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Last night, I watched "The Work of the Dragon King!" "resulting in no writing, the nine-headed dragon Bayi is awesome! Empty silver is high!
Is this the hot-blooded boy? Love love love.
I didn’t write at all, so I asked for a day off, and by the way, I also sorted out my next thoughts. As we all know, this book is coming to an end. It is expected to be finished by the end of this year. There are still some things to write. It’s not that fast, but it’s here. At the end of the day.
Let’s continue to share with you some discarded settings here.
One, I originally wanted to refer to the battle of Sarhu about the battle where Fulgan guarded Constantiniya, that is, no matter how many enemies come, I will only go all the way and defeat the three armies one after another. Let Mortarion join, the Lord of the Death Guard Legion is best at judging the situation of the war and choosing the time to attack, but his weakness lies in being overly cautious and hesitant to do big things. He forgets his original purpose when he sees small gains, so he finally wrote so.
Second, the trip to Ulthuan originally had some additional plots later, such as the war between the dark elves and the high elves in the north, and also included further battles between Ryan and Fulgrim with the undead pirates and the witch king Malekith, but obviously this One of the plots is that the protagonist’s participation is not enough, and the second reader is not very interested, so it ends a bit hastily in the end.
3. In the same way, the Tomb King should have its own plot. I thought about it a lot. We all know that the Tomb King is a relatively unpopular camp. If I want to write, many people will probably I was confused, and I was suspicious of writing the background in detail, so in the end, the plot of the Tomb King was minimized, and only a small part of Khalida was written.
Fourth, the chapters originally planned to be written after Ryan, Lilith and Morgiana took the opportunity to go northward to investigate the Chaos Wasteland after visiting Dulong City were also deleted.
Fifth, there are two regrets in this book. The first regret is that the relationship between the characters at the beginning was not handled well. The first is the wandering knight Ike. In fact, Ryan was a knight of the kingdom at the time, and Ike was essentially a " People within the "system", he is inconvenient to tear up his face with Ike. On the one hand, he considers his reputation. On the other hand, this kind of wandering knight is of noble origin, which also means problems with connections and getting along with colleagues in the future, but I have not discussed with readers. Make it clear, so it seems that Ryan seems to be afraid of trouble so he backed down.
six. The second regret is the problem of character design. As we all know, Teresa received a lot of scolding at the beginning. I always wanted to write a character design of a tsundere warlock lady, but on the one hand, I lacked experience, and on the other hand, my writing skills The problem is that it only writes proud but not charming, and this kind of character design is no longer likable, and readers can't see the real person's appearance. , Ye Naifa and Beunita, if you can't see the face, I am afraid that most readers will not like it.
In the same way, Olika is the one with the most distinctive personality, the strongest presence, and the most likable.
In the same way, as the first heroine (laughs), Su Liya’s character design has not been established, resulting in a weak sense of presence. I spent a lot of writing power to barely establish her position as the main palace. What a failure! As for the reason, it is related to Article 7 below.
7. In my original writing plan, after the protagonist arrives in Bator, there should be a plot where the protagonist should take risks alone as the Holy Grail and solve various problems for the common people. This plot is the best way to establish the character of Suria, but unfortunately due to rhythm problems And reader preference issues, end up immediately becoming a baron, and it's hard to write about that after entering lord mode.
Eight, as mentioned earlier, originally only four main heroines were designed, namely the knight Ji Suria, the imperial lady Emilia, the sorceress Teresa and the dark elf maid Orika, but the latter one was not planned. Zhou, the second is the greedy nature of men, and the third is the trend of readers, which led to the addition of several heroines successively. As a result, the plan was broken, the pen and ink were not enough, and many problems occurred. Nika took it away and was divided by Aurora. For example, Suria squeezed Sylvia's role, for example, Morgiana squeezed Suria's role, and the fairy of the lake squeezed Morgiana The roles of each role are squeezed one by one, and at the same time squeezed the roles of other roles.
Ninth, due to the problem of the outline and the length of the writing, some of the heroine storylines I compiled in advance have been written, so I envisioned adding one or two heroines later, and I also made very detailed character designs at that time. The prototype is a famous anime heroine of KyoAni, and another prototype is a real person who became popular because of a video, but considering that the book is about to be finished, it will be discarded in the end, but don’t worry, the next one You will see them in this book.
10. Regarding the 40K plot, I deliberately weakened it in the later stage. The first one is that there are too many scolding and criticisms, which leads to personal extreme irritability. The second is also that the 40K plot is too grand and affects the main line. Moreover, the complex personality of the original body It is very difficult to write about the characteristics of each person. I often have to read those official novels over and over again and read the evaluations of various bigwigs to figure out and study the characters. This makes it very laborious and time-consuming to write, such as Angron, Primarchs with distinctive personalities such as Guilliman and Russ are much easier to write, but when it comes to complex and profound primaries such as Jonson, Fulgrim, and Sanguinius, it is very difficult to read through, and it is very tiring to write.
In the same way, 40k things are also very tiring to write. If you are too reductive, you will be scolded for copying it. It goes without saying what the ending is too second.
What's even more funny is that some people will read the second set after other big guys have interpreted it, and then use their own three sets, even four sets, and five sets to scold my second set.
Brother, it's not a thing at all, it's not a thing at all.
But the content of 40K will also be written later, after all, this is the chessboard where the emperor and the evil god wrestle, and it is already entering the final game.
Eleven, I originally planned to write a short story of about ten chapters. It was the plot of the god of war, Devonhill, and his old uncle Angron, who went on an adventure to the ancient ruins of Obien. The uncle and nephew worked together to solve the problem. O'Brien's ancient secret, but similarly, the plot was too long and affected the rhythm of the writing, so it was also canceled from the plan in the end.
Twelve, the fatigue in the middle and late stages has tortured me very much. If it is not necessary to finish writing ET, I really want to end. Some plots in the back have always been a little flawed, maybe many people have not noticed. , but I still have to apologize.
Thirteen, full booking has benefits, everyone understands it naturally.
Fourteen, the next book is already being conceived, and it is generally the typical western fantasy style and background, but I will add a little bit of oriental elements. This time, we must do a good job in character design and outline, and don’t make previous mistakes again. So I will take a (longer) break after writing.
In the end, the emperor is here to thank you, and please read the masters to accompany this book to the last journey.
The emperor pouted his butt at you!
Orz.