The 258th Chapter My Mother-in-Law Is a Loyal Servant (2)

"Student D, give me the script first."

He Tiantian did not rush to ask Xiao D about the specific situation of this new task.

After the rescue mission just concluded, He Tiantian found that there was still a certain distance between the stories she heard from others and what she had seen and experienced.

Just like in the previous world, if he hadn't actually entered the world, it would have been difficult for He Tiantian to find out the reason for the failure of the previous writer based on the introduction of Xiao D.

The script or something may not be as intuitive as personal experience, but if you study it carefully, you can still find some clues.

"Good!"

Xiao D didn't know what He Tiantian was thinking, so he readily agreed and transmitted the original script and the scripts that the first two writers should have written to He Tiantian in turn.

He Tiantian first received the original script——

Well, how should I put it, this is a very wonderful ancient farming text.

There is no time-travel, no rebirth, a very orthodox ancient romance.

There is farming, there is business, there is strategy, and there is palace fighting.

The key is that the author's writing is very good, the frame structure of the world, the character setting, and the detailed description are all in place.

Obviously there is no time-travel plot, which makes people read, but there is still a sense of substitution.

Because she portrays the characters in a very three-dimensional, full and vivid way, the protagonists, supporting roles and even some small characters who do not appear in front of them but only exist in the mouths of others are also impressive.

Not a pale paper man, no facebook.

And the characters of some important characters have not collapsed from beginning to end.

The plot does not collapse, and the perfect characters do not collapse, making it feel like a hearty reading.

It stands to reason that such a piece is enough to be called a boutique, and it should not need a writer to revise it.

However, He Tiantian read it carefully and finally found a small problem.

"This small plot cannot be said to be poorly written, but the overall level of this book seems to be a little worse than that.

"

He Tiantian has done more than ten tasks and written more than a dozen books, and has already left the level of a rookie.

She has experience, and she is getting smarter and sharper.

Therefore, she quickly found an uncomfortable place in this piece of ancient sayings and farming texts that can be called fine.

"Gu Xiuniang! There's something wrong with this male lead's adoptive mother!"

He Tiantian's eyes fell on a villain who had only played once or twice.

He Tiantian didn't rush to ask, but kept this idea in mind and continued to read the script rewritten by the first writer.

Although this writer failed, she was very keen and also discovered the problem of Gu Xiuniang's character.

According to the setting of the characters in the script, Gu Xiuniang is a vicious villain who prefers sons to daughters and dares to act.

After she married her husband, she did not have children for several years.

The mother-in-law's family didn't persecute her, and both her mother-in-law and her husband said they would go with the flow.

Gu Xiuniang herself was in a hurry. In order to give birth to a child, to be precise, to give birth to a son, she was a little obsessed.

All kinds of birth remedies, whether they are reliable or not, she uses them all.

After several years of tossing, the mother-in-law was a little bit disgusted and wanted to beat her, but at this time, Gu Xiuniang became pregnant.

This was originally a good thing, but Gu Xiuniang was too capable.

When I was seven or eight months pregnant, I always felt that my pregnancy was not very good, and I looked like a daughter no matter what.

Gu Xiuniang dreamed of becoming a man in one fell swoop. After she suspected that the child in her womb was a daughter, she became a little crazy.

She unexpectedly came to "steal the dragon and turn the phoenix".

Quietly ordered people to ask around to see who had pregnant women who gave birth at the same time.

After giving up a lot of money, I really bought a few pregnant women.

Gu Xiuniang's plan was absurd and crazy: after she gave birth, it would be fine if she gave birth to a son.

If it is a daughter, and among those pregnant women, as long as there is a son, she will exchange the two children!

She was so stupid, but she was still stupid, and was soon noticed by her shrewd mother-in-law.

Coincidentally, Mrs. Hou, who was served by her mother-in-law, was about to give birth, and it happened that some accidents happened at this time, and her mother-in-law had an idea and came to "a plan to plan".

Soon after, Gu Xiuniang, Mrs. Hou and the other women gave birth to children one after another.

Gu Xiuniang gave birth to a daughter, but Mrs. Hou gave birth to a son.

Among those women, two also gave birth to sons.

Gu Xiuniang's mother-in-law's sister-in-law secretly took the newborn baby girl to exchange with one of the families according to the instructions of taking care of Xiuniang.

The mother-in-law took the opportunity to intervene and replaced Mrs. Hou's son with Gu Xiuniang.

