Chapter 1216 Chapter 1213 [I Heard a Distant Echo. ]
Chapter 1216 Chapter 1213 · [I heard a distant echo. ]
"Ding Dong!"
[You get the Drama Memory Lens · "The Maid's Rejection". ]
[Exciting: E-]
[Thrilling: E-]
[Profundity: E-]
[Elements: Western Fantasy, Relaxed, Cautious, Strategy]
[Overall Rating: 2]
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A lens appeared in Su Mingan's palm. This was his first "Drama Memory Lens".
The lens also marked the elements of "Western Fantasy, Relaxed, Cautious, Strategy".
In other words, if you want to write a serious drama, you need to put less "funny" drama memory lenses. If you want to write a Western fantasy, you need to put less "fantasy" drama memory fragments. Put the plot of the story in the right type, so that players with poor reading comprehension ability will not mix different styles of plots together.
At the same time, a new icon appeared in the lower right corner of his vision - it was a spotless white book.
After the line of sight stayed for three seconds, the page opened automatically.
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[Congratulations, you have become an apprentice creator! (Creator: a person who uses his own life as flesh and blood, supports the kingdom of ideals, and depicts stories.)]
[This is your creation editing platform. You can put the drama memory lens into the blank page to perform operations such as arrangement, fine-tuning, and artistic processing. ]
[At the end of the twenty-five days, the book will automatically end, and the story you wrote will be forever fixed in the book for score calculation. ]
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Su Mingan looked at the blank book in front of him.
He put the drama memory fragment in his hand into the first page. In an instant, the data of the book changed.
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[Story name: Unnamed]
[Creator: Su Mingan]
[Plot score: 2]
[Character score: 12]
[Logic score: 0]
[Philosophy score: 0]
[World mystery disclosure score: 0]
[Ending score: 0]
[Current elements: Western fantasy, relaxed, cautious, and strategic]
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Su Mingan looked at the first page of the book. After the drama memory lens was put in, the story was automatically generated.
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[At 0:30 on April 2, 182, Su Liujin woke up in bed. He (?), so he walked to the floor-length mirror and carefully appreciated his appearance. (Plot score +1)]
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The blank space can be freely used, which seems to be a space for the creator to fine-tune. Su Mingan clicked on the blank space, and the system provided him with several reference options:
Amnesia/Crazy/Unwilling to accept reality/Want to appreciate his own handsomeness/There are monsters in the mirror/He saw a Samoyed in the mirror.
“…What a mess.” Su Mingan complained.
It seems that he has to set the emotional tone and narrative style of this story now.
If it is a serious story, then "Amnesia" is the most suitable, which is also the most suitable for his own situation, and there is no need to establish a character setting. If it is a crazy narrative with a tendency to be epileptic, "Crazy" is better, and then you can write a series of crazy behaviors of the protagonist to trigger laughs and contradictions. If it is a supernatural story, then choose "There are monsters in the mirror" to create a horror atmosphere. If you want to write a funny story, then choose "Samoyed".
To write a good story for the World Tree, the character setting is very important.
The system said that the protagonist is the player himself, either playing the role as himself or creating a character to play. But no matter what choice is made, the ultimate goal is to raise the story's score.
So the question is - is his true character performance attractive enough? Can he support a highly rated story?
"I don't think there is anything attractive about me..." Su Mingan pondered and couldn't judge himself accurately. People are complicated and can't be fully summarized with a few words. Reality is not a story, and no one's life will stand on the standard line.
After thinking about it, he still plans to play the role as himself.
As for the narrative style of the story, he plans to write a serious drama, focusing on revealing the secrets of the world.
Then there is the fun of the plot...
"Funny point... I don't seem to have much funny point..." Su Mingan looked at himself in the mirror: "Funny point... Is the identity of the first player considered a fun point? It doesn't seem that fun."
Oops, his story doesn't seem to be interesting... Will the World Tree like it?
In this regard, the eight o'clock soap opera performance expert Noel and the female strong Feng Aotian novel taster Yueyue should be more familiar with it, and you can consult them later.
