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I read the comments,

Some chapters said that the typos mentioned in it were basically changed. If they didn’t change, they didn’t see it.

Let me talk about the problems that have been mentioned in the comments,

The first is the problem of too many realms.

Many people commented that there are too many small realms, saying that it will be very procrastinating, but in fact, I set these small realms themselves similar to progress bars to show the protagonist's own small progress, and a small breakthrough in three days will pass. Like some early web articles, it is extremely difficult to break through dozens of chapters from the peak of the early stage to the mid-term card, like a big realm. There is no analogy to this.

Breakthrough is easy, and it doesn't matter how many settings there are, otherwise, like a certain Lu, he will fly to the sky in less than a few days, so this book is a fart.

Secondly, there is the issue of perception.

The protagonist's talent is average, there is no doubt that a genius can master the martial arts and martial arts three or four times. Three hours.

As for the problem of frequent epiphanies, I actually have a setting for this.

But it’s a long story. If you write it all in one chapter and you say that the flood caused disasters, I will explain it later when I find a suitable plot.

In short, the setting of the protagonist is an ordinary person, an ordinary salted fish traveler in the new century.

Finally, there is the matter of words,

At the beginning, I used one sentence and one paragraph to cultivate my own concise narrative. If I can finish one paragraph, don't use three paragraphs and four paragraphs to fill in the water. As a result, many people responded that it seemed uncomfortable, so they changed it later.

As a result, you saw it.

The narrative is not concise,

I used to pour water into the sentences and the plot, and it almost became a flood. A fight in the ring took four or five chapters for me, which became protracted and lengthy.

Obviously using concise language to write about two or three chapters, the rhythm is just right for the ring battle that can be written, and it drags on until it is top-heavy.

Many people later said water, which is largely related to my change of wording.

So don't worry about it,

What I wrote is not RMB, and it is impossible to make everyone like it. Next, I will change back to the previous concise narrative method,

Of course there will be some improvements, but I will change the overall style back to before.

This style itself is actually a typesetting suitable for mobile clients. If you like it, you can continue to support it. If you don’t like it, I can’t help it.

that's it.

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PS:

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