And this son is naturally the male lead.

Gu Xiuniang also became the male lead's adoptive mother.

Gu Xiuniang didn't know it herself, she was proud of herself and raised the male protagonist like a darling.

But Gu Xiuniang's daughter became the daughter of the Hou Mansion.

However, within a few years, something happened to the Hou Mansion, and the house was raided and sold.

Although Gu Xiuniang's mother-in-law was working in the Hou Mansion, her man was a good citizen, and with the support of the Hou Mansion, she had a small birth.

After the Hou Mansion was defeated, Gu Xiuniang's men hurriedly redeemed the old lady.

But this old maid was a loyal servant, caring for the old master, and asked her son to redeem the mother and daughter of Mrs. Hou, and even bought a small courtyard to house them.

Later, Hou Ye was remorseful, and the Hou Mansion regained its glory.

But in that accident, Hou Ye injured his body and could no longer bear children.

A mansion so big cannot be without an heir.

At this time, the male protagonist was already twelve or thirteen years old, and he was motivated to read, just like a well-known young talent around him.

Gu Xiuniang's mother-in-law took the initiative to expose, saying that her daughter-in-law was reckless, stealing the dragon and turning the phoenix, and confused the blood of the Houfu for her own selfish interests.

Once such anecdote was exposed, it immediately attracted a lot of attention.

In the end, of course, everyone went to their respective positions, and Gu Xiuniang, the selfish and daring vicious dragon trick, also got the end it deserved.

Although this episode is about the male protagonist, it does not account for a large proportion of the full text.

If it is a TV series, it is estimated that it is the plot of the first two episodes.

After all, the most exciting part of this article is the various plots after the male protagonist grows up.

The love line, the career line, revenge, and exploring more secrets, these are the key points.

And the reason why the author created Gu Xiuniang such a superb adoptive mother is not without reason:

First, it was to give the male protagonist from a wealthy family a reason to become childhood sweethearts with the female protagonist from a commoner.

Second, it is to highlight the male protagonist's personal charm. The bamboo shoots out good bamboo shoots, and the mud is not stained. Even if he was raised by the best, he can still become a beautiful, kind and upright person.

Third, it's even simpler. Such a complicated life experience is in line with the identity of the male protagonist, and it can also make the plot twists and turns.

The author made the characters very vivid, and when readers read Gu Xiuniang, they gnashed their teeth in hatred.

However, if you read it carefully, you will feel awkward.

Gu Xiuniang is so superb, and she raised the male protagonist, even though she was only 12 or 13 years old.

However, at this age, people are basically able to characterize.

Gu Xiuniang's character is inferior, but she has raised an excellent son. Of course, this is to show that the male protagonist is good enough.

However, the influence of the family of origin and the teachings of parents are really important.

The male protagonist is still perfect, somewhat fake.

In addition, after the scandal of Gu Xiuniang's "changing son" was revealed, the male protagonist was shocked and heartbroken. Although he begged for Gu Xiuniang, he finally made the choice to help or not.

The author wants to highlight the calmness and rationality of the male protagonist, as well as his adherence to the three views and the bottom line.

However, there are still a small number of readers who think that the male protagonist is too ruthless. Although Gu Xiuniang is shameless, she is really kind to the male protagonist. It's not an exaggeration to dig your heart out.

Moreover, Gu Xiuniang didn't think about secretly changing the young master of Hou's mansion. The pregnant women she recruited were all from poor backgrounds.

It was Gu Xiuniang's mother-in-law and his mother-in-law, Mrs. Hou, who really made Hou Nanzhu grow up in a small family and did not enjoy the glory and wealth that should belong to him.

After all, no matter how vicious Gu Xiuniang was, she was only the daughter-in-law of a servant's family. If she hadn't been summoned, she wouldn't even be able to enter the gate of the Hou residence.

It is impossible for her to steal the noble son of the Houfu.

After the male protagonist was replaced by Gu Xiuniang, Gu Xiuniang regarded him as his lifeblood.

Take your heart out and give it your all!

Therefore, everyone in the world can accuse and scold Gu Xiuniang, but the male protagonist cannot.

And the one who is really pitiful and truly qualified to resent Gu Xiuniang is that "fake daughter", Wei Yuanniang, Gu Xiuniang's biological daughter.

Wei Yuanniang was not willing to become the fake daughter of the Hou Mansion.

Later, her life experience was revealed. She went from being a daughter of a noble man to a granddaughter of a servant girl. In the end, she ended up being married to another country and dying young and tragic.