He filled in "amnesia" in the blank, and the text continued to jump:
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[After Su Liujin looked in the mirror, a cat-eared maid came in with a plate. He proposed the idea of going out, but was rejected by the cat-eared maid. (Plot score +1)]
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The story ends here, occupying only the first page of the book.
Su Mingan read it once and it was really boring. But he suddenly found that there was an editing symbol next to the book, and he could do a certain degree of artistic processing.
He didn't read many literary works, mostly philosophy and detective books. However, according to the story style that Yueyue told him, he processed it a little bit-
Soon, a story processed by Su Mingan himself came out.
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[Hmm? Strange ceiling, where is this? ]
[Su Liujin sat up from the bed and recalled that he was still talking with twelve alien heroes of unknown origin the night before. How did he end up in a foreign place overnight? 】
【A hint of surprise flashed across Su Liujin's eyes. 】
[——Could it be that I traveled through time and space? 】
[Standing in front of the mirror, he was surprised to find that the person in the mirror was extremely graceful and beautiful. 】
[Gazing at himself in the mirror, Su Liujin thought to himself - since God has allowed me to carry your body, no matter what your wishes are, I will devote my entire life to helping you realize your dreams. The dragon sings in the sky, how can I be confined to this small corner? 】
[At this moment, a cat-eared waitress pushed the door open and entered. Su Liujin proposed to explore this place, but was declined. 】
[Could it be that the original owner’s body is a prisoner’s body? Su Liujin's heart sank, foreboding that this journey of rebirth would be full of twists and turns. 】
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[Plot rating: 4]
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"Hmm..." Su Mingan read the story he had processed.
Something doesn't seem right...
Forget it, he decided not to interfere for the time being and let Noel and the others guide them later.
At this time, the system prompt sounded:
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"Ding dong!"
[Detected your residual dream...]
[You get the Drama Memory Lens·"Final Act: The red sun destroys Rovasa, and Ikuto kills Creation"]
[Excellence: A+]
[Thrilling degree: SS]
[Depth: A-]
[Elements: tragedy, apocalypse, decisive killing, big scene]
[Comprehensive score: 85]
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A blood-red lens suddenly appeared in his palm.
"...Does this count?" He realized that any key node in the player's experience would be transformed into a drama memory lens.
The rating of this plot is very high, which is an unexpected surprise.
Su Mingan put it on the second page, and the story instantly became confused.
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[One second, Su Liujin was still in the room begging the maid, and the next second, he suddenly appeared in the outside world. 】
[Broken bones covered the ground, blood flowed into rivers, and in the distant sky, a golden-red sun was setting. Su Liujin looked up and saw a young man with purple hair and purple eyes, lying in a pool of blood, kissing the broken bones...]
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"So that's how they are connected." Su Mingan understood. It seems that there must be logic between the plot and the plot. Otherwise, Su Liujin would see the end of the world inexplicably, and his logic score would definitely be very low.
For example, he has three drama memory fragments, namely [Woman Smiles], [Happy Life], and [Woman's Lover Dies]. The resulting story is: [When a woman sees her lover, she smiles happily. They lived happily together for a long time until the woman's lover died. 】This is undoubtedly a pure love story, very warm and healing.
But if Su Ming arranges it in the order of [the woman's lover dies], [the woman laughs], and [happy life]. Then the story becomes very scary: [After the woman's lover died, the woman smiled, and she and her lover continued to live happily] - this turned into a terrifying necrophilia story.
Therefore, the order of the drama memory lenses is very important - this is also where players can best exert their subjective initiative.
Even if your life is boring, if you arrange it carefully, maybe you can come up with a good story?
Su Ming'an tried to put "The Red Sun Destroyed Rovasa, and Ichibi Killed Chuangsheng" on the first page, and "The Maid's Rejection" on the second page. Sure enough, after the two plots were switched, the logic of the story became smoother. A lot.
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[Su Liujin had a dream. He dreamed of a young man with purple hair and purple eyes, lying in a pool of blood, kissing the broken bones...]
[After waking up from the dream, he found himself indoors...]
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"Much more reasonable." Su Mingan was satisfied. After adjusting the order, the apocalypse is just a dream instead of a sudden plot.
He gave the story a simple title and closed the panel.
