February Has Passed, Let’s Summarize

Entering a new volume, the feedback is not good. After thinking about it, I have some conclusions.

Yu strictly followed the outline, the main plot did not deviate, and the context was very clear. There was no problem in this regard.

The reason,

First, some readers don’t like the plot of the alien world.

This book has more than three million words, and it basically covers what happened on Earth. But from the beginning of this volume, the protagonist enters a different planet and the environment changes.

Switching on the map and changing the environment caused some friends to not adapt. Moreover, the entry point of the plot is not very good. We should not start from the "flat push" atmosphere of the three northern provinces. We should directly enter those powerful and untouched areas, enrich the species and worlds of alien planets, and at the same time, add the things that should be included. The foreshadowing is all laid out.

After Pi Shen mistakenly entered the alien ball, he maintained a strong posture as always. With the upgrade of the quality of star skills, these are inevitable products, so when they saw that Pi Shen was still destroying the world in the alien ball, some book friends You may feel a sense of disparity in your heart, feeling that the setbacks you imagined have not yet come. Isn't that how Yiqiu should be? Having said that, the strange ball is indeed scary, but it also depends on who comes...

Jiang Xiao is obviously the kind of person who is a top student wherever he goes. He is different from the fake top student who ranks second in the class of the small county high school. He is a top student in the high school in the small county and is also a top student in Imperial University. ...

Secondly, it may be because in the previous chapters, Yu concentrated on writing to improve his star skills within a few days. Some readers don't like the chapter about upgrading the quality of star skills. After all, the qualitative changes of most star skills are in "Platinum" and "Diamond" quality. Upgrading to Candle Moon quality has no qualitative change, only quantitative change.

This is easy to change, after all...most of the star technicians have graduated~

Thirdly, Yu has been trying hard to maintain the style and try to write as relaxed and joyful as possible. I thought everyone should feel relaxed and happy when reading, and read for entertainment, but some readers are not satisfied.

There should be no problem with the protagonist's skin. Book friends just watched the little poisonous girl skin it all the way. After all, this is the only "main line" of the book. Those who didn't want to watch just cursed and left long ago, and Yu had long been used to it.

Therefore, there should be something wrong with the companion.

The character of the blind girl is not likable, and it can be seen from the data on the page that it might be better if Jiang Xiao's teammates were replaced by Erwei or Xia Yan at this time.

This is what writing online articles is like. Book friends provide real-time feedback and the author improves in real-time. Regarding the problems summarized above, the Education Association will work hard to correct them.

The book has now written 3.65 million words, and it has already entered the final stage. You must not "get old and lose track". I will focus more, tighten the strings, hold on, write the final stage well, and ensure the style. On the same basis, we will strive to improve the quality of articles and close the end of the book.

In books, there are highs and lows, excitement and dullness.

Uh... How should I put it? The Education Association will adjust it as soon as possible. Thank you to the book friends who persisted during the trough period (scratching their heads)

?(′???`) refill

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So, three updates tomorrow? (￣.￣)