what I said. Anyway, everyone asked me to slow down and find my state. It will definitely be updated tomorrow. It feels best to listen to the medieval background BGM for a day.