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[Story name: "Global Travel: The Evolution of the Infinite World Tree Starting from the Forbidden Prince"]
[Creator: Su Mingan]
[Plot rating: 9 (a story not worth mentioning)]
[Character rating: 12 (superficial traveler character)]
[Logic score: 2 (no logic)]
[Philosophy rating: 2 (lack of depth)]
[World Mystery Exposure Rating: 8 (revealing a possible future)]
[Ending score: 0 (no ending yet)]
[Current elements: Western fantasy, strategy, rebirth, apocalypse, cool writing]
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[Your story: 378 words. 】
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"Ding dong!"
[When the level of the creator increases, you will also get functions such as "create supporting characters", "add emotional lines", "multi-line narrative", "realistic fine-tuning", "inspiration blending", "card participation", etc. expect. 】
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Su Mingan walked around the room to see if there were any clues.
Following the prompts from the [Clue Insight] skill, he dug out several books in the room.
"Blessings of God Lovasha", "Three Rules of the Nalan Court", "The Terms of the Iron Hammer and the Soybean Man", "The United History of All Living Beings", "Ten Speculations on the Rain of Rebirth", "The Hanged Man" Book of Prophecies", "The Dating Record of Thirteen Lovers of the Scheming Devil"... the titles of the books are dazzling.
He put the unhealthy book back and flipped through the serious books to learn about Rovasha's classification of gods.
"There are 27 gods that can be traced back to Luowasha." Su Mingan read:
"There are three first-level gods, six second-level gods, and 18 third-level gods."
"Let's take a look at the first-level gods first..."
At a glance, the complicated vocabulary made his scalp numb:
"Krichens, the Mother Goddess of Light, is in charge of birth, the sun, flames, and eyes. The emblem is the eye of the sun burning in flames, and all living beings lifting babies. There are six major organizations under her rule: 1. Knights of the Dawn. 2. Paradox Hermit. 3. Guardian of Order. 5. Temple Mountain. This is too long.
"Augustine, the God of Chaos, is in charge of chaos, riddles, fate, and miracles. His emblem is a vague fog of air and sea. There are six major organizations under his rule: 1. Wandering Sinners. 2. Wheel of Fortune . 3. The Hand of Chaos. 5. The Mist Gap Magician."
"The Demon Mother Goddess Isabel is in charge of the mirror, the end, sin, and freedom. The emblem is a devil's hand extending from the mirror. There are six major organizations under her rule: 1. Disasters of the heavens. 2. Arbitration of death. 3. The Pirate of the Law. 5. The Rumblings of the Past.
...This is all a mess.
Su Mingan really didn't know what the meaning of these terms was. Without conceptual explanation, he could only memorize these terms by force.
"The Shepherd in the Cage..."
"Cage what?"
"What are you feeding on in the cage?"
"What shepherd?"
After reluctantly memorizing it, he quickly read the following chapters.
He suddenly found a clue red circle under the pillow. I opened the pillow and saw a piece of paper. There are crooked words written on it.
This is... the note left for him by the original person.
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[Hey, the guy who wants to possess me, listen up. 】
[You are not allowed to do strange things with my body, and you are not allowed to fall in love. If you can do these two things, then look down. 】
[My name is Su Liujin. I don’t know who my parents are. Anyway, I have been living in the sea. One day I was suddenly knocked unconscious and was tied here. 】
[Let me introduce to you, this country is called Hongta. It is a country where multiple races coexist. 】
[People here call me "Your Highness" - but I live in the sea and have nothing to do with them, so don't be too indifferent. 】
[I found out later that this seemed to be because [Game Day] selected a princess from the royal family. In order to replace her, I became the unlucky new His Highness. 】
[I was captured from the sea just because of something like this, and why did it have to be me! 】
[I don’t understand why, it’s up to you. 】
[ps: I don’t know what race I am. 】
[PS again: I suspect they want to eat me, I suggest you be careful. I used to live in the sea, and things often wanted to eat me. 】
[PS again: Burn after reading. 】
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Su Mingan burned the note.
Seeing that there were no clues in the room, he covered the space and went out in secret.
The castle resembles a hexagonal crystal, with a dark blue spire rising straight into the sky, like a steel sword.