I’m Stuck, I Need a Day Off

I’m stuck, I need to take a day off…

I originally wrote more than a thousand words according to the detailed outline, but halfway through I felt that Chaton was a bit too weak in the description, and felt that he was too far behind the vice admiral, so I deleted this part.

But after deleting it, I started to struggle whether to give Chaton the fruit ability or to strengthen his domineering level.

In fact, if he is to be worthy of the title of admiral candidate, both should be strengthened…

But in this way, it seems impossible for the protagonist to defeat Chaton without exposing Mjolnir (thunder fruit) at this stage.

And then I feel that the combat power level of the navy and the pirates is seriously unbalanced.

I tried to strengthen Chaton as much as possible, but no matter how I think about it, I feel that he should not and cannot be stronger than Katakuri.

The vice admirals in the original work are even more difficult to describe. In the comics, the flying squirrels can hardly resist the Empress. When they are at the top, the vice admirals are only worthy of fighting with the small cadres of the White Group. The vice admirals are completely a bit part in the comics. Even two years later, they are rarely described as domineering...

I went back and re-read the contents of 1087 and 1088 comics. It would be better if I didn't read them. It's even more confusing. After Nika's awakening, the special effects of the battle scenes have completely changed.

I couldn't be sure after reading for a long time, what kind of arrogance did Garp have when he rushed towards the King of Evil Government, whether the conflict of justice that Coby broke through the King of Evil Government's arm was considered as the entanglement of armed color, whether it was reasonable to suddenly master the entanglement of armed color, whether it was normal for a ship of freshmen of the navy to not even know what the entanglement of armed color was...

It's a bit too far-fetched. In short, it's a writer's card. We need to think about how to adjust Chatun and the navy characters that will appear later, and by the way, we also need to think about how to make the protagonist master the entanglement of armed color and domineering color in the future to make it more reasonable...