Volume 4 Summary and Reflections
Volume four is over.
At the end of the third volume, the average booking was 729. At that time, I set a small goal. I hope that when the fourth volume is finished, the average booking can break through 1,000. I just checked the background and the average booking is 1397. The result must have met the set requirements.
It's a pity that there are some flaws in the content.
I spent three chapters writing the character of the golden snake mother-in-law. The original intention was to use her to express the three views and emotions of the protagonist, and to make Lu Qingshan's image more three-dimensional, but it seems that it did not play its due role, and because of the ink Too much also aroused everyone's resentment.
There is nothing to say. We are newcomers writing books. The biggest advantage is to be open-minded and learn from mistakes. I will learn from my mistakes and avoid this kind of narrative in the future. Don’t worry.
Fortunately, these photos were updated during the limited exemption period, and the bad impact should be a little smaller than imagined.
By the way, if you find any clerical errors or typos in the text, you can bring them up, and I will correct them immediately. Yesterday I asked the responsible editor for permission, and the VIP chapter can also be modified by myself~~
So, welcome everyone to catch bugs!
Then the next volume is the fifth volume, which can be regarded as the last volume in the early stage of the book. As usual, I will give a preview to the readers of qq.
Volume Five: [Seven Dao Sects]: Dongfeng puts flowers and thousands of trees at night. Even blowing down, the stars are like rain.
There is also a daily request for subscription, all capable readers, please give me a subscription, huh~
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[Some extra words] (nonsense, you can skip it. The character of Lu Qingshan is stuck in the back, if you are interested, you can watch it)
A book review was deleted today, but I forgot what it said, it was said by a trainee, and the original meaning was more or less: Isn’t it just restriction and exemption? Is this water necessary?
I was very angry at the time, so I deleted the book review and blocked it.
Because although these chapters have not been written well, they are really not in the water. In fact, it really took a lot of energy.
It is really unacceptable for me to say that I deliberately drink water because of the exemption.
It's hard to say whether it's water or not, after all, everyone has different opinions.
But I don't think there is one that specifically goes to the water chapter.
For example, the character attributes that everyone doesn't like, I never let it go in the chapters on the shelves, first put it in the free writer's words, and then put it in the summary of the testimonials, and never charged a dime.
By the way, let me talk about piracy. Piracy cannot be avoided, and I don't have much idea. After all, who didn't come from piracy? Not to mention that there are still many people who are still students, and the pressure to support the genuine version is really great.
After watching the pirated version, I can come to the genuine version to vote for two free recommendation votes, or praise the author, I am actually grateful.
But really, it’s not enough for you to go whoring for nothing, and you even chased after me to the genuine comment area to scold me, I think it’s unnecessary, it’s a bit unkind, right?
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Post the latest character card:
Lu Qingshan (Human race)
Occupation: Swordsman
Cultivation method: [Entraining Qi Technique] Lv10——[Spiritual Power +150]/[Returning to the Ruins] Lv20 (spiritual power +3000, spiritual power recovery speed +100%)/[Tao Cang] Jindan Chapter lv5 (spiritual power + 5000, spiritual power recovery speed +100%, qualification improvement)
Stage position: Jindan early stage
Experience value: 13w
Spirit power value: 9150/9150
Consciousness: 305/600 (mid-stage Consolidation)
talent:
[Natural Sword Type] (Legendary), [Rough Skin and Thick Flesh], [Specialization]
【Trap】: Current damage bonus 5*3=15%,
[Swordsmanship Affinity] (Intermediate): The experience value required for swordsmen to learn and upgrade swordsmanship is reduced by 15%,
The experience value required to learn and upgrade skills other than sword skills is increased by 15%, and the damage of sword skills is increased by 10%!
[Body of Pure Yang]: Swallowing a grain of golden elixir into my stomach, I realized that my fate was beyond my control. Get the golden elixir avenue, you will be free from all diseases, and you will not be afraid of the cold, and your lifespan will be extended (500 years old)
[Spiritual Power Control] (Advanced): Current bonus: Spiritual Power Amplification +30% starting
Skill:
1. Five elements sword armor (five elements are complete) --- a third-grade sword armor that can resist the attack of Jindan monks.
2. [Falling Bright Sword Art] max! Note: improved
3. [Secret Sword·Chop Wind] lv5 (6504/12000): consumes 10% of the upper limit of spiritual power, the next attack will cause two additional attacks, the second attack damage value is 80% of the original damage value, the second attack The damage value of the three-stage attack is 50% of the original damage value.
4. [Secret Sword · Town Sky] (Sword 1) lv1 (0/50w)
Skill Effect: Cut out three swords with five times the power.
Explanation: The power depends on one's own cultivation, the higher the cultivation, the greater the power.
Supplementary Note 1: The Sword of Suppressing Heaven is infinitely powerful and has a great load on itself, so use it with caution.
Supplementary Note 2: This secret sword cannot be superimposed with other sword styles.
5. [Yuanshen Imperial Sword Art] lv13 (10700/40000): Divine Consciousness +35 噺⒏⑴The full text of the text is the fastest んττρs:/м.χ八一zщ.còм/
6. [Flying Sword Art] max! : In the current normal state, use the dragon bird sword to cast the flying sword: 7 times the speed of sound (in the state of killing sword intent blessing: 12 times the speed of sound)
7.【Spiritual Perception】
8. [Invisible Sword Escape] lv5: can move with the flying sword Distance: sixty feet
9. [The Power of Mountain and Sea] (Supernatural Powers)
Natal Sword Slots:
1.【Dragon Sparrow】(Fire · Natal Sword)
Quality: Daoist
Level: LV3 (0/100w) - [All sword skills performed through this natal sword damage +30%]
Effect of magic weapon: As a weapon of the great way, the power of this sword will no longer have an upper limit, and it will depend entirely on the sword master's cultivation.
Supernatural powers: [Dragon's breath], [Squeaking], [Breaking spell], [Sword Spirit]
2.【Peach Blossom】(Wood · Natal Sword)
Quality: Mid-Rank Celestial Artifact (Sword Embryo, Can Be Upgraded)
Current upgrade needs: sword level greater than lv4, two taels of dry dragon wood, six taels of Bauhinia god copper, nine taels of mutton fat white jade essence, and four taels of earth dragon essence.
Level: lv1 (0/5000) - [All sword skills performed through this natal sword damage +5%]
Supernatural powers: [Withering], [Immortal] (passive), [Immortal]
Sword intent:
[Causal sword intent] (incomplete:?): One of the original sword intent...?
【Slaughtering Sword Intent】(Weak): The ultimate attacking mood can be blessed with powerful lethality.
[Immortal Sword Intent] (prototype): The original true meaning, with the power of immortality and evolution