Chapter 505: The Holy Son Attains Enlightenment and Breaks Through Again!

"Have you watched Douyin? I heard that this year's composition is terrible. Many students are crying online."

When Lao Mo was watching TV with Xiao Doudou on the sofa, Che Shujun came over with fruit, put it on the coffee table, and answered him with a smile.

"How terrible can the composition be? Whether it works or not, it's the same score." Lao Mo disagreed.

Che Shujun used to be a Chinese teacher, so she was a little unconvinced when she heard this, so she handed him the question and said, "You also took the college entrance examination. Come, take a look at how to write this."

Lao Mo thought that he was also a serious top student, so he took the phone without thinking, but when he saw the composition topic, his brows frowned...

Then, he defended himself with a gloomy face: "I haven't read "Dream of Red Mansions"."

"What does this have to do with "Dream of Red Mansions"?" Teacher Che Shujun "laughed", "See, if it were you, you would probably write off track."

"I've graduated for many years, I just forgot..."

Although he said so, Lao Mo had to admit that he didn't understand it.

As a pure science student, he really had no idea how to start with this topic.

So, he opened the comment area.

Xin Yun: When I saw this essay topic, my hands started shaking and my heartbeat quickened. Damn, I'm lucky I'm already a freshman.

"Haha, it's funny." This comment made Lao Mo laugh.

Then, continue to read below.

Zi Xi Sa Ma: No, what the hell is this? Not everyone has read "Dream of Red Mansions". What's in the mind of the person who made the question?

Hey, the same rhetoric as mine.

Hey Gulu Aha: I don't know how to write after reading "Dream of Red Mansions". Even if Cao Xueqin came, he would have to repeat the year.

See if I can fly: Jia Baoyu never thought that he would be scolded by the examinees for this matter hundreds of years later.

Dou Zhuan Xing Chen Bian: Hey, this exam successfully sent me, a child from the mountains, into the mountains.

"I feel that the kids taking the college entrance examination this year are going to collapse." Lao Mo laughed more and more.

"If this happened to your class, you wouldn't be able to laugh." Che Shujun said.

"Indeed, I have already anticipated how those little brats will make excuses." Lao Mo looked at Che Shujun and asked curiously, "Then how should I write it?"

"Well..." Che Shujun thought for a while and said, "It's very simple, just borrow and innovate, then criticize the borrowing that is not based on reality, and promote the significance of innovation."

"Is there only one direction?"

"Well, this question is actually quite bad."

Talking about this, Che Shujun commented with personal understanding: "It seems to have a lot of cultural heritage and combines traditional literature, but in fact it is also quite superficial. Moreover, there is actually no place to think about it. Just cover the previous one and just look at the last sentence."

"Then if you don't write in this direction, it will be considered off topic?"

"Yeah." Che Shujun laughed awkwardly, "In fact, those who have read the original work know that the paragraph wants to talk about 'human relations and worldly affairs'. So, children who have read "Dream of Red Mansions" will be disturbed in their judgment."

"That's good, the students in our class will definitely not read it."

Lao Mo was relieved at once.

"Do you want to talk to Chen Yuan about the college entrance examination Chinese?" Che Shujun suggested.

"I'm a math teacher, how can I talk to him about Chinese?"

"Just ask him what he thinks?" Che Shujun was very curious. After all, she had never taught such a good student, and she wanted to know how good kids do the questions.

"This..."

Just when Lao Mo was hesitating, a message came.

After he clicked it, he found that it was Chen Yuan.

Chen Yuan: Teacher, after the topic came out, I wrote an essay, and Xinyu also wrote it. I want our school's Chinese teacher to mark the paper

"Oh my God, isn't it just out?" Che Shujun was a little surprised, "Are all smart kids like this? They start writing essays without eating?"

"Only Chen Yuan would do this."

Lao Mo's mouth curled up with a satisfied smile.

So he replied: Then send it to me, I'll ask the school teachers to mark it

Chen Yuan: Thank you

Then, a few photos were sent.

After Lao Mo explained it clearly to Liu Fang, he asked her to mark the paper, and also asked her to let other teachers in the Chinese group take a look.

After sending it, Che Shujun also took the phone, eating cherries and nodding: "Yes, it's to the point."

"Didn't go off topic?" Lao Mo asked concernedly.

"For a student like this, it's basic not to go off topic." Che Shujun said with a smile, "Moreover, the sublimation is also very good, and a very good angle is found. It's really good, the pattern is so big at once, which is really rare for a science student."

"After all, it's Chen Yuan. If he can't write well, then no one in No. 11 Middle School can write well." Lao Mo smiled a little proudly.

"Don't be too proud."

At this time, Che Shujun also slightly suppressed her composure and said, "The content and topic are good, and the writing is also good, but there is still a certain gap from a very high score. For me, I should only give 52 points."

"Ah?" Because Chen Yuan has been praised all the time, Lao Mo is a little uncomfortable with the turn now, "But isn't this quite high?"

"Of course, this score is very high." Che Shujun agreed, but if it was Chen Yuan, she felt that the requirements should be higher, so she said, "But after all, it's Chen Yuan."

