Volume 1 Summary and Testimonials

Yes, there are still a few chapters left in the first volume of Chang'an Rebellion.

Personally, I was not very satisfied with the first volume.

First of all, at the beginning, I made a common mistake of cute new authors, throwing away a lot of unpleasant settings.

Then there is the problem of writing. Some readers feel that the text is too much nonsense and too long-winded. I admit this, reflect on it, and strive to simplify the text.

In fact, this problem is because when I write the article, I always want to explain everything clearly to everyone. I am afraid that the readers will have doubts. For example, every decision made by the characters in the book, I want to explain why he does it. But in fact, I don’t need to explain it in most cases, and you know it. Even after I explained it, the flavor disappeared.

This gave me the biggest insight that the author cannot write everything when writing a book. In fact, no matter for the reader or the author, it is more interesting for the reader to imagine and ponder some plots than for the author to cover everything.

The last big problem is the setting problem.

The settings are all done in advance, but the situation I encountered is that some settings should be fine in my expectation, but after writing dozens of chapters, I suddenly find that they are not suitable.

For example, the skill of Celestial Eye, maybe someone noticed that I basically stopped writing it later. It's not that I forgot, but that this skill is too buggy.

The purpose of setting up this skill at first is to save yourself a hand. As long as there is this skill, it means that the disguise of the underworld cultivator will be invisible in front of Lu Qingshan, and there is no such thing as Kawen. (And there are quite a lot of words on the information panel~)

Later, as I wrote and wrote, I found that writing this way was indeed easy, but the story also became boring.

I still hope that Lu Qingshan can use his own brain to solve problems, instead of relying on this kind of brainless skills, so I can only use the spring and autumn brushwork to silently downplay this skill. (Everyone will assume that this skill was deleted by the designer because it is too strong...)

By the way, let me explain to you the more controversial places in the book.

First of all, Lu Qingshan's legendary talent [Natural Sword Species], many people think it is too weak to be called a legendary talent.

In fact, in my setting, this talent is really very strong, but it is more manifested in hidden aspects rather than in statistics, but I can only explain this at the moment, because it will spoil spoilers if I talk about it any further. up.

The power of [Natural Sword Species] will begin to be reflected in the next second volume.

As for the main content of the second volume, careful readers should be able to guess what it is. After all, there are quite a lot of hints, and even the crying soul sword was killed by the plot.

The other thing is the setting of the attribute. In a word, the attribute is not important. The meaning of the attribute from the beginning is just to distinguish the six professions, so don't worry about why the sword repair is a strength attribute.

Also, some readers feel that there are too many female characters in the book? In fact, it is not necessary at all. These female characters are not heroines, but they are just female characters in the plot. Why should everyone care about it? I have never seen anyone complaining about too many male characters. Why are there too many female characters? It's a joke.

After all, this is the first book I have written. In fact, there are quite a lot of problems, so I won't repeat them one by one for the time being.

Now I go back and look at the previous chapters, and it is obvious that there are many things worth correcting, ranging from the use of words and sentences to the setting of the plot.

But this is a good thing in my opinion. After all, being able to discover the previous shortcomings at least shows that I am making progress.

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The next thing is to put it on the shelves. The book will be put on the shelves on May 1st, that is, it will be put on the shelves tomorrow. According to the usual practice, I would like to thank the editor in charge for willing to sign this book with me.

Then I hope that everyone who has the ability can support the subscription. If you are still a student or do not have a lot of money, you can understand that you can’t fully subscribe. Try to support the first subscription, after all, the first chapter is only a dime.

Finally, let’s talk about the update. I update very rarely. Apart from being lazy and procrastinating, there are indeed objective difficulties.

One is that this is my first book, I have no writing experience before, and I am not used to the writing rhythm of online articles. I am too easily entangled when writing articles. , wasting a lot of time.

Second, because I am a graduate, it is really difficult to concentrate on writing the essay when I am faced with trivial matters such as graduation thesis and employment. In May and June, I will also face trivial matters such as the defense, so the update may not be fast for the time being. Get up, I would like to apologize to everyone here, and I will try my best to bring the update up after this period of time has passed!

Finally, although there are still many problems, I will definitely continue to correct and improve. Thank you for your tolerance and support, bow!