How innocent is she?

Even if she was transferred to the Hou Mansion and became a so-called daughter, she only lived a few years of wealth.

Later, the Hou Mansion was guilty, and she suffered with Madam Hou, and was disfigured for saving Madam Hou.

After finally making it to the Hou Mansion, she became a "civet cat" who "changed the civet cat for the prince"!

He Tiantian:  …

"Oh, Wei Yuanniang is really miserable, no wonder some readers sympathized and made a complaint!"

It was originally a very good work, but was complained by readers because of this small plot, and Dianniang Library had to send a writer to revise it.

So, there was the first writer.

The target of her crossing is naturally Wei Yuanniang.

After crossing over, Wei Yuanniang was familiar with the plot, so she started a counterattack.

The process is very cool, but the main frame of the plot is messed up, and the male protagonist is about to be wiped out.

And the hero and heroine are the pillars to maintain the world. If there is a problem with the hero, the whole small world is in danger of collapse.

So, the first writer failed.

Then came the second writer.

This one learned the lesson of his predecessor, and instead of killing the Quartet, he started a mode of cooperation with the male protagonist.

She's kind, she's gentle, and she also used the goods purchased in the Dianniang mall to restore the original owner's appearance, and then——

Uh, no then.

The world suddenly issued a warning that there was a danger of collapse!

The second writer was directly deceived: she did not oppose the male and female protagonists, nor did she change the main plot, so how could she endanger the entire small world? !

Too wrong, there is wood!

"...If you don't have Tiantian's experience in the previous world, the system doesn't know it yet."

"It is because of your discovery that the system has a guess: that Wei Yuanniang from Yomo has also awakened!"

Xiao D was chattering in He Tiantian's ear.

"It's not that Dianniangshuku has never encountered awakened characters, but most of them are male or female protagonists, or even important supporting roles."

As for Wei Yuanniang, let alone one female and two females, she is not even a female supporting role.

At most, it is a dragon set with a name.

Her awakening can actually affect the stability of the entire world, even the system did not expect it.

"Aside from this plot, this book is actually very good. The system doesn't want such a good work to be taken off the shelves, so I want to save it again!"

"Of course, because this task is more difficult, the points are very considerable. In addition, the writers have a certain degree of autonomy-"

Xiao D continued to introduce.

He Tiantian nodded slowly, "I see! Is there no clear mission this time? As long as we can save the world?"

"That's right! Sweet, this task is indeed more troublesome than the last one, because the awakened Wei Yuanniang has turned black—"

Xiao D shook Xiao Yuan's body and spoke slowly.

"You said just now that this mission is very autonomous?" He Tiantian suddenly asked.

"That's right! Because it is difficult, and it has failed twice, the system will not be too rigid. As long as the stability of the small world can be ensured and the work can be put on the shelves again, the writers can play freely!"

Xiao D's classmate answered obediently.

"Can you change the role of crossing?"

"Huh? The role of transmigration?"

"Yes, classmate Xiao D, don't forget, I'm a 'villain professional', and Wei Yuanniang is not a villain. At most, she is a poor cannon fodder." A smile appeared in He Tiantian's eyes.

Xiao D was a little dumbfounded, why Tiantian started to take the initiative to be the villain again.

Of course, classmate Xiao D is no longer the silly white sweet he used to be.

After thinking for a while, it reacted, "Tiantian, don't you want to pass through to become Gu Xiuniang? Do you want to advance the time-travel node before there is no change?"

"No, no, there must be a plot of 'changing children', otherwise the whole plot will collapse."

There is no "civet cat for the prince", how did the "Prince" grow up in the folk?

How can he grow up with the heroine and love each other? !

In addition, some subsequent plots will also be affected.

He Xiu Niang's mother-in-law, because she made a great contribution to the matter of "changing sons", later exposed her daughter-in-law, which is also a righteous death.

She is the spokesperson of the "loyal servant"!

If there is no "exchange", what does this "loyal servant" use to show his bravery and loyalty? !

Xiao D was a little anxious and shouted.

"The crossing node can be skipped ahead of time, and everything about 'substituting' will be carried out normally. I only ask to cross into Gu Xiuniang!"

He Tiantian glanced at the frazzled classmate D, hmph, she knew that "independence" was a lie.

Of course, He Tiantian also understands.

If the main storyline could be changed at will, the world would have collapsed long ago, and there would be no need for writers to rescue it.