Chapter 495 Zhang Yang Is Back!
On the day when the Wanhe Duoyu filming team and the four-member survival team set off.
After a week of painstaking research, Zhang Yang finally wrote the second version of the script.
For this script, he learned from his mistakes and did not accept Liu Ming's help. Instead, he wrote a simplified version of the script on his own.
That's right, Mr. Pu's specialty!
Just write the story outline!
Don't ask, if you ask, you don't want to write the whole thing.
Of course, this time Zhang Yang wanted Mr. Pu to read it first. If the story is suitable, he will deepen it. At that time, based on his own story, he will let other people in the department help to complete a little bit of details.
Last time, they worked hard to get a good script, but it was directly rejected by Mr. Pu, and they were upset for several days.
Especially Mr. Pu's last request, to add a plot of aliens invading the earth, directly scrapped their previous script.
The core is completely different, so it has to be rewritten.
"Dongdongdong~"
"Come in!"
Zhang Yang and Liu Ming came to Mr. Pu's office for the third time. Zhang Yang handed Mr. Pu a thin piece of paper.
"Mr. Pu, this is the script I wrote."
Mr. Pu was delighted when he saw the number of words.
"Well! From the appearance, it's improved!"
As a senior novelist, Mr. Pu naturally knows that the more words a novel has, the more interesting it is. Especially at the beginning of a new book, there is no problem with more words. You can delete and reduce them. In the end, only the essence is left. The rest can be simplified into a few sentences to leave suspense for the future plot. In short, there is no problem with more words.
If the number of words is less, the author is reluctant to delete every word he wrote, so how can he revise it?
Mr. Pu looked at the A4-sized script handed over by Zhang Yang and felt that it was safe this time.
Zhang Yang is back again.
The familiar sloppy script, just for business.
'It seems that my last suppression was very effective on Zhang Yang. I guess he is about to break the jar and break it. ’
Any screenwriter would feel miserable if a carefully written script was directly rejected and then rewritten, not to mention that the time was very tight.
Pu Zong took the script and started browsing.
Movie name: "Alien Forbidden Zone"
Story content: Alien spaceships landed in a certain area of the earth and began to invade the earth. Humans and aliens kept rubbing against each other. That place was called the Alien Forbidden Zone. The protagonist Da Zhuang was a reporter who cared a lot about his hairstyle. He thought that humans and aliens were both intelligent life forms and should shake hands and make peace. Then he went to the Alien Forbidden Zone alone and started a vigorous relationship with aliens. In the end, he moved the aliens with his emotions and let them leave the earth and become peace ambassadors between the two civilizations.
End.
Pu Zong: (°ー°〃)
Seeing Pu Zong’s expression, Liu Ming behind him was shocked.
It’s bad!
As soon as Liu Ming saw Pu Zong’s look, he knew that Zhang Zong’s script must be finished.
He had read it before he came and felt that it was like a random writing.
The collision between two civilizations actually stopped because of a person’s love affair?
Where is the logic? Where is the justice? Where is the law of darkness?
This is really a love story in the guise of science fiction. What is the difference between it and those crappy TV dramas in the market that are about love in the guise of fairy tales?
In the end, it's ridiculous that they become peace ambassadors!
He felt that President Pu would never want them to shoot such a thing.
Now, President Pu's attitude is the best proof!
'I should have advised President Zhang to write a new one. It's my fault for not doing my duty as a deputy. '
Silence, a long silence.
President Pu could have expected Zhang Yang to write a simpler one this time, but he didn't expect Zhang Yang to write these few words after a week of thinking.
It's not even enough for him to write in 10 minutes normally!
And this plot.
"Puff!"
"Hahaha! Zhang Yang, you are such a talent! I was right about you! This script, only you can write it!"
Zhang Yang asked nervously, "Then President Pu... am I qualified or not?"
Pu clapped his hands, "It's a sure hit! This movie will definitely sell well! Just write it in this direction! The main plot can't be changed at all, and in terms of details, you must keep in mind my four requirements, so that it will definitely be good-looking!"
Zhang Yang had to do it himself!
This story-writing ability is 55-50 with Dachun.
What a rubbish story?
From the short story outline, President Pu saw several poisonous points. If he wrote such a novel, it would definitely be a failure!
First of all, aliens drove spaceships to invade the earth, why did they stay in one place? It's also called the Alien Forbidden Zone? Can't they fight while flying? They have to have a ground conflict with humans, right?