"I remember that he used to write 57 essays, so this time his performance is just average."

This is what Lao Mo thought.

"But after all, I have never taught high school, so I still have to see what the high school teachers think." Che Shujun said, "Anyway, it must be a good composition."

Good composition is indeed good composition.

But it also shows that the current Chen Yuan does not have the strength to be the top scorer in the college entrance examination.

………

"Is it innovation?" Xia Xinyu asked nervously.

"Yes." Chen Yuan said.

"That's okay, as long as there are no deviations from the topic." Xia Xinyu breathed a sigh of relief.

"But I have a hunch that many people will stray from the topic." Chen Yuan said, "For example, they will bias towards choice, and bias towards a thousand Harry Potters in the eyes of a thousand people."

"...Is it Hamlet?"

"Ahem." Chen Yuan changed the subject and said, "But if it really goes off topic, then the essay will be worth 36 points."

"This is a devastating blow to many people..."

"A score of 36 is still a prerequisite for a good score. If you are not very good at ordinary times, you might get a score of 32, which will directly ruin your college dream."

Chen Yuan has already thought about how many students near the undergraduate level will be completely GG this year because of their failure in the Chinese subject.

The proportion of students who go off topic is definitely not low.

Once the composition goes off topic, it will be sent directly.

"It took me a long time just to think about this question, but after the final review, I found that the previous materials were basically useless. Just read the last sentence." Xia Xinyu said happily.

"How was the writing?" Chen Yuan asked.

"I think it's still possible." Xia Xinyu is quite optimistic. After all, it's not difficult.

"Okay, let's order first."

Just like that, after finishing their composition on an hungry stomach, the two of them ordered takeout.

While waiting for the takeout, Lao Mo sent a message.

The two of them just looked at each other with great concern.

Lao Mo: This is the score after discussion by several teachers. I will send the comments to you later.

Lao Mo: Chen Yuan, 52 points. Xia Xinyu, 49 points.

Seeing these two scores, the expressions of both people were quite calm.

It seemed to be expected.

But, they are not satisfied.

Low.

"Baby, there's still a long way between me and the top pick." Chen Yuan looked at Xia Xinyu and said.

"Baby, there is a big gap between me and Huaqing Ji." Xia Xinyu also looked at Chen Yuan and muttered with a slight disappointment.

This battle also made the two of them realize that if it were them who took the college entrance examination this year, it would be difficult to get a high score in Chinese based on their current level.

"No." Chen Yuan shook his fist slightly and said firmly, "The composition must be strengthened."

"The next final is also the city's unified examination. I guess the questions will be imitated from the college entrance examination essay. For the next exam, I think we have to focus on this type of essay..."

"No." Chen Yuan raised his hand and said, "I understand clearly. Next year's college entrance examination, 95% of the essays will be the main theme composition."

"Is this the main theme?" Xia Xinyu asked.

"In fact, the direction of guidance is the main theme. It can be said that all current compositions and all propositions can be based on it."

It was decided that Chen Yuan would keep one hand for next year.

"Then let's start practicing from now on. Choose a sample essay template, accumulate materials, and try to write this kind of essay to the best possible extent." Xia Xinyu was willing to believe Chen Yuan.

"Well, from now until before the college entrance examination, we will practice this essay."

Chen Yuan has already thought clearly about formulating a series of examination essays.

He has also read the college entrance examination full score essays in recent years. Very few of them have their own connotations and meanings. Most of them are empty shells after careful consideration. But you must know that in a very short period of time, the marking teacher is appreciative. What can't be understood is the structure, the idea, the flashy prose, and the random allusions and golden sentences.

"Come on Xin Bao."

Chen Yuan stretched out his fist.

"You too." Xia Xinyu also stretched out her fist and touched it lightly.

Both of them understood each other's shortcomings under the 'blow'.

Chen Yuan, on the other hand, was a little curious: "I wonder how those opponents will perform..."

………

After Shi Yi wrote the composition, he sent it to the Chinese teacher and then waited in the study.

Composition has never been something he is very good at.

But he still has great experience in writing Chinese language topics.

So basically his Chinese scores are very stable.

In fact, he also tried, should he attack the Chinese language and rush to 140?

Then gave up.

For him, getting 450 in comprehensive science and mathematics is the ultimate goal.

He even thinks 450 is less difficult than 140.

After a while, the Chinese teacher sent:

I have discussed it with several Chinese teachers. As for the final score, there is not much difference. We all agree that 52 and 53 are about the same.

Can.

This score is completely acceptable to Shi Yi.

In fact, his Chinese language only includes composition and reading.

So if this is the case, the overall score in Chinese should not be weak.

Everyone has limits.

Shi Yi knew that he would not be able to get 146 in Chinese like the scholar from Jingbei.

But he was confident that he could surpass her in total points.

725 points…

Still 3 points away.

In the remaining year, his goal is to increase by another 3 points.

And if it is this score, he can win the provincial champion in any year within the last 15 years.

The harder he was chased, the clearer Shi Yi became. That is, only by getting infinitely close to the limit of human beings can he beat those two people.

