[Single Chapter] End of Volume Summary + Remarks

600,000 words, the second volume is over.

The first volume is 250,000, the second volume is 350,000. At this rate, as long as I finish nine volumes, 3 million words should not be a problem.

Actually, I originally expected to end with Peach Blossom Spring, but as I wrote, I ended up writing about Worry-Free City. Although I deviated from the outline, the theme did not change.

Worry-Free City is also equivalent to Tao Yuanming's Peach Blossom Spring, a harmonious society, and idealism.

Of course, this ideal was eventually destroyed by a shot from a mysterious boss.

I am barely satisfied with the ending of the second volume.

Compared with the first volume, the pace of this volume has obviously accelerated. The protagonist has hardly practiced, and the breakthrough is not divided into nine levels, but all of them are just mentioned in one go. It has both advantages and disadvantages.

(Mainly because I am afraid of losing the follow-up reading. If I read two chapters and lose all the follow-up reading, my mentality will explode.)

Some details at the beginning are not handled well, such as the part about entering Chuyang City, but when the emotions come up, it's over. In fact, it's not too reckless, and it indirectly affects a key character like Bai Qiushui.

The protagonist's Wuyoucheng inheritance section, the perspective keeps switching, which makes some readers who like to read quickly confused. I can only apologize for this.

Overall, it's not good, just keep it stable.

At the end, I deliberately let every character appear, more or less giving them some shots.

Monster Group: Xu Hei, Xu Bai, Hei Huang, Man Jin, Lei Meng, Monster Master, Er Gou, Vulture.

Chu Tian League: Xu Qingfeng, Xiao Chou, A Yin, Ku Xuan, Zhang Tie, Zhao Wenzhuo, Xiang Fei.

Qin State Forces: Qin Xuanji, Xu Qingzhi, Li Si, Lei He, Bai Luo, Zhou Wendie, Bai Qiushui.

Neutral Creatures: Tianji Shangren, Han Te, Liu Buqun.

I missed Wang Ding, and I'll make up for it in the next chapter.

Due to the limited length, this book is not a professional group portrait article. I can only try to create more interesting characters within the limited length.

This is the part I am most satisfied with. I am very relieved to see someone praise it.

As for the main character's fighting power, some people said that it collapsed when he was in the Qi Refining Stage, and some people said that it collapsed when he was in the Dan Formation Stage, but it seems that it has not collapsed since it was written.

(I have the experience of two long novels, so please have some confidence in me.)

As for the female protagonist, I don't know if it is a trend problem, many beast stories indicate in the introduction (no female protagonist, no transformation), which leads everyone to subconsciously believe that beast stories should not have female protagonists and should not transform.

I dare not guarantee anything here, I can only say that all the rules and regulations cannot restrain me!

I have to write a good story with my heart, instead of constantly suggesting that this and that cannot be written because of these rules, which greatly reduces the level.

It did affect me in the early days, causing me to not dare to create female characters, and the characters that appeared were basically villains and cannon fodder.

I won't do that later.

Of course, I won't write a female protagonist for the time being. Many new readers will run away when they hear that there is a female protagonist. It's not an exaggeration, it's very realistic.

So even if I really want to write it, I will continue to shape it until it is perfect, and it will become a female protagonist after everyone accepts it. Sorry, I can't write about the kind of free and unpaid stories.

I am honored to write the characters and stories in my heart and share them with you.

Let's talk about the third volume, opening the dragon vein.

The dragon scales in the first volume went against the will of heaven and killed the immortals by mortals.

The dragon bones in the second volume were born in worries and their hearts were towards light.

The dragon veins in the third volume are intended to write about humans and nature.

In fact, the last chapter of the second volume also revealed some content. As the guardian beast of the monster beast, once the monster lord has problems, the monster beast will be robbed.

This is the big contradiction of the third volume and also the theme.

The map changes to the East China Sea, where Penglai Island is located. It is here that Qin Shihuang sought the elixir in the history books.

I won't reveal too much for the time being. The third volume will be the one I put the most effort into.

I can't wait to open the code.

Stay tuned.

By the way, there is another character who forgot to appear. He didn't have a chance in the main text, so I'll put him in a single chapter.

Xuan Yangzi: "I am the villain in the first volume, but I survived to the third volume. I have to give it a ten!"

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