If this is written, readers will directly criticize it for "lowering intelligence"!
Secondly, the role that individual power can play in the racial war is too small. The so-called changing the world by talking about feelings is probably something that only appears in Mary Sue TV series. If this movie is shot like this, it might as well be called "Aliens Fall in Love with Me"! Who knows, it might attract a group of young girls to go to the cinema to watch a love story that transcends races!
If they promote it as a science fiction film, this content will definitely be criticized to death.
As soon as the main storyline of this movie came out, President Pu seemed to see Douban's 4.0 score waving at him.
A complete bad movie.
Hearing President Pu say this, Liu Ming, who was blaming himself at the back, almost couldn't breathe.
(°ー°〃)
Pu Zong actually gave such a high evaluation? ? ?
At this moment, his screenwriting concept was overturned.
Zhang Yang breathed a sigh of relief: "I was scared to death. I almost thought that you were not satisfied with this script. I stayed up for several nights for this story. I lost a lot of hair before I came up with it. It can definitely meet your requirements!"
Pu Zong nodded with satisfaction: "Okay, I can see that you tried your best."
Sometimes, whether you can do a thing well has little to do with attitude, but depends on strength.
For top-level idiots like Zhang Yang and Dachun, the ceiling of strength is almost here.
Pu Zong continued to explain: "When shooting, you must remember that special effects are not the best, but the most expensive. It is best to have a little cheap feeling in the expensiveness, so that the audience can't see that we have invested so much money! By the way, try to give the audience some different experiences in special effects, and bring some physical discomfort. "
The plot is disgusting, and the special effects must also be disgusting!
The front depends on the script, and the back depends on shooting and post-production.
If these two points are controlled well, a bad movie can be born.
Facing Mr. Pu's request, Zhang Yang waved his hand and asked Liu Ming to write it down.
"Okay, Mr. Pu, is this film set?"
"It's a deal!"
Although Mr. Pu didn't know how "Shanghai Fortress" was filmed, the elements of failure were all gathered. Even if the plot was different, the result was the same.
He suddenly remembered what a celebrity in the film and television industry said in his previous life: "The success of good films is roughly the same, and the bad ways of bad films are a variety of."
The script has been basically discussed.
Zhang Yang asked: "Mr. Pu, who should we find as the director of this film? I don't think Wu Ma, who filmed for us last time, is very good. After all, he is a city drama film, and he has never been involved in the category of science fiction. Although he has some skills, that's all. Why don't we find a good director in China or abroad who shoots science fiction films? Anyway, we have enough budget!"
With a total investment of 360 million yuan, as long as you are willing to pay, you can invite well-known science fiction directors in the industry.
Mr. Pu's eyes lit up!
"Okay! Then let Wu Ma do it! I think your perspective on people is too narrow. Does it mean it can't be done just because you haven't done it before? Is it right that it has been like this since ancient times? From the first day I saw Director Wu, I felt that there was a sci-fi light in his heart!"
"Your film is shot with Director Wu, wow~ it's amazing!"
It's definitely a flop!
He won't know how he died!
Science fiction is not like other types of films. It can be directed by a cross-border director, which requires extremely solid skills!
The combination of camera scheduling, post-production, characters and special effects is extremely complicated!
Why are there so few science fiction films in China?
It's because the directors can't shoot it!
Even directors who specialize in science fiction may not be able to handle it. Can a small director who used to shoot movies for coal bosses make a good science fiction film?
Don't be kidding!
Just flop!
Mr. Pu's statement shocked Liu Ming again!
This time, it not only impacted his view of screenwriting, but also impacted his understanding of film classification!
Science fiction films can be shot casually? ? ?
Director Wu can really do it?
If someone else said that, he would have sneered, but Mr. Pu, he had some fantasies.
Zhang Yang didn't have too many ideas, Mr. Pu said it was okay.
"Okay, Mr. Pu! Then I'll go and make an appointment with Director Wu! I'll start shooting as soon as I finish writing the script!"
"Okay!"
Mr. Pu happily sent the two out the door.
Feeling Mr. Pu's special courtesy, Zhang Yang felt dizzy when he walked.
Even the department managers who made the most money for the company, Meng Xingkong, Li Pu, Liang Se Pi and others, had never enjoyed this treatment!
It was clear who was the talent in Mr. Pu's mind!
