Fifth Life Ends, Review and Summary
I never expected that I would write 650,000 words in this life. It's too long.
I originally expected to end with Jindan, but the more I wrote, the longer it would be. If it ended with Jindan, it would be too slow, so I wrote about Qiudao Palace, advanced to Yuanying, and then another month or two...
The world view of this book is actually quite large, but I wrote too slowly and too slowly, and the process was very unpleasant.
I feel that I have corrected part of the lessons of Baishi, and then many new problems have emerged.
The destiny system, parallel world and other parts are well conceived, but the writing is not good at all.
I am still not good at writing stories with intense conflicts, otherwise when the destiny system comes out, Gu Luosheng's enemies should not be ordinary cultivators, and all kinds of pursuit and counter-killing should be arranged.
Unfortunately, the character of Gu Luosheng I wrote is still quite cowardly. Although he sometimes rushes, he will avoid disasters more often. It is impossible for him to rush with the Sudie family knowing that the destiny monitors the history.
In this case, Gu Luosheng can only go to other parallel worlds and throw away the original relationships and stories... Fortunately, destiny is crucial, and it is necessary to develop the story about this part, just in time to add rhythm.
Si Yueyi is a foreshadowing. It is impossible for a world to have no hidden bosses. She reincarnated many times in the era of Wanhua Lingcheng, and she was also predestined with Gu Luosheng, so when she was reincarnated in the immortal era, she was the only one related to Gu Luosheng. This fate facilitated the meeting of the two under Si Yueyi's tremendous luck.
But it's strange.
Other people's books don't have reincarnation cheats, and there are countless geniuses, all kinds of immortals reincarnated, and natural supremes.
I have reincarnation, but the protagonist didn't meet a few geniuses who could crush him.
To be honest, if there is no comparison, the reincarnation cheat is not good, and the story is not very reasonable.
It is true that Gu Luosheng reincarnated several times, but how many years are added up?
Five lives are only two thousand years!
The entire human race has a history of millions of years. In each era, there are protagonists of heaven and earth who stand out among billions of people. I think it is normal for such geniuses to crush the protagonists, just like it is difficult for ordinary people to get a good job, but some people rush to the top of the rich list with fireworks and lightning.
The right time, right place and right people come together. There are only a few among billions of people. How can ordinary people expect to fall on their heads?
Even if Gu Luosheng holds the Book of Reincarnation, he is only one of the billions of people. It is okay to crush ordinary people. To be on par with the son of luck, he needs to accumulate more.
Look, he has become a teammate with Si Yueyi, which can be regarded as participating in major historical events in a real sense. He will get fat directly, and his foundation will take off. In the next life, he can satisfy your invincible dream.
By the way, can I finish writing two million words? I feel that I lack confidence. I have never written a book with so many words. Every time I write more than one million words, I start to get stuck. (End of this chapter)