Chapter 22 Good Names and Broken Dogs

Yan Yan nodded.

"If you can't even use coloring pages for photos, I really can't think of any other content that can be used for coloring pages, especially swimwear, which attracts the attention of teenagers. How did you come up with the idea of ​​starting with photos?"

Shen Xin touched her nose, feeling a little embarrassed, after all, it wasn't his idea.

"Is there any idea for the development of the following story? With this kind of beginning, it won't collapse later, right?" Yan Yan asked.

"Affirmatively not!" Shen Xin said firmly.

It has been almost 20 years since the book was finished. To put it an exaggeration, the son of the hero and heroine should also be admitted to college. How could it be possible to collapse?

Moreover, "I"s" is a comic serialized on "jump", its story and name are checked by the editor of "jump", and the requirements for manuscripts must be higher than most magazines. Where confidence lies.

"I believe you this time." Yan Kun nodded with a chuckle, and continued to look down.

The following comics introduce the male protagonist Yi Gui, and the first three pages of photos are from the magazine in Yi Gui's hands.

The girl Yizhi in the photo is Yigui's classmate. She looks pure and is sought after by many boys, and Yigui is one of them.

Yi Gui's good friend Gu Jingya discovered Yi Zhi's photo shoot for a magazine by chance, and told him about it.

Yi Gui is very concerned about the magazine, but he also knows that there is a big distance between him and Yizhi, and it is almost impossible to have a closer communication with Yizhi.

"These two people's identities are so different, how can they overlap?" Yan Qu read the name carefully, frowning.

The drawing on the next page solved Yan Qu's doubts.

Because the class will hold a "freshman welcome party", there must be two executive committee members, one male and one female. The method adopted by the class teacher Huzi was to draw lots. As for the result of the lottery, Yi Gui and Yizhi "coincidentally" became the "lucky ones".

"It turned out to be a coincidence." Yan Qu nodded slightly, many cartoonists like the method of coincidence.

Because both of them are executive committee members, they have the opportunity to communicate after class.

The next day, Yi Gui walked proudly to the corridor of the classroom, while Gu Jingya followed behind him, teasing him and Yizhi. Inadvertently, Yi Gui found that outside the opposite teaching building, there was another group of boys surrounding the classroom, looking into the classroom through the window, and making fun of Iori who was rehearsing the dance from time to time, most of which were related to "chest" and "* *"related.

Yigui was so angry that he didn't care about other things. He picked up a wooden stick and charged at these boys, driving them away desperately. Then the curtains of the classroom were opened, and the teacher angrily scolded the boys inside. At this time, Yigui could only After driving the other boys away, he was the only one left outside the window.

With tears in his eyes, Yi Zhi looked at Yi Gui. Gu Jingya pulled Yi Gui and fled in embarrassment.

Name ends here abruptly.

"Huh?" Yan Yan was excited when he was watching, and suddenly found that the name was gone, his face was confused, and the next moment he raised his head and looked at Shen Xin, "Where is the name behind?"

"No...not anymore." Shen Xin scratched her head and said with a dry smile.

"It's gone!?" Yan Yu frowned, glaring at Shen Xin angrily, "How could it be gone below?"

"Sister Yan, cough, next..."

Shen Xin didn't know how to answer Yan Fang.

"Ah? Next? Sister Yan, does she want some noodles? There seems to be none at home. How about I go buy them?" Xi Muzhen walked out of the kitchen with a soup bowl in his hand, and looked at Yan Chen with a confused expression.

Yan Yan's cheeks turned red instantly, she also heard the ambiguity in the words, coughed twice, "I don't like noodles, we are just discussing the plot."

Then, she glared at the innocent Shen Xin, "You know, what do I want to say the most right now?"

"I know. 'One day with a knife in hand, I will slaughter all the dogs in the world'.

"Shen Xin said honestly.

If he hadn't read the manga in advance, he would have said this to Gui Zhenghe as well.

"Broken dog? Uh... that's pretty much it. I said, can't you finish the story, or not draw the last episode?"

Yan Fang's current feeling is like a kitten constantly scratching her heart, she is indescribably uncomfortable.

From the current point of view, the misunderstanding between Yigui and Yizhi has already occurred, and this is only the first chapter of the story, which means that the two people will have to resolve the misunderstanding in the future.

Judging from the first episode, Yigui likes Yizhi, but he doesn't have the courage to tell Yizhi, which shows that the hero's character is indecisive, and the girl is a person with strong self-esteem, otherwise she would not cry.

They should not take the initiative to admit their mistakes, so how to open this knot? What will Iori think of Yigui?

The more he thought about it, the more anxious Yan Yu became.

"Sister Yan, you also know that the reason why I draw the name like this is to attract readers? If I don't get the plot stuck at the most critical moment, will they still want to read the next episode? Of course, it's easy to do so Offending readers, I will recite this infamy." Shen Xin sighed, with a look of about to die.

"I... accept your words, but, is it really gone?" Yan Kun was unwilling to reconcile, and repeated it again.

"No, Sister Yan, this is the name on page 55, not page 20. It is still difficult to draw it."

Although the names of chapters 2 and 3 have been drawn, Shen Xin does not intend to hand them over.

These two days, when Shen Xin practiced the names of the second and third chapters, she thought about many things. His current skill in name is too different from that of Gui Zhenghe. If he draws it completely according to the cartoon of "I"s", he will imperceptibly raise his own strength.

He would rather "pretend to be a pig and eat a tiger" than to be "slapped in the face". Therefore, Shen Xin decided to start from the second chapter and use the name he drew.

As for the first chapter, Shen Xin decided to use Gui Zhenghe's original name. The reason is also very simple. There is a saying of "crested head, leopard tail and pig belly" in high school composition, and online novels emphasize the "three golden chapters". Whether it is a comic or a novel, a good beginning largely determines the quality of the book. score.

"Okay, now that I've said so much, let me mention the shortcomings of this name." Yan Qu took a deep breath, trying to stop thinking about the name of the second chapter.

"Eh? Are there any shortcomings?" Shen Xin asked in surprise.

Just now I was still thinking, in order to ensure the quality of the first episode, Shen Xin decided to use Gui Zhenghe's name, how could there be shortcomings in a blink of an eye?

"Anyway, I think it's inappropriate, mainly in terms of the story. The perspective of comics is a bit single, and the progress of the story is all described from Yi Gui's perspective. This will bring readers into Yi Gui's perspective...Will this be the case? Missing some female readers? And, judging from the first chapter, Iori’s image is still three-dimensional. But this is a romance comic, right?”

Shen Xin nodded.

"So there must be other female characters, so what should they do? Your painting method will make other characters thinner." Yan Qu said worriedly.

Hit the nail on the head.

Shen Xin looked at Yan Yu in surprise, these shortcomings are also the most criticized part of "I"s".

Almost the entire manga is written around the male protagonist, so Kazuki Seto's portrayal is very successful, but the follow-up, especially the last character, is reduced to paper due to insufficient space.

This is a problem with the structure of "I"s", and there is no solution unless the name is changed extensively.

I didn't expect that Yan Yu could see so many problems from the first episode, which is too powerful.

Shen Xin suddenly felt that Yan Yan was really good, but he decided to continue drawing under Gui Zhenghe's name, "Sister Yan, now manga has been developed for so many years since Master Osamu Tezuka, do you think there is a perfect manga? ?”

"No." Yan Yan shook his head.

"That's it. I don't think a good comic can cover everything. If it says everything, it means it doesn't talk about anything. How can a comic with no characteristics be remembered? And once the comic has characteristics, it must be missing something. "Two evils, whichever is lesser, and two benefits whichever is more important", I can only do my best to bring out my advantages. As for the disadvantages - if everyone thinks that this It's a good comic, and the shortcomings are not so important." Shen Xin explained.

Yan Yu rubbed his chin, what Shen Xin said was indeed reasonable.