Sitting All Night, Thinking All Day
Many readers have responded that the first few chapters are too watery.
I thought about it all night, well... it's a bit watery, but I can't think of how to simplify it.
The further a book goes, the bigger the plot, the more settings, and the more "water" it will definitely be.
It's impossible for the protagonist to work hard for a long time to level up, finally master advanced skills, and get top-notch equipment, and then go to see the villain and solve it with one move without saying a word, right?
There must be some cause and effect to show the effect of the level and the significance of the equipment, otherwise what's the point of training?
Therefore, the problem of "water" cannot be changed. I can only say that this is my personal writing style. If some book friends can't accept it, then goodbye, I have no other way. If I change it, it will collapse in minutes.
In short, today's update is to be updated, and yesterday's must be made up. I will start writing now.