"By the way! Zhang Yang, after you finish writing the final version of the script, bring it over to me and show it to me. Remember, don't change the theme idea."
Mr. Pu instructed again before closing the door.
"Okay, Mr. Pu! Don't worry! The complete story will definitely conquer you!"
After closing the door, Mr. Pu breathed a sigh of relief.
Just now he thought of the last time before the filming of "For the Fans", the script didn't seem to be outstanding, it was very mediocre, but the final effect was amazing, becoming a classic of low-cost films, with a Douban score of 8.5.
This time, he must not make the same mistake again.
The final version of the script must be strictly controlled to prevent any accidents during this period.
You know, Duoyu Company has never lacked backstab monsters. An assassin may jump out of any corner and hit President Pu hard on the back!
Have to be on guard!
Back to the production department, Liu Ming, who was sealed for a long time, finally dared to speak.
"President Zhang, I think something is wrong this time! President Pu is a little too casual."
Zhang Yang said happily: "This proves President Pu's trust in us!"
"Okay, you go and contact Director Wu for the schedule, and I will continue to create my script!"
"Well, okay."
Although Liu Ming felt that something was wrong, he still went to work according to Zhang Yang's requirements.
But there was already a trace of doubt in his heart.
"Does President Pu really want such a simple story?"
"I don't think so."
He felt that there might be some shining points in the draft of President Zhang's script that he had not discovered, waiting for him to discover.
"By the way, I forgot to ask President Pu just now, which young actor should we invite?"
November 25, Monday, sunny.
It is suitable for adventure, but not for streaking.
There is a small island with an area of about 10 hectares, 31 kilometers straight at an angle of 38 degrees southeast of Ningliao Province.
This is a first-class island with rich natural resources and still maintains the appearance of a primitive forest. It looks green and vibrant from the air.
"It is really a pure land. It has not been polluted by humans."
On a white medium-sized passenger ship, Xiaoxing stood on the deck with a telescope and looked out.
In front of them is their destination: Mingsha Island.
They spent 600,000 yuan to rent this island for a period of 3 months. As long as they do not destroy the original landforms of the island, they can do anything.
It is generally the choice of rich people to come for vacation.
Bring various facilities to build a temporary villa on the island, and then hold a party like Hai Tian Sheng Yan.
Of course, there are also some scientific research teams to study professional content such as the microbial community of the primitive forest.
This is a beautiful island that is not allowed to be developed.
The program "Survival on a Deserted Island" filmed by Wanhe Duoyu and Duoyu Survival Four has begun filming.
In fact, they have been recording since the preparation stage. The camera follows the entire crew to record every detail before surviving on the deserted island, striving for authenticity.
Wow~
The waves hit the golden sand on Mingsha Island. A white passenger ship carrying more than 100 people docked at the coast. The sailors got off the ship and began to fix the ship.
On the coast, a strong white man in a jacket was waiting for them.
"Hi! My friend Xiaoxingyi, I finally waited for you. This is the wild big earthworm I just roasted. Do you want to eat it? It's big, plump and juicy. It should be difficult to see it in your city!"
Xiaoxing's sight followed Bell's back and saw several stacked stones, with several large leaves on them, full of burnt yellow strips of worms
Resisting the discomfort in his stomach, Xiaoxing nodded: "It can be seen that you are still a good cook. I don't need it. I just came down from the deck and felt a little nauseous."
Bell took a leaf and grabbed two and threw them into his mouth. He bit through the burnt yellow skin, and the juice splashed and burst directly in his mouth.
"Well, this is good stuff. The protein content is 7 times that of beef. It is a good thing to supplement nutrition in the wild. These days, the brothers who have been adventuring with me should eat this stuff."
Meng Xingkong, Liang Sepi, Li Pu, and Miao Sang, who just got off the boat: "."
The four people looked at each other, were silent for a moment, and started to board the boat together.
Especially Liang Sepi, who shouted: "I don't want to eat earthworms! I don't want it!!! Please, President Pu, please change someone, I really can't do it! I can't do it."
Although the others did not show it so obviously, they obviously twitched at the corners of their mouths and found it difficult to accept for a while.
Before they came, they had read some knowledge about survival in the wild from books, but a plate of exploding earthworms in front of them was still very shocking.
After a lot of chaos.
The four people finally got off the boat and stood next to the survival master Bell.
Li Pu took a deep breath: "I hope this time. I can bring a different surprise to President Pu."