Take a Day Off to Revise and Rewrite the Article

Take a day off to revise the story + rewrite

Recently, I have been complained that the plot is too watery, with a hammer here and a stick there, but I think it is much better than before.

In addition, some readers complained that the history is too much, but I don’t want to change this, because even now there are still many people who don’t know the historical details, and it is too difficult for ordinary history lovers not to talk about it.

Then about the speed of the plot advancement, it is clear from the name of this volume that at least the events before the Great Famine and the Year of Storm will be pushed to a climax.

As for the problem of the protagonist’s invisibility, in fact, the protagonist appears frequently, but usually behind the scenes.

In addition, there are too many plots in other countries and too few plots in Austria. I can only say that if you look at Austria, what do you look at if you don’t look at diplomacy?

Playing the berserker style? Eating land in big mouthfuls? It would be strange if Central Europe, this broken place, was not surrounded.

Regarding Mr. Hugo, he is a great writer and one of the writers I admire most (although he has been vilified on the Internet, in fact, you can always find "stains" if you want to find someone.), but this does not prevent him from struggling and hesitating in the face of the rapidly developing Austria in the book.

In fact, today's article has been written. It is about the struggle within the church and some guerrilla warfare in South America (nationalist fighters + Austrian mercenaries beating up the British + Argentine puppet troops). However, if it is released, it will probably be said that religion is not important at all. At the same time, I am blacking Metternich.

Metternich was once one of the greatest diplomats of the 19th century, but times have changed.

In addition, I have to study how to post Easter egg chapters. I think others can post them.