End of Volume Summary and Preview
It took nearly four months to finally finish writing the part about Hoenn Alliance.
I’ve basically finished writing part of what I planned, but since the trailer at the end of the previous volume was “50% true,” it doesn’t matter if I write what I didn’t write in the future.
There are still many unsatisfactory aspects. For example, the plot of the Johto group was not well taken into account. The frequent changes in perspective in different worlds were not handled well. The battles were also average. The ratio between daily life and the main plot was not coordinated. The hole was not completely filled in. After unpacking it, Gullerton had a new system and enhancements, which led to the temporary change of the sixth person to Moon Bear or something... It was said that an update would be added, but it was only updated once.
I can still read other people's books if I have some problems, but I find it more and more uncomfortable to read my own writing.
But there is nothing I can do about it. Not everyone has the talent to write novels. I can only be considered a hard-working person and I will continue to work hard to make progress in the next volume.
The battles in the dozens of consecutive chapters at the end are a little too long. Not only does it look a bit watery, but I am not very good at writing battles and it makes me very tired.
From this volume onwards, Zhou You will no longer participate in any alliance conferences, and challenges for the alliance or championship are also expected.
But it’s really uncomfortable to write about such a high-level battle. It’s inappropriate to write about a strong character, and it’s inappropriate to write about a weak character.
Like Daigo directly gave me a distortion of time and space... isn't it a bit too strong?
It feels like it would be wisest not to involve high-end combat.
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Then, starting from the next volume, I finally let myself go.jpg
Preview of Volume 5 (5 Comes True):
Ash: Serena, why are you in Aldomare?
Xiaoxia: What on earth is that woman who kissed you just now doing?
Serena: Is it appropriate to conquer Latias with a sweet ball?
Wang Feng/Bai Yansong: Answer my call!
Fleur: Why! The orb sent to the sacred mountain for thousands of years was ignored by the super ancient elves!
Shijana: Shijana, I am the inheritor!
Shijana: You will regret it, Shijana!
Travel around: If you pick up small stars, you will get small happiness
Eden: If you pick big stars, you will get big wealth
Small victory: If you can win both, you will get your eternal wish
Xiaoyao: Reaching for the stars is the forgiveness of sins, reaching for the stars is the miracle of the night
Jirachi: Seize it, the star you desired
Rukia: Victory without sacrifice also exists!
Yushu: I want to cut off the fateful cycle of reincarnation that happens once in a thousand years in the Hoenn region!
Piper: Nooooooooo!
Jock: The withdrawal system of ptcg is really a bad civilization.
Green: Waves in the water! What a powerful Power!
Xiao Huang: Dolphin... Xia?
Kyogre: I'll beat the level 84 Dolphin Man with a lemon!
Ye Zi: Giant God Soldier?
Ajin: Qiaoqiao, gold coins exploded!
Xiaoyin: Is this Capital Falls?
Wang Luo: Why do you also have Giratina! ?
Douzi: Are you the curator of Qibao Museum? Yes, I want to collect the white stone at the gate.