If he reached the limit of human beings and still lost.

Then it is not his fault...

...

: We discussed it, and all the teachers who participated in the college entrance examination paper review discussed it, and they felt that it should be above 58 points.

: But your essay is not worse than the full-mark essays in recent years

: So, don't care too much about this score, that is to say, such an essay with beautiful handwriting and no typos is very good

Looking at the evaluation of the Chinese teacher, Liu Chengxi leaned back in his chair and smiled lightly.

He was not particularly excited.

But he was not crazy as expected.

It's just that he finally understood why the top candidates compared Chinese.

At least for him, Chinese is a vast blue ocean.

Since the last joint examination of thirteen schools, Liu Chengxi began to think about essays and full-mark essays.

Then, he also began to practice seriously.

During a monthly exam, his composition score was also very good, with a score of 56.

And this time, it was even higher.

Just as he was thinking, the door was suddenly pushed open: "Xibao, eat watermelon~"

"?!" Liu Chengxi was suddenly frightened and his body tensed, "You, how did you get in?"

At this time, Shen Yating was wearing short-sleeved shorts, looking very casual, and holding a plate of cut watermelon in her hand.

"Auntie cut the watermelon, so she helped to bring it in." Shen Yating went directly to his side, then picked up a piece of watermelon with a toothpick and handed it to his mouth, "Xibao, ah~"

After Liu Chengxi finished eating in a daze, he complained weakly: "You came, and my mother didn't even say hello to me..."

And like my mother, she never knocks on the door!

"We are all family, why greet each other."

Shen Yating smiled and sat on Liu Chengxi's lap, then looked at the composition paper on the table and asked in surprise: "You are also writing a composition? Have you shown it to the teacher?"

"I started writing after you handed out the topic, and I have shown it to the teacher."

Looking at Shen Yating sitting naturally on his lap, Liu Chengxi blushed slightly and gently hugged her waist...

"This composition topic is really outrageous. I seriously suspect that the person who wrote the topic has not read "Dream of Red Mansions". I almost got confused... Fortunately, the topic is clear, and I still wrote 50 points."

Shen Yating said while looking at Liu Chengxi's composition, and then her eyes gradually brightened: "Wow, this is too literary, isn't it? It quotes classics, is knowledgeable about the past and present, and talks about it."

"...Why did you use a derogatory word."

"That's great, what did the teacher say? The score must be very high, right?"

Shen Yating turned around and looked at Liu Chengxi and asked.

Then Liu Chengxi handed her the phone to look at.

"Hey, doesn't this mean a perfect composition?!" Shen Yating was stunned.

How did Liu Chengxi, who had not improved in Chinese before, improve to this level?

And the teachers in No. 1 Middle School are all examiners of the college entrance examination. They give such a score, which means it is worth such a score.

If this is the case, doesn't it mean that not only will he surpass me, but he will surpass me severely...

"About the same." Liu Chengxi was still very calm.

"Why are you so calm?"

Turning around completely, rubbing against Liu Chengxi's body, and then grabbing his waist, Shen Yating asked eagerly: "Did you sign up for some class and suddenly perform so well?"

"Strong..."

"Just the first sentence at the beginning... I have never heard of what you said."

"You don't care about current affairs."

"What's the matter with that poem? We definitely haven't learned it. And how do you know the ancient allusions that fit the theme so well?" Shen Yating was very curious.

So Liu Chengxi opened an app on his phone and handed it to her: "Just brush it once a day, it can meet most of the writing materials."

"What the hell, are you advertising?"

Puzzled Shen Yating was dumbfounded when she saw the software on the phone: "Isn't this the 'Youth Great Learning' that makes college students afraid of ghosts?"

Liu Chengxi's learning method is so unconventional!

"Why do I think it's quite interesting." Liu Chengxi said.

"You rely on this and get full marks?" Shen Yating continued to be shocked.

"I gradually found that essays can basically be written in this direction. In this case, if it is to expand the material, this software is very suitable."

Liu Chengxi even thought that everyone was watching this.

"Indeed, why didn't I think that brushing questions every day is the process of accumulating materials!" Shen Yating suddenly realized.

"I see a lot of people use this to write essays, and it actually helps a lot with writing."

"I learned it." Shen Yating benefited a lot and praised, "You are so strong."

To defeat Shi Yi, get rid of Chen Yuan's pursuit, and get full marks in the essay, this is undoubtedly a trick.

"I just hope the essay can be asked as I imagined."

Anyway, Liu Chengxi thinks that next year's college entrance examination should also be in this direction.

"Yeah, our Xibao is awesome, give him a reward." Shen Yating pursed her lips, and couldn't help but kiss him.

After all, coming to him to talk about study is secondary, and the primary purpose is of course to kiss him well...

And Liu Chengxi, of course, would not refuse...

And was looking forward to it.

Just like that, waiting for the lips to get closer.

"Chengxi, finish the melon..."

Chengxi's mother habitually opened the door and delivered the melon.

Then, she saw Yating sitting on her son's lap, holding her waist, closing her eyes and leaning closer...

"Sorry!!!"