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I have seen the comments,

Some chapters say that the typos mentioned in it have basically been changed. If you don’t change it, you don’t see it. I will not delete the comments. There are both positive and negative comments. If they are deleted, it is estimated that the official blame.

Let’s talk about the issues that have been mentioned more in the comments.

The first is the problem of too many boundaries.

Many people have responded that there are too many small realms, saying that it will be very procrastinating, but in fact I set up these small realms to be similar to progress bars, showing a little progress of the protagonist himself, and a small breakthrough will pass every three days. Like some early web articles, there are dozens or hundreds of chapters from the initial peak to the middle card, and it is extremely difficult to break through like a big realm. There is no good analogy.

The breakthrough is easy, and it doesn't matter how many settings, otherwise, like a certain Lu, if the realm flew to the sky in less than a few days, then this book is still a fart.

Then there is the question of perception,

The protagonist's talent is average, there is no doubt that a genius can master the techniques and martial arts after practicing three or four times. three hours.

As for the problem of frequent epiphanies, I actually have a setting for this,

But this is a long story. If you write it all in one chapter and you say that floods are a disaster, I will explain it later when I find a suitable plot.

In short, the setting of the protagonist is an ordinary person, an ordinary salted fish traveler in the new century.

Finally, there is the question of sentences.

In the beginning, one sentence by one paragraph was used to cultivate a concise narrative. If you can finish writing one paragraph, you should not use three paragraphs and four paragraphs to fill in water. As a result, many people responded that they seemed uncomfortable, and they changed it later.

As a result, you have seen it.

The narrative is not concise,

I was accustomed to pouring water into sentences and plots, and it almost turned into a flood. I wrote four or five chapters for a ring fight, which became protracted and lengthy.

Obviously, I wrote roughly two or three chapters in concise language, and the rhythm was just right for the arena battle that could be written, and finally dragged it to the top.

Later, many people said water, largely because I changed the way of writing.

So it doesn't matter,

What I wrote is not in RMB, and it is impossible for everyone to like it. Next, I will change back to the previous concise narrative style.

Of course there will be an improvement or two, but the general style I'll change back to before.

This style itself is actually a typesetting suitable for mobile clients. If you like it, you can continue to support it. If you don't like it, I can't help it.

that's it.

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