End of the Volume

About the plot:

The first volume has two very obvious lines, which intertwine from the beginning of "Wind and Cloud Domination", then collide a little bit, and finally explode.

Needless to say, the growth of Xu Xiaoshou in the bright line is naturally, mainly talking about the dark line: the development of the world plot.

Take Xu Xiaoshou away, and the development of this world is that when "Wind and Cloud Domination" is in progress, Sang Lao suddenly returns to the palace, and prepares with the giants of the Spirit Palace, laying a big net waiting for the invasion of "Holy Slave".

"Holy Slave" has come, and the person who comes is unexpectedly the head of "Holy Slave", and the power of the Spirit Palace alone cannot take him down, so he has no choice but to let him go.

With the lessons learned from the past, taking advantage of the turmoil in the White Cave, Ye Xiaotian caught the information that "Holy Slave" might come to take away the Black Falling Sword Scabbard in advance, and sent a letter to the Holy Spirit Hall, but the Holy Spirit Hall was careless.

Only one Jiang Bianyan came, and even the masked man could not be taken down, not to mention that this time "Holy Slave" was also prepared and brought Cen Qiaofu.

After failing again, the famous sword was taken away, and the dignity was also ruined. The only thing that Linggong could keep was a black sword sheath.

Yes, if Xu Xiaoshou hadn't appeared, I'm afraid even the sword sheath would have been taken away by Luo Leilei.

This is an indisputable fact, which is also the most original attitude that the first volume wants to express. In the face of absolute strength, all struggles are vain and powerless.

And Sang Lao, with an identity and behavior that is almost an outsider, became the only chess master in Volume One.

The structure formed from bottom to top is actually Sang Lao's "cage theory".

Tiansang Linggong is like a cage. Whether it is Ye Xiaotian, Xiao Qixiu, or Qiao Qianzhi who are trapped, they are all powerless when facing real power.

This gray color is not only implicitly reflected in such a large environment, but also in small descriptions.

Such as Lan Xinzi's unwillingness to be a slave, everyone's confusion about Sang Lao's reckless character, and even Xu Xiaoshou's helpless apprenticeship, are also the same.

After all, at this time, even with the golden finger, Xu Xiaoshou can only be a chess piece, and at best he will jump around a little.

It is indeed very powerless!

The overall style of the first volume is not a refreshing article. It actually makes people feel powerless when reading it. Even if Xu Xiaoshou is full of wisdom and can carry a tripod, this kind of gloom is real.

It can be said that if it were not for the description of the protagonist's eccentric personality, the whole volume of Volume 1 would be a greater tragedy.

Some people say why Xu Xiaoshou is so crazy, can't he be written in a normal way?

Ahem, I dare to write, do you dare to read?

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About the trolls:

The plot conception has never fallen, and those trolls, to be honest, I really enjoyed watching them while writing the book.

When killing Feng Kong and Shao Yi, they trolled a lot, saying that no one saw or heard such a big noise.

Use your brain, Xu Xiaoshou swallowed a cinnabar in Ehu Lake and just exploded, and the man in black came immediately, and it was still Sang Lao who stopped him.

This previous plot has been reminded, how could it be possible that he didn't find it?

This is playing chess!

I should have realized that something was wrong long ago!

There is also a big criticism about the innate characteristic "Sharp Light" for the passive skill "Sharp" being restrained by Mo Mo's sealing power.

Brother, have you only played LOL?

Some passive skills can also be sealed. The setting of this book also has levels of passive skills, acquired and innate, which are clearly displayed!

No matter how strong the passive skill is, if you use an acquired level to fight against an innate spiritual skill, even if you can barely resist it, what about the master spiritual skill? What about the throne level?

What's more, these are not the point at all. A person who can slightly restrain the protagonist's golden finger, even Sang Lao and the masked man can't do it, and they also specially emphasize the small copper furnace, the small copper furnace...

What about the foreshadowing!

I should have discovered the blind spot long ago!

To be honest, I was really angry at the time and almost went to explain it, but I held back. After all, it would be irresponsible to the readers later.

It's okay to criticize other things, but I can't explain the plot foreshadowing!

Of course, I am not saying so much to stop you from speaking. You should still speak if you want to, but be careful with your tone. You can also speak out if you have any toxic points, but be careful with your tone.

Deleting and banning is a one-stop service. After all, there is only one option of permanent banning in my options! (Not a threat, dog head.jpg)

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About passive skills:

Compared to the conception of the plot that has lasted for a long time, to be honest, the concept of passive skills is really just a flash of inspiration before publishing the book.

Its only function is to make the plot fun and beautiful, well, that's all.

However, for the various developments of the passive skills in my conception, the first volume is only at a superficial stage.

Basic, extended, mastery, special passive skills... There will not be only these few major categories, there will be more fun later.

Not only the width is expanded, but also the depth. Each passive skill can basically be developed into something very strong in the future.

For this, Awakening Pool said that he can't wait.

Xu Xiaoshou has the ability to make money, but there are really few people in the Spirit Palace. The general environment makes it impossible for him to get a lot of passive values, so he can only put it aside temporarily.

Damn it.

But the next volume will be out of the palace, the little submissive out of the palace, just thinking about it is worth looking forward to!

...Hmm? Out of the palace? Out of the toilet?

Pah, out of the spirit palace!

Looking forward to it, right?

There are still many holes to fill, if you forget, remember to remind me, thank you, although it should be impossible to forget.

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About the results:

This book was put on the shelves on May 22, and it has been two months now.

The average subscription on the first day was over 500, and now the average subscription is almost 2,000. I hope it will be a fine product soon!

Wow, it's growing so slowly. There are so many collections, and the daily increase is not bad. Someone must have run to read it secretly.

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