Infinite Legend: The Mechanic

Overwatch Recap, Plus Interviews with Extras

So, "Overwatch" is finally and completely over.

I don't want to say whether it was successful or not, but at least this story is what I want to tell. But to be honest, "Overwatch" has received a lot of criticism, and many times it is so big that I almost want to give up. But I still insist on at least telling the story completely.

If the first part of "Watching Pioneer" is a war around the core of the black sun, then the second part of "Watching Pioneer" revolves around the conspiracies between Peacock and Shimada Tatsuya. Therefore, in fact, the big scenes in the next part will be much less.

Moreover, this part also exposed many of my problems, in terms of writing, writing, and experience. If I were to rewrite "Watching Pioneer" again now, I estimate that I can reduce the word count by about one-third. Because when I re-read this part myself, I really felt that the amount of information contained in each chapter was too small.

This made me directly feel that the plot in many places is a bit immobile, and it is very tiring to write it myself. So, there are too many places where I still need to improve in this respect. Only then did I realize that Jin Yong, as a master of his generation, can describe a martial arts picture scroll with ups and downs with hundreds of thousands of words, but I can only write one stage with hundreds of thousands of words. The gap is too big.

But, the reason why the second part of "Watching Pioneer" is longer is also because too many characters are described in it. Among the ten ninjas, except for Sibei and Liubei, the others have some space to describe. This made me struggle painfully while wanting to shorten the length and complete the plot. So many things were not written in the end.

For example, I originally wanted Hanzo and Genji to fall in love with Peacock at the same time, and then there was a conflict. But in the end, the plot ended without a problem after Genji confessed to Peacock, because if the plot unfolds again, it will really be unstoppable.

So to sum up, I am very satisfied with the first part of "Overwatch", it is relatively compact. I can only say that the next part of "Watching Pioneer" is that I am very satisfied with the design of this plot, but I have thought too much, even too much, which makes this chapter too scattered and too slow.

Therefore, you need to make your own language concise, this is the first thing that needs to be improved. In addition, it is also necessary to avoid the multi-clue approach of the second part of "Overwatch" in the future plot design. This is the second need for improvement.

However, in the second part of "Watching Pioneer", I am quite satisfied with the characters I created. The women Peacock, d.va, Jiubei and Shibei, as well as Shimada Tatsuya and Zhang Feng. I also used a lot of pen and ink to portray the characters of these people, and in the end the characteristics are more distinct.

Then there is the question about d.va.

In fact, it was decided a long time ago to send lunch boxes to d.va. She must be a woman who will appear in Tang Yu's early stage, because in the later stage, her ability is very embarrassing.

In terms of multi-line operation, in terms of response speed, and in terms of operation speed, can it compare with computers? In fact, after Tang Yu installed a photon computer in his mind, his combat power was as good as d.va's. In this case, I have to take care of the number of appearances of d.va, so that she has some records, so that she does not become a vase, it is really difficult.

So you can imagine how embarrassing she would be if d.va was brought back as an 'l'. The most likely result is to say sweetly "My husband, you are back!" every time I go home, and then start rbq.

It would be a very cruel thing to leave her in the world ten years ago. Because she will see another d.va grow up slowly, enjoy a happy life that she never had, become a big star, and take away all her previous aura. This feeling is more terrifying than killing her.

Therefore, d.va disappears, but some of her memories affect d.va in this timeline, and the two are merged into one to some extent, which is the best result.

So that's all I want to say about "Overwatch", Philips blades, give me a dozen first.

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Then it's time for the popular extras to go on camera! !

Character 1: Hank

Played by: Shuyou - Uncle Zhang

Xiaojing: So Uncle Zhang is playing Hank! I became Soldier 77 in Watch Part 1, and I also stand firmly behind Jack Morrison! He appeared in both the Battle of Sejong City Laboratory and the Battle of Incheon. And in the second part, there are not many scenes, but you are doing your best to protect the special envoy Rogge. Regarding this journey of Overwatch, do you want to say something?

Uncle Zhang: I just don’t want to be reconciled to Resident Evil Operation Raccoon City. Only this work is the protagonist, and other Resident Evil series are all soy sauce. That’s why I suggest that the author add such a trick, and it’s also a tribute to Overwatch. I am very satisfied with this work of Blizzard, so I have always wanted to explore its background story. Unfortunately, when Blizzard released this game, it may only be a trial of an fps game. The background story is limited to a small part of the description of each character, plus There are no official novels or comics about Overwatch on the Internet. Thank you, the author, for giving me this opportunity so that I can make up for some of my regrets. Sincerely.

Xiaojing: So the prototype of this Hank is the fourth survivor in "Resident Evil 2", Death Hank (hunk) ah! However, due to the needs of the plot, this character is more like a veteran. There is still a gap with the image of Hank, the god of death.

Uncle Zhang: It doesn’t matter. At that time, I had to choose between the Master Chief and Hank in the Delta Special Forces for a long time before giving Hank this answer. It's a pleasure to be a part of this drama!

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Character 2: Zhang Feng

Played by: Shuyou—Arms detroit

Xiaojing: Then there is Matsushima Feng who is so bad in this plot, oh no, it was Zhang Feng who said~~~ As such a big villain, what do you think?

Arms detroit: I am very happy to be content with being a little bit of a dragon and suddenly become a villain with a plot in the world. I still have a good impression of the author’s setting of the peacock and his own innovation. After all, reasonable innovation is infinite An interesting bit of flow.

Xiaojing: But I was asking Zhang Feng!

Arms Detroit: As for my evaluation of the plot, I am a very normal villain, but I feel the deep malice in Zhang Feng's final ending. Haha, but I am still very happy to read the novels I participated in, and I will always support the author greatly.

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Character 3: Martin Heraf

Played by: book friend—asphyxia-suffocate

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Character 4: Zhou Qing

Played by: Book Friend——Young Zhou

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The interviews with the above two characters will be posted later when they organize their language!

Then, "The Mechanic of Infinite Legend" is about to enter the next volume, the promotion battle! ! !

ps: This chapter is free.

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