Hogwarts on the Tip of the Tongue

The Third Volume Is a Summary, a Vote, an Explanation, and a Request for Leave.

Well, actually, regarding the content of this volume, strictly speaking, it was originally a blend of part of the main content that was abandoned at the end of the first volume and the end of the second volume. It is based on the original main outline plot, and naturally follows the character's personality. It was a derived plot that was a little difficult to write because it was not originally in the established outline.

Of course... I also play Gugu more often. My breeder now calls me Gugu directly...

In fact, the reason why I planned to skip this plot before was because in the original setting, Gellert Grindelwald in this timeline had already passed away with dignity (specifically the world of Bad end). (I have released the detailed outline in the group before), and in this volume, more old wizards choose to sacrifice themselves and leave their hope to the young future...

After all, this kind of writing should be very tense. After all, everyone likes to hide a blade secretly in the tone of the story of Elbow Brother, Jiangnan, and Squid. Only stories that make people cry will be memorable. This is very Reasonable—that’s weird!

After thinking about it carefully, I have been debating whether or not to get a knife some time ago, and it was only the day before yesterday that I finally decided.

In fact, the tone of "Hogwarts on the Tip of the Tongue" has been mentioned from the beginning. Elena travels into this magical world, or the original intention of any fan fiction author, most of them want to make up for it. It's a pity that those unhappy stories become fairy tales. If they are written for the sake of torture, then the truth will become real, but something will be lost.

As Elena Kaslana gradually matures, I hope that she will not just be a soulless "strong person" who is purely addicted to the enjoyment of personal power, even if she becomes the Fairy Queen and the third generation Dark Lord , what she builds and pursues should not be simple material satisfaction or social status. Creating a fairy tale country is the meaning of her coming here.

As Elena said at the end of the volume, there are many fantasy powers beyond nature in this world.

They can be black technology, superpowers, supernatural powers, magic. However, when we talk about magic, especially when magic is mentioned in a work like HP, it has only one definition, and that is to make the story a fairy tale. the power of.

Only fairies can cast magic, witches always cast witchcraft.

Because of these reasons, the theme of this volume gradually became clear, reconciliation and fairy tales.

The longer a story is written, the creator or the reader will inevitably want to see some new content and make changes. At this time, the original content will be affected, and deviations from the topic are inevitable. .

However, compared to the deflection of the center of gravity of the elements, I actually care more about whether the core of the story has changed.

Therefore, if it is to tell a nice and exciting story, then the "on the tip of the tongue" element cannot be compromised, but the world must still be Hogwarts. It is not just a castle, it should also represent a kind of The most idealistic fairy tale is as if Elena can never become the cold devil because she doesn't care about it.

Back to the story itself in this volume, there were indeed many problems in the middle, and there were too many branches that almost caused the story to collapse.

This aspect is a very serious shortcoming for me. Unlike the lack of plot that most authors worry about, as a senior fat chicken who has almost reached the full level of the "Reader Sequence" experience bar, I can derive the plot in my mind. There are so many divergent points and wonderful plots that even if you divide the day into every hour, it is not enough.

For example, Quidditch, Magical Beasts PM, Hogwarts Online Classes, Bean Currency, Foundation, Visceral Revolution...each of these can support a relatively complete story line when unfolded individually, or even combined to open a new book. Write alone. Regarding this issue, I hope that I will make more progress in the future and try to learn to do subtraction.

What Elena hopes for is actually very simple. She just wants a fairy tale world where everyone is harmonious.

Harry, Malfoy, Black, Malfoy, Snape, Black, Grindelwald, Scamander, and even the wizards of the former Soviet Union and the saints, veterans and wizards of the past, they may be in the past and the future They will become enemies, but because of Elena's appearance, all of them can get a relatively relieved and happy ending.

Therefore, you only need to write according to this main line. It is okay to cut off some other content.

This is roughly the main problem summarized. Before this volume, the follow-up has not been ideal. In this regard, there are factors such as the frequent requests for leave, and there are also factors in which the plot line is relatively loose. Of course, it is more about updates. The word count is really too low. After all, according to the advice of many big writers, if you update more, there will be no problem.

However, I feel that these attempts at confusion and change are very necessary, because after writing this volume, it solved many of my subsequent confusions about writing, as well as the problem of plot selection, and the following paragraph "Elena" The effect of "List" also proves this point. The average number of follow-up subscriptions has resumed and increased, which can be considered good news.

The title of the fourth volume is "A Certain Scientific Hogwarts", and it was also the third volume that I originally planned to start writing directly.

This is actually a large plot that was conceived a long time ago. It tells the story of the new world that is created when the two paths of human civilization's pursuit of truth are combined. This is a very important link and the climax of the plot. point.

Compared with the small fights before, from here on we will really try to integrate civilizations.

Grindelwald failed decades ago, and Aunt JKR, who wrote the original novel about this world, also failed to show the intersection of this fairy tale world and the real world very well. Many fan authors will mostly collapse in this place to advocate a certain side. , which led to a strange deflection in the focus of the entire worldview, and in the end it either turned into a cool Internet article, or it was just for self-pleasure.

From here on, there is nothing to refer to in the plot. Every step is created by the characters themselves.

The stupid fat chicken with half a round face is actually very worried about whether he will completely fail in this volume. After all, he is engaged in academic research, and it is easy to be polarized and boring and overdone, but now I I feel a little more confident.

Forget it... I still have no bottom, I can only promise that I will never use the knife.

Well, the length of the next volume cannot be estimated. It may be the longest volume in history. It may even be written in one go. It may also be a compressed plot of about two hundred chapters similar to the first or third volumes. , anyway, both the outline and the world line have gone crazy, and the remaining real historical world line is also shaky and will probably not survive the next semester. QAQ

All in all, that's about it...

Take a look...the number of words is more than the normal update!

this……

Today is the first day of the month. Well, sorry, I have to sort out the plot.

Then, please ask for a vote, please...

I will write the next volume well!

Good night, and good morning - to all those who believe in the existence of fairy tales~mua~

As for the time to ask for leave, it will naturally be on 8.1, and normal updates will start on 8.2!

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