Volume 2 Summary and Reflections

The second volume [Dragon Bird] is over.

Long-form writing is very exhausting, so I divided it into volumes according to the big storyline.

The first volume is the starting point, explaining the first plot "The Rebellion of Corpse Puppets", and also buried two more obscure lines by the way.

However, due to novice reasons, I made a lot of newcomer mistakes, so the first volume is a bit unsatisfactory overall.

As for the second volume, the core plot is Lu Qingshan's first natal sword. Personally, I am quite satisfied, because the writing of this volume is considered to have completed my established plan.

Of course, the buried thread in the second volume must be much more than that in the first volume.

It is a pity that the original plan was to end at just seventy chapters, but the writing of the two chapters tonight was relatively slow, and it was almost twelve o'clock when they were finished, so there was no time to divide them into chapters, and they were published as one chapter, so The number of chapters in the second volume is stuck at the number of sixty-nine chapters, which is very uncomfortable.

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The preface of this volume is: Ande leans on the sword of heaven, cuts the long whale across the sea, which is also a summary of the core plot of this volume.

In fact, many people have already guessed the first half of Yitianjian, but the second half of the sentence seems to have been guessed by no readers? Of course, it is also possible that someone guessed it, but they just didn't say it, but since they didn't say it, I'll just pretend that no one guessed it.

The clues were actually buried very early and appeared many times.

This is actually a state that I personally like very much. It is a good thing that readers are willing to predict the plot. But it's not good if the reader guesses all of them; but it's not good if they don't guess all of them.

The boundary of half of this kind of guessing is just right.

The inspiration for this volume comes from when I was conceiving the name of the Natal Sword for Lu Qingshan, the name Yitianjian Tulongdao suddenly flashed through my mind.

Later, from Yitianjian, I thought of Ande Yitianjian, the poem about crossing the sea and beheading a long whale. With this poem as the outline, the plot of this volume was gradually conceived by me.

So this volume is roughly the story of "Yi Tian Sword, Dragon Slaying Sword and Longevity Whale".

Of course, there are still many problems in writing, and I am slowly improving and correcting them. For example, the character image is not three-dimensional enough, the emotional rendering can never reach the taste I want, and the vocabulary for combat special effects is very lacking, etc. There are still some miscellaneous problems, some of which can be corrected immediately, but some of them are caused by insufficient accumulation, and I need to improve slowly, so I won’t mention them for the time being.

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Let me just say something off topic.

1. Results

The grades of this book are not good, and everyone can see it.

As I said before, I made some mistakes at the beginning, so I failed to advance after trying to push the water.

The collection of this book is currently 6000, which is very poor, but I am actually fine, because it has been so long, and my mental state has been adjusted since I am old.

And I'm quite satisfied, although the book is basically running naked, but now it can increase by fifty or sixty collections in a day, right? Over time, it seems that breaking ten thousand collections is just around the corner? (beautiful)

Then there is the subscription results. When the second volume was written, the average subscription was seventy or eighty. It's beautiful! By the way, I am looking forward to a wave. After the third volume is finished, the average order can be increased by another one or two hundred.

2. update

Recently, in order to strive for full attendance, I started to work hard at 4000+ per day, which should be the amount of updates for a long time to come. (The author who gets off work at seven o'clock every day said that he has worked hard~)

Explain full attendance. Full attendance means that after the work is put on the shelves, more than 4,000 words are updated every day in the current month. Next month, China Literature will send the author a full attendance reward of 600 yuan.

Speaking of which, reading articles only start to pay when the manuscript remuneration reaches 200 yuan, so it is very sad that due to poor grades, I have not received the first manuscript fee (a few hundred yuan) until last Thursday. It can be regarded as generating electricity for love for more than half a year,

So the 600 yuan for full attendance still has to work hard.

At the same time, I would like to ask you guys to subscribe again, thank you guys! !

3. A little problem

Before posting, I will definitely go through the full text again to check for typos, grammar mistakes, and word usage, but there is a very strange phenomenon... I don’t know why, there are some mistakes that I can’t find in this inspection, I must subscribe to it on the Qidian app myself, read it from a reader's perspective, and then modify it.

Therefore, it is best for you to subscribe ten minutes after the release of the new chapter. The new chapter at that time will be the final version, with almost no typos and fewer unsound sentences.

4. thanks

Up to now, although the book is still very exciting, trolls still inevitably appear.

I don't want to quarrel with others on the Internet, so I don't like to talk back to the comments of trolls (it's meaningless to talk back, people just trot for the sake of trolling), usually just laugh it off, and if I really can't see it, delete comments and ban people But it is inevitable that sometimes I will be a little discouraged.

At times like this, it is often someone from the background who voted for a few recommended votes and monthly tickets, which immediately cheered me up again.

So I want to solemnly thank the big readers who have supported this book, especially those who are willing to vote and subscribe to this book. It is you who make me so motivated to continue to persevere.

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Finally, I would like to preview the third volume. No surprises, the third volume should be a transitional volume, and it will be a little shorter.

I still don't know if tomorrow's update will come out on time, because I have to pull out the outline before I officially write it.