Complete Review

The author has previously written a chapter about the problems of this book, including the difficulties the author faces.

Each chapter is honest and sincere.

The author has written novels before, but is still a newcomer in the online literature industry, although the performance of this book is quite good (I am quite satisfied with it).

The author does not have much experience in mastering long novels, so he cannot control it when he writes long novels.

To be honest, the author has been writing novels for a long time. The earliest was written in a notebook in junior high school, which was confiscated by the class teacher. Later, he used a computer to write when he had the conditions.

The author likes to write novels. At first, he did not think about writing online articles. Later, his thoughts changed. He felt that self-entertainment writing was not a skill. Being able to find the greatest common divisor among the majority of readers was a skill, so he tried to enter the online literature industry.

Compared with most online writers, the author's road to success is relatively easy. This is also the author's confidence to be a full-time writer.

It may be because of the writing habits developed since childhood, which gave the author some writing experience, and he can use relatively fluent words without effort to describe and tell stories and pictures.

Therefore, I can make up for my shortcomings of not being able to tell stories and make rapid progress.

Let's get back to the point and review the mistakes made by the author in this book.

The biggest mistake is the author's mistake in grasping the "tone" of the book.

When the author was just writing the book and saving the manuscript, he had a preset tone for the book, which should be "the protagonist leads the wrong trend".

However, during the serialization process, because the author likes to read reviews, coupled with his own lack of writing experience, he can't grasp the long article, and he has no natural talent for storytelling, one result is that the tone of the book has changed. For example, the problem at the end of the fishing talisman made the topic that should have been relaxed serious, and discouraged a large number of readers.

What's more uncomfortable is that the tone of the book has changed several times, so different readers are discouraged over and over again. This is too fatal for a book. It is equivalent to erasing the possibility of growth.

For example, for a period of time, the author was disturbed by some comments and felt that the book was a "funny" type. Therefore, he imitated some "funny" books, but it was just learning to walk by Handan, which accelerated the life of the book.

This book does have some funny moments, but it is not the funny type. The author did not think about deliberately making funny things when writing the early plot.

It is this kind of style that has caused the book to lose quite a lot of readers.

Regarding the problem of "tone", the author will pay special attention to it in future writing and will never make the mistake of switching styles again.

In addition to the "tone", another major problem of this book is the lack of a main line.

The main line of the book in the early stage can be said to be "buying a house", but after buying a house, it really fell into a situation of no main line.

The protagonist has no goals, so there is not enough internal self-motivation, which leads to readers not knowing what the protagonist's desire is, what he wants to do, and what he wants to do. The author also lacks a line to control the overall situation of the novel, which indirectly leads to the book having no skeleton and the shape cannot support it. Finally collapsed.

The main line problem must be corrected in the subsequent writing. Avoid making the mistake of no main line again.

The third problem is the author's own problem. In recent years, the online reading volume is not enough, which leads to several extended problems: many story routines are too old, the supporting characters are flat and featureless, and the author himself is exhausted of inspiration, and can't think of talismans or plots.

Especially the fact that I can't think of the plot is also an important reason for writing to this point.

The author has run out of ink in his stomach, and his thoughts are no longer flowing. He has finished outputting and can't write anymore. He can only finish it hastily.

In view of this, the author will increase the plot intake in the next two months and read crazily to supplement inspiration.

Avoid similar problems in the next book.

The author will definitely start a new book.

If nothing unexpected happens, it will still be this account.

But the author needs to read books and study for two months, and the fastest time to start writing a new book is two months later.

If there are any accidents or difficulties, it will be delayed again.

But it will definitely be notified in the book friends group and this book.

The type and subject of the new book are not determined yet, and we will talk about it in two months.

Thank you readers who can see this, thank you for your support along the way.

The author will continue to work hard and strive to write better.

Let the book speak, the